Establishing the Savareen Medical Facility

Dymion

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What is going to happen in your plot?
  • Cora Senith will work with various members of the Galactic Alliance to gather the funds and materials needed to operate a medical facility on Savareen for the rebel forces.
What other players will be a part of this?
  • Rimrald
  • Vosrik
  • Cazar
  • Coach
  • Bran
Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
  • Spaceport on Manaan
  • Savareen
  • Mandalorian Space
Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
  • Travel to Manaan and meet with a representative from the Manaan rebel cell, Migs, to establish a supply line of kolto to Savareen.
  • Work with a middleman by the name of Wyatt Solus, who is looking to reestablish connections for his business while potentially assisting rebel cells. Cora hopes that by helping the Mandalorian, she can earn some credit with him, giving her actual credits and an early supply line.
  • Meet with Rex Wolfbane, an independent smuggler who might be a good source of medical supplies. Arrange a deal with him, using his ship to transport any additional supplies for the facility to the planet in the future.
What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
  • Cora is working to gather the necessary resources to operate a medical facility on Savareen, following the destruction of the rebel base on Dantooine.
Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
  • No
 
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Hey there, @Dymion!

Several things: it's Savareen, how many threads are in this plot and is there opposition you would care to mention? Dice, DM or Open PvP? With submissions, unlike most standard essays, simple bullet points are often more preferred than complete sentences and structured paragraphs. Still, I do enjoy the detail and effort here!

Tagging @Minuteman75 for thoughts.
 

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@Deviant I've fixed the error of misspelling Savareen, and have reformatted to the suggestion mentioned. I currently have a total of three definite threads for the plot, and am working towards more. Opposition is planned for two of the three threads: a potential criminal group will threaten the operation with Wyatt Solus, and negotiations on Manaan will be opposed by local law enforcement. The means of operating these oppsing forces is currently under negotiation with thread members.
 

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Quick edits @Dymion! You didn't have to change it but you did, and I am pleasantly surprised.

Length and opposition looks awesome! However, given the Alliance already has Savareen under control, I understand now there's no need for that kind of opposition. You can just go with the flow, maybe give dice or DM a go for one of the threads, whichever you feel! I will also add, however, that you create a lore article concerning your medical facility for approval.

Sorry, lots of hoops to jump through but if you need help, I am more than happy to guide you!

Aside from awaiting @Minuteman75's thoughts, this is approved on my end.
 

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The Alliance can’t go wrong with getting a medical facility. As long as the place is not found to be a rebel owned by the public then this plot has my approval.
 

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It's a done deal then.

Approved!
 
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