Emotionless - The Training of Niona Telbach

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Niona waited, standing in the middle of the training room. Her hood covered her eyes, and she stood silent, arms folded across her chest. She was dressed in her favourite ebony robes, and her crimson-bladed lightsaber was strapped to her side, just visible through her robes. She was waiting for her master, a Dark Master by the name of Menkio. Today she would finally begin her training to become a Dark Crusader.
 

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Menkio had stood up, and awakened from his 25 minute rest, that's all he needed, he had already did his usually stuff, as he got dressed, His Dark Master Clothing on, his belt, socks, shoes, comm link, a Bag around his shoulder, three lightsabers, And a Dark Master's robed that was hooded.He walked out of the room and headed sorely towards the training room. As he had entered. He didn't even Glance at the woman or acknowledged her all he said was."Sit now." as he leaned on the wall he waited for the girl to sit, so they can begun there training.
 

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Niona smiled, sinking down to the floor slowly and gracefully. It pays to be respectful to her master... for now, that is. When she was a Crusader, perhaps things would change.
 

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Menkio then spoke looking at the other side of the wall."Introduction time, explain your history of the past present and your future, I don't want protests." He said slowly, last thing he needs is another cocky student. He waited for her to speak and answer his question.
 

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Niona smirked, rising to her feet. She spoke now, which was a rarity in itself. It came out as more as a hiss. "I am Niona," She said simply, eyeing Menkio coolly.
 

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Menkio slapped his Forehead."I am going say this nicely and lay down the rules, I already do not like you, and you disgust me, so here it it is. You are to speak when told, and answer correctly, or be punished heavily, You are to Know you place and obey every command I give you.Failure will result in Punish if you continue death.I ask you again, Answer my question correctly, You have gotten away with a warning, don't think I will let you go unpunished if you answer incorrectly." Menkio Said calmly.
 

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Niona decided she liked this master. "I grew in the Temple," She said simply, divulging nothing more about her history - which she could not remember herself.
 

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HIs fist, curled in a ball and he had vanished from view, and appeared in front of the women, in a blur of speed, his Fist impaling with Force, as he drove his fist down the table causing the table to break into pieces, and a massive wave of a force fist, to hit her hard, or to try and hit, her. If this was to hit, she would be sent flying across the wall into the wall, and dent it. Her left and upper rib cage broken, but that's nothing Menkio can't heal alter."Wrong, answer try, again and if you answer correctly I will Heal your body." he said slowly, before sitting down on the ground and closing his legs and eyes. He had no mercy for people like her.
 

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Niona simply let herself fly backwards. She hit the wall, but the force cushioned her and she simply slid down and stood on her feet. "I have told all their is to tell," She said in the same, hissing monotone.
 

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His patiently nearly snapped before he spoke again."Unless, you wish to have every bone in your body broken, Then tell me about your past, or write it down. At least." He told her to, he gave her a small Break pass.From the punishment.
 

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Niona looked slowly up, into Menkio's eyes. "I have no past," She hissed.
 

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Menkio's left eye Twitched, HE was going give her one more chance, before he disfigured her chest."Last, chance, answer correctly or write it down, or pay harshly." He told her slowly.
 

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"The Bogan are my past, my present, and my future," Niona said, hissing but her snake-like voice unwavering.
 

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Menkio had vanished yet another time. He had then used appear in front of her. With a Sword. In his hand, he impaled the sword right into her, Left chest, sighing missing to not damage her properly, and making a deep, cut before trying, for another cut, along her neck, it was small hopefully it hit. He spoke."Get, your self, treatment and meet me back tomorrow to begin your real training."He told her calmly.
 

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Niona was sliced twice, but drew her lightsaber and slashed back herself. This would unexpected, as Menkio would assume she had no lightsaber. He was standing behind her and talking too, it would be completely unexpected. It might just kill him.
 

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He eyed her while, he looked at her body motion, And used the force to send her deeper into the wall break the thing.Her lightsaber would be flicked out of her hand. Before he spoke.Never disobey my orders understood. Bec-" He was cut off as he noticed a lightsaber from his her hand, He flicked his wrist out and summoned her blade, before acting his lightsaber and cutting it in half."You will never get a lightsaber doing your training, and If you dear, even am pet to strike with my own, I will rip your head to shreds. He said slowly, looked at her and sighed.
 

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Niona turned slowly, the first drops of blood splattering down. She pulled down her hood, her eyes looking deep into Menkio's own. She was an Anzati, she would mesmerise him easily. In fact, she had already felt his love for women. Behind the cuts, she was beautiful. Her eyes were swirling now, seductively. She was going to drink his soup, she needed to regenerate, she was in so much pain, it was hitting her now, like a brick wall. Any man would find her irresistible, and fall into a deep trance.
 

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His body, ticked. As he came closer towards the woman before shaking his head what the hell he thought, he raised his arm out, and tried to lift her towards the air, her throat would be begging, for air and help, it was a matter of seconds before she would die, normal if he chose to let that happen but he allowed her to live. He looked at her and spoke."Y Our bloody looks, are meaningless you got me by surprise once, It won't happen, again I want you to repeat the words I say, Before I let you go. "I will Obey Master Menkio, As If I was his Slave Pet? Do We make ourselves, Clear." Her looks were now aiming at him he appealed more presser to her neck. Trying take his emotions away from him, so he won't fall for her that easily next time.
 

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OOC: Hey guys, please see the revised training guidelines if you haven't already. If you'd like to train in threads like this then that's fine, but it doesn't count towards becoming a Crusader.
 

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Niona looked deep into Menkio's eyes, deeper and deeper. He would fall into a trance, at least enough to let her down from the choke. She began to feel her lungs burning, she hoped this would be over soon. This man was clearly unworthy to be a Dark Jedi.
 
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