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Emilgotha

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”Oh joy”

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Full Name:Emilgotha
Age:26
Hometown: Dromund Kaas

Bloodline:House Goth of Bellum and Clan Ordo by blood

Height: 5’6
Weight: Average weight for a fit female of her age, as one would expect from a Jedi.

Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Black
Skin Tone: Caucasian

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Personality

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Most have come to refer to Emilgotha as a distant, sometimes abrasive loner; This is due to Emil not trusting easy and in her own words "Not being taught on how to be a person". Her father was a anti-social bounty hunter, teaching her how to fight, survive and various other things. This did not leave time for socialization.



Also like her father, Emil has adopted a strange sense of morals, not caring for death ("I've learned to accept death" in her own words) but still protecting those in need, she just won't be upset if they die and move on with her life. She also maintains a rather somber and stoic demeanor, which betrays her insecurity and regret, and if pressed about her past and such, she is prone to mentally shutting down.

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Skills
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Due years on the run, Emil is quiet the observant person, noticing almost every detail, to the point of almost becoming Padawan obvious. She also is skilled in dueling and general fighting, adopting a rather dirty style that involves biting, kicking the groin and so on. Her primary form, Djem So, is standard except for this love of dirty techniques. Although, if against a more experienced fighter, this can be negated or turned against her. She is also rather proficient with a blaster, keeping her father’s blaster pistol on her along with her lightsabers. It's not easy to gain Emil's trust, and she sometimes makes rash decisions, not thinking fully on the consequences or what can go wrong. Another skill learned from her father was that she knows, though not fluent, in various common languages, such as Huttese, Twi'leki and some Mando, which Sasko learned during his time as a Bounty Hunter to help him in business transactions. She also knows her away around Corellian culture, due to her father loving three things- Her mother, Emil, and Corellia. She's also a pretty good liar.



Emil is ambidextrous, through she prefers her left hand, a trait she keeps hidden, as “the only fair fight is one the one you lose”.

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Emilgotha was born on Dromund Kaas to Vadgotha, a member of the Goth's, the leaders of the planet of Bellum and allies of the Sith and Sasko, a Corellian bounty hunter turned slave after being captured by the Sith. Compared to most, Emil had a rather nice upbringing, full of parties, games, and riches. But Emil never cared for it, for she was a loner even at a young age, pestering her father to teach him his knowledge of poisons, choke holds and various ways of killing man or beast. In fact, Sasko often joked that Emil would become a famous bounty hunter one day. The only thing else she cared about was drawing, often escaping her mother's estate to find a spot to draw, and only her father or mother ever found her in these adventures.



At age 10, only days after her birthday, assassins broke into Vadgotha’s estate, the guards gone. Her mother and father fought off most the assassins, but one, named Dardas, an expert at his craft, defeated them and killed Vadgotha right in front of Emil’s eyes, using Sasko’s old sword. Dardas gave Emil to the Sith and took his pay. A childhood friend of Vadgotha, a Sith known as Harvilus became her master, though Emil remembers little of her time under his tutelage, except that it was harsh and that she was often taken into a room full of medical equipment, before being forced unconscious. This went on for six months, until one day Emil awoke to see Sasko beating Harvilus head against the floor, a pool of blood emerging from his head. Her father had escaped Sith custody, leaving a large trail of dead soldiers and Sith in his wake as he searched for Emil, and somehow got into the Academy to get her. They got off Korriban with the help of an old trader, Iiader, but his old freighter could not get to Republic Space without being shot out of the sky.



So, for the rest of her teenage and young adult life, Emil learned how to live as a fugitive, and soon acquiring both a death mark and a large bounty to be taken dead or alive. Two years ago, that changed. Sasko had finally managed to convince a crime lord to let them into Republic Space, but the crime lord tipped off the Sith. As they waited for the Ragon to stop their search, the two camped in an abandoned storehouse, Emil watching from a window as the Ragon searched for them. Sasko suddenly pushed her out of the way, a high energy bolt from a sniper rifle hitting him square in the chest. He died in her arms, forcing an unprepared Emil to fend for herself.




But she met a group of smugglers, Viperis, Edwith and Zivamen, all former soldiers who agreed to help her escape, if she helped them. The smugglers became the first real family Emil had, and Edwith became like a brother to her, being the first person that treated her not a fugitive or daughter of a Sith, but as a person.



In fact, when Emil was captured by Palyus, a Ragon who’s lover and master was killed by Sasko, Edwith was the one that convinced Zivamen and Viperis to get her out. It cost Viperis his life, but it taught Emil that these people did indeed care for her.



The trio entered Republic Space, and a year could pass before Emil decided to join the Jedi Order. Deciding to fake an Corellian accent so people don't question her about her past, but though she won’t say it, due to being used to keeping secrets and only talking when necessary, she hopes that the Jedi will...heal her, letting her live a normal life compared to her ‘old’ one. Emil’s goal in life is to become ‘normal’, start and raise a family and die under a roof she can call her own.

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-One notebook, which contains her drawings and personal notes

-One old notebook, which contains the drawings from her childhood before her life was...turned upside down.

-One necklace with a locket containing a picture of Sasko and her at age nine.

-Her father's blaster pistol, a heavily modified heavy blaster often used by Sith forces, given to him to by a researcher named Maosu. Has higher stopping power, better accuracy and is heavy enough to use as a club if needed.

-An Axis 223 Blaster Pistol

-Her fathers helmet and armor, which is of Mando design. Resized to fit her. Gauntlets are lightsaber

resistant.

-Her fathers vibrosword, which is sort of like Corvo's sword from dishonored.


-Two Lightsabers, one yellow and one blue. She alternates between using only one or two, mostly keeping the second as a backup.

-Shoe daggers, custom-made by her father.

-One Risque Sleeve Derringer


-A Vibroknife that looks like a communicator unless under intense inspection.

-PM-4 Mines

-C-03 Caltrop Grenades


ROLE-PLAYS:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/building-the-foundation.66020/-Building the Foundation with Algarus. Emil meets her new master-Adun Umari.
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/pier-pressure.66426/-Pier Pressure with Deviant and Raydo.
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/catch-a-glimpse.66918/#post-1272063
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/rising-suns.66223/
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/planting-the-seed.66449/-Emil learns how to control plants with the force.
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/a-night-to-enjoy.66872/

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RELATIONSHIPS:
Edwith-One of the smugglers to bring her to Republic space, Edwith is a jolly fellow, one of the greatest mechanics in the Outer Rim, according to his friends, who would probably be a good Jedi if he was Force Sensitive. Edwith was one of the first people to treat Emil as a 'normal' person, not as a fugitive or runaway daughter of a Sith Lord, causing a brother-sister relationship to form between the two, through Zivamen often jokes that there is something more....which may or may not be true.

Zivamen-The other smuggler who brought Emil to the Republic, Zivamen is a former pilot who worked for the Sith. Zivamen is a womanizer, but isn't a asshole about it, loving two things-his ship and women good in both looks and personality. Zivamen ignored Emil in that aspect,choosing to 'leave her for you, Edwith".



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hey! if you want to put her picture directly into the profile sheet, just use the [im^g] [/im^g] tags around the direct image url, only without the "^". :)
 

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I would recommend not using parentheses unless it's for a different unit of measurement. It's easy to use commas and such instead. Also, instead of her age you put human on accident. And, check the bolding on some of your stuff.
 

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.....How in the fuck did I manage that?
 

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Your thread title is ten words, two parentheses, and one comma.

That sentence is eleven words, two commas and a period.

Perhaps you should shorten it, the addendum detracts from the fact that this is a character profile and makes it seem like a request to be apprenticed more than anything.

Maybe I'm just nit-picky.

Maybe it's Maybelline.
 

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Quick question that is probably obvious.

Since Emil is the escaped daughter of a Sith Lord, and her father (and by extension her) killed several Sith and their mooks, would Emil have a sizable bounty on her?
 

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My comment I meant to post last night...

A lot of this doesn't seem to apply to our current timline. The sith piece will need to be addressed by Sith leadership before I can approve the profile for the Jedi. @Dakota @Saul @Sapphire Storm @Marf
 

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@Gaiaverse

I don't have an issue with the usage of Dromund Kaas and high-ranking Sith figures, but the Sith aren't an Imperial power in this setting. We're the Sith Brotherhood, not the Sith Empire, and only rule a tiny sector of the historical Sith region, as you can see here. Also becoming a fugitive and a killer at age 13 to 14 is absolute nonsense, she would still be a child at that age. I'd say late teens or early 20s was more realistic, unlikely, but it could still happen.
 

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The reason for any inconsistencies is mostly because this was made for a SWTOR RP (Which in turn was made for my own independent work), and I often second-guess myself. My apologizes.

The fugitive status thing mostly came from her father, and she didn't actually start actively killing people until around 21. Through a child killer isn't really out there, if properly conditioned.

Also, if it seems I was trying to make her mom too powerful or influential, I am not, through I can see why you can think that. Probably should of been more clear on what I was trying to say. (Basically, people thought she could of been a high ranking Sith, through if she actually did was another matter entirely.)

If someone else has posted and I didn't address anything, I'm not ignoring you, I was typing this before I could see your post.
 

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Bauren-You want me to ask the Sith or are you? Just checking.
 

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I'm no part of the Sith faction leadership, so feel free to ignore my input.

However, @Marf, I tend to support @Gaiaverse in his claim that a child killer is not an outlandish idea. There are, obviously, numerous environmental factors that must come together to form the "perfect storm" of events leading to the emergence of such radical behavior, but it is not unheard of. Thus, I must argue that if our world (a world devoid of magical powers and space wizards) can produce a child capable of murder, then the Sith - by the very virtue of their nature - would openly foster this behavior among every member of their society, regardless of age. For an organization built upon the cornerstones of social darwinism as the Sith are, a 13-14 year old being conditioned to kill and murder is entirely within the realm of possibility, and therefore not "utter nonsense".

Being a fugitive is another story, but I felt the need to dispel the perception that a child (especially one raised by the Sith of all things) is incapable of committing acts of violence or murder.
 

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Also, look at child soldiers, they are conditioned ' to become perfect killers with no remorse or empathy, and seeing as Emil's parents were a amoral bounty hunter and Sith Lord (a bit one leaning towards the light side, at least more than most) , I think it be more surprising if Emil wasn't used to people dying and being killed.
 

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K, I think I fixed any inconsistencies...I think, tell me of any I missed, please.
 

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Okay, so, two things.

First, I'm wondering if you even edited the Bio to reflect what Marf said about how the Sith aren't Empire this timeline and some stuff like that. It still has numerous references to the "Empire" and what-not, a lot of stuff like that; for example, referring to the smugglers as ex-sith soldiers, even though at this point the Sith don't actually have soldiers - they have the SBZ, but that's more of a warrior coalition that fights together than an actual regimented military, for example. From what I can tell, nothing there got edited.

Also, the Force Power you mention there. First: that's not what Force Empathy is, based on the Wookieepedia description of the power. That's more akin to what psychometry was, specifically the dark-sided version of it used on living people. Adding on to that, I highly doubt that would be okay for you to do generally, certainly not without approval of the person who's character's past you're looking into. So you should just remember that. I'm not going to say you can't keep it there, but still.

Also - this is just a random aside - but there are quite a few typos, extra words, and grammatical errors all over the place in the profile that make it kind of hard to read. It would be really beneficial to all of us if you went through and corrected all those, because it would just make the profile a bit clearer and more understandable.

EDIT: Other stuff I just remembered.

Regarding the pistol - last I saw, that wasn't approved yet, but it wasn't archived either (I don't think). If it was archived or it has yet to be approved, remember that you won't be able to use it until it either is approved or if it was only archived for being generic.

As to hiding her past - you might make note of the fact that the Jedi Council (and, by extension, Bau Zo's army's leadership) wouldn't be likely to accept a person her age without being made privy to information about her past, and that she'd be watched carefully, especially considering what has happened in her life and that she started out as a Sith. The Jedi Council and Army masters aren't blindly trusting enough to just go "sure, we don't know anything about you, but you can join us!" because that's how you end up with an assassin infestation and stuff like that.
 

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Shit...Could of sworn I got rid of any mentions of a Empire.

About the pistol, she doesn't really use it. It's more of a tragic keepsake.

I expected as much.
 

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K, think I got rid of any mentions to the Empire or a regimented Sith military. I have to go to school, but I'll try to fix any grammatical errors as soon as possible.
 

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Finally got rid of the last mention of a Empire.
 

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I'm not a leader of any sort, so feel free to ignore this.

Would the Jedi accept an ex-sith Lord's offspring as an apprentice? And if they did (Entirely possible) would they let her retain the 'dirty fighting' and training she'd been given before her arrival with the Jedi, since a lot of that would get in the way of Jedi training?

I noticed this thread due to your "Seeking a master" thread, @Gaiaverse, and the reason this comes up is because I was thinking about it...wouldn't the Jedi Order, if they let her in at all, ship her off somewhere like the agri-corps, or more likely, make her be an initiate for a while first? Since she wouldn't have the basic "light side good, dark side bad" and "Feel the force" stuff that younglings are taught?

Just a thought. I'd actually be interested in having my character be her master if desired, just wanted to express a belief first.
 

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Emil has been trained in 'Feel the force' stuff, if I understand what you mean, through by her mother (who was a light sided Sith) and Harvilus.

Emil probably not gonna tell the Jedi her full story or at all, not because of malice or bad intentions, but because she doesn't want to talk about it.

Her 'cover' story is-Father was a Bounty Hunter, who gave her to his sister who married into House Baliss on Alderaan, when he visited he at taught her his skills, never knew her mother.
 
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