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"Hello, my name is DP001, I was once part of the DP project. It was an experiment into genetic enginnering and cybernetics. I was the first and only subject of it. I was born with talents that no other human beings had, I had the strength to lift 500 pounds and up to 1000 with my suit. I could run a marathon and only breath as if it were 5 miles. I only had one weakness, my immune system. To fully engineer my strengths, they left me one weakness. If I breath in any bacteria or virus, I will die. That is the purpose of my suit. It uses cybernetics to enhance my abilities but it also has a purifier in it, so the air I breathe is clean, pure oxygen. If my suit is pierced anywhere, I will die. But I don't care. I was supposed to be a DP, a Defender-Protecter, I was going to be the future police force of the galaxy. Now I am a hutt soldier. I fight regardless. My weapon of choice is my assault rifle. Given to me at age 7, I trained with it forever, now I use it. I record this data because I believe someday my project may be restored, and this information would help. But I am a soldier and I will die, someday. That is my purpose, that is why I was born, and that is why I do not leave the hutts.

My childhood was filled with intense training and preperation. I was punished with more training. If I failed to be accurate, I would continue shooting until the next day. If I failed to sprint in perfect form, I would run for 50 miles. I was made into what I am today, a soldier. A warrior. A master of the battlefield. And I feel no remorse for those I kill, nor do I feel it for those who die beside me. For I am a soldier, and that is what I was made into."
 
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Its got potential but its pretty light on history.
 

Teck923

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your weakness far outweighs your strengthm Unless you want it like that.
 

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Yeah, I didn't really have much history, and I like his weakness, he'll be a god if I don't have it. I'm gonna get some pictures for him.
 

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You wont die at any disease but I assume you can't fight disease well and you are sickly. This kind of contradicts your amazing health and strength.
 

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Considering that diseases aren't even allowed to roam the SWRPverse unless they've been engineered by someone, your weakness seems pretty hollow.
 

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What I mean is that he basically has no immune system, his suit gives him a perfectly clean, enclosed environment. The many tiny microbes that float around in the air and the germs that are on things, any of these could kill him if they were able to get into his system, because he doesn't have the antibodies to deal with it.
 

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Considering that diseases aren't even allowed to roam the SWRPverse unless they've been engineered by someone, your weakness seems pretty hollow.

You're welcome to have your character contract a disease. We just said that we weren't going to be organizing any large-scale diseases that would have repercussions across the galaxy.
 

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You're welcome to have your character contract a disease. We just said that we weren't going to be organizing any large-scale diseases that would have repercussions across the galaxy.

Then could you spread disease around at all?
 

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A Defender-Protector? Isn't that a little redundant?
 

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Well, I couldn't think of anything cooler, and I think one letter just isn't the same. I can change it if you like.

EDIT:I added a little more history.
 
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Well I don't particularly care, it's just that no one IC will take the name seriously.
 

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Well I don't particularly care, it's just that no one IC will take the name seriously.


Well its established that you wouldnt take it seriously.:CAbove:
 
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