Donalia

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(I have made an account previously a while ago and forgot what it was named so this might be similar to that)
NAME: donalia elizabeth wren
FACTION: none yet
RANK: none
Species: sith pureblood
AGE: 23
GENDER: female
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes with basic jedi training but seeking sith apprenticeship

APPEARANCE:
She is 5ft 7in tall and has long black hair

ATTRIBUTES:
She is Very charismatic and smart. Her
Weaknesses are very low stamina and traumatic memories.

PERSONALITY:
She is very smart and charismatic but too easygoing and not used to being free due to years of slavery. Can be aggresive and arrogant in a fight but very protective of her prized rancor. She is incredibly hatdful of slavery and the hutts
BIOGRAPHY:
Born into slavery, donalia was a dancer for a hutt from the age of thirteen. She just turned 18 and when she tried to kill her master but was sent in a rancor pit. This is where she found out that she was force sensitive by unintensionally mind tricking the rancor. This rancor waited for the hutt's goons to try bring her up to be executed another way due to not being attacked. Then he attacked the guards and she was able to exit amd let out the beast through the controls on the other side of the door. They escaped the planet (nal hutta) with a fury class interceptor (with her rancor in a modded cargo bay) and she named it cuddles. After heading to coruscant she was inducted into the jedi order briefly which she used to build her Purple curved hilt lightsaber before leaving to pursue her own interests.

SKILLS:
She has Force sensitivity and was trained as a jedi padwann. She is very skilled at dancing

GEAR:
Hutt skiff guard armor ; shirt and skirt; slave harness; vibroblade; A black cloak; curved hilt purple lightsaber.

Link to rp account
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?members/darth-donalia.9800/

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RELATIONSHIPS:
None yet


SHIP:
Fury class interceptor with rancor in cargo bay.

DROIDS:
N/a.

PETS:
Rancor named cuddles

KILLS:
N/a

COMBAT:
N/a
 
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Dmitri

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Please complete profile. We typically don't allow for incomplete profiles.
 

Wit

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If she was a slave all her life then how did she learn how to fly a ship? Slavers don't teach dancers how to fly ship, waste of money and time.
 

Sirplatypus

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Is this better iam just wondering? Please let me know as soon as you can
 

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Hey there,

I believe at this point you should have been sent a document that contains a lot of links to the rules and other various information both about the site and the setting of which the RP takes place in. The parts about a pet rancor will all need to go. Its based off the premise that the character is mind controlling it to make it obey which a character starting out would simply not be able to do. There are a few other issues with the profile but I think they will be a bit more obvious to you once you get to look around those links that were sent to you.

I would recommend starting out by taking a good read through the rules and then set about re-writing this. For now, I am moving this post to the Player Workshop board where it can be worked on. Once its further along and ready for review I can move it back. Feel free to tag me (@Username) or PM me if you have any questions.
 
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