Derivar var Seilen te Lors

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(OOC: So how are he and Laurentia connected?...)



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Derivar te Lors
NAME: Derivar Jeilen var Seilen te Lors
ALIAS: None
FACTION: "He's Thyferran, but he owes his loyalties distinctly to the Republic, not his Cartel or the Duopoly"
RANK: Lieutenant


SEX: "He's a young man, like so many others"
AGE: "He's pretty young, but capable and beyond his years"
SPECIES: "Human, best anyone can tell..."
HOMEPLANET: "Born to the Bermar Cartel on Thyferra in the city of Xholon"
HEIGHT: "Approaching two meters"
WEIGHT: "Slim, svelte but muscular"
FORCE SENSITIVE: "One of the few from Thyferra, yes"

"Senator te Lors and I are probably related yes, half of Thyferra could say the same."

"Monsieur do not let my accent fool you, I can line up a sniper shot at 400 meters trim your hairline, I most certainly can handle myself."

"Fascinating, I will have to try and replicate that particular chemical formula for future explosions..."




Personality



"Thyferran force sensitives are allegedly all operatives of the supposedly non-existant Jade Order, where they receive their instruction in the Force. It's definitely not the education one gets from the Jedi or the Sith but it's good, or so others believe. Thyferra produces so few force sensitives and are unwilling to let Jedi take them so Thyferran force sensitive children are instead conscripted by the order and put in to different Cabals for training. There they learn to become assets for the Duopoly and the Jade Order. Like every Thyferran, they learn the arts of politics, manipulation and hone their natural cunning in to a fine razor, to be wielded on an entirely different level than Duopoly goons." -from the observations of Minister Arci Jaro of Corellia in his compendium "The Jade Empire: A History of Thyferra and the Bacta Industry"

"Derivar te Lors.... te Lors... te Lors... A, B, C, ah te Lors De! Yes there are so many of them and every Cartel keeps excellent records on every Human Thyferran. Oh yes, personality... well scientifically minded, very bright, personable and surprisingly credible too, appears he didn't have the heart for the work of the... well the intelligence divisions I guess. What? No, the Jade Order doesn't exist, I didn't bring you in here so you could spout out those conspiracy theories! He's a research scientist and with the BA legitimized Senator te Lors and the Duopoly want to send some of our best people out there to show that Thyferra's in the fight just as much as the other Rim worlds. Derivar te Lors is young but he's erudite, a quick thinker and based on these reports capable both in and out of the laboratory..." -picked up from the Bermar security feeds detailing a meeting between a BA representative and Bermar personnel officer Hoxoolonxho discussing the assignment of Thyferran personnel to the Border Alliance.


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Skills and Abilities

"Thyferran Scientists walk home with the Kellivar Medal for Excellence in the Sciences for their achievements in radiological physics." -Headline from Scientific Republic.

"His abilities in the force continue to grow in both power and refinement, subject shows particular knack for Telekinesis and Telepathy, aptly mixing both in combat simulations against other trainees. His fighting style is flashy, flexible, acrobatic, prefers to toy with targets than take them out directly in hand-to-hand combat and shrinks from finishing them. His training with blasters proceeds adequately, he blends blaster pistols expertly in with his fighting style but his training with rifles and heavy weapons leaves much to be desired. He suggested ways we might improve the weapon designs though, will send it along to the weapons lab." -from the files of the Jade Order

"Agent shows too much personal "integrity" for the more... brutal, aspects of our work. Gladly eliminated the Pirates and their dark-side cult but had trouble getting rid of that troublesome merchant on Abregado Rae. We don't use sniper rifles, we don't do bloody and yet painless poison was too much for the boy to handle. Instructors say he might be faking "integrity" because he just simply doesn't enjoy this line of work. Fine. In which case we know he's still an excellent liar. He once showed aptitude in research and design, send him to the labs for a trial period." -from the files of the Jade Order

"Superb researcher, excellent analyst, more than competent in combat and field work, yes he'll make quite an asset for the Order and Thyferra though probably in a support capacity. We'll keep him in the Labs, send him to the Core next year for University, he's bound to enjoy that...." -from the files of the Jade Order.
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Biography

"Subject Name: Derivar var Seilen te Lors
Age: 27
Cartel Affiliation: Bermar
Education: University of Koros (Undergraduate), Arca Jeth University (Doctoral)
Subject was born in the city of Xholon to Magnus var Seilen te Lors and Agethe Tagge. Subject was eventually found to be force sensitive and was enlisted in special education at the age of 7. Subject graduated from specialized education at age 18 and from there attended the University of Koros and Arca Jeth University, earning high honors before returning to Thyferra to work with Gherain Cartel in the development of advanced technology and high-level scientific research. Subject and his colleagues earned several awards for their discoveries of two new types of radiation and the invention of a radical new radiation treatment plan. A physics specialist but with extensive knowledge outside of the sciences and specialized education, Doctor te Lors was assigned from Thyferran service to the Border Alliance with its recent legitimization, on the order of Senator Laurentia te Lors, Ministerial Legate." -from the files of the Thyferran Duopoly.




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What a cutie, nice signature btw... B)
Hahaha, thanks yeah I saw it and I just said to myself "And if I put a quote over it, it can be both cool and fit in to a melodramatic aesthetic...."
 

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Hahaha, thanks yeah I saw it and I just said to myself "And if I put a quote over it, it can be both cool and fit in to a melodramatic aesthetic...."
I swear I didn't copy you... xD
 

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I hope his name has some really mundane short hand, like Ted or Dave.
All of my characters have had ridiculously unwieldy names and I've only ever shortened it in one case. If other people do, now that's another story.... XD

I also think these long names are a marker of Thyferran Culture, I'd like to go back and expand my thoughts on the matter in the planet profile.
 
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