Demons of Dxun

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  • What is going to happen in your plot? Devrim Wolfe along with other Jedi and members of the Alliance will rediscover the lightsaber forge on Dxun. They will also stop the extremists from launching an unauthorized assault on the Imperials that would reveal the GA.
  • What other players will be a part of this? @Nefieslab, and plenty other GA members once the missions are posted.
  • Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place? Dxun
  • Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
    • Thread 1: Devrim meets with the Mand’alor and discusses the state of the rebel cell on Dxun. They negotiate its continued existence and the lightsaber forge on the demon moon.
    • Thread 2: Returning to the Dxun Cell, Devrim is coldly welcomed and regarded as a traitor by his former cell members. A fight breaks out and the rebels have to subdue to cell members while Devrim confronts and arrests the Commander. (Ask, Self-DM)
    • Thread 3: While the rebels are dealing with the extremists, the Jedi embark on the dangerous journey through the Dxun jungle filled with untold horrors and predators thirsty for blood. If they survive, they will find the Forge hidden within the jungle. (Ask, Self-DM)
  • What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"? With their return to Dxun, Devrim arrests the former commander and takes over the cell’s operations. The Jedi also rediscover the hidden lightsaber forge and make it available for future use.
  • Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose. N/A
 
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Hey there, @Vosrik!

There are many variables currently in play. Dxun is a moon of Onderon and therefore Imperial territory. Opposition would be demanded. However, the Mandalorians are in the middle of taking Onderon, so then its control would fall to them. Waiting around for that plot to be completed could make things far easier for you and everyone in this plot involved.

Am I understanding correctly that the lightsaber forge and new base will be one and the same?

For this many threads and for such a base, dice or DM is altogether unnecessary. You are instead welcome to self-DM! That especially goes if or when the Mandalorians take Onderon, which I would suggest meeting with said Mandalorians to ensure it is okay to establish a rebel or Jedi presence in their new territory. Could even turn into a joint plot or operation.

If not? I'll need less dice/DM and more Open/PvP, because it's still Imperial territory.

That's all for now.
 

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Hey! Thanks for reviewing — I think what I’d like to try doing is talking to the mandos and making it a joint operation and stretch their original one to 11 threads if I can.

And while technically the forge and the already established cell are in two different spots, they’d be close enough of a walking distance that they would be considered the same thing.
 

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Alright! After talking with Sreeya, she agreed to have the rebels speak to the mandalorians — after they have taken control of Onderon. Aside from that, I have cleaned up the threads to coincide with the new plot rules. Let me know if it needs any more tweaking!
 

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@Vosrik

Dice is unnecessary. You are welcome instead to replace Thread 3 with that meeting with the Mandalorians. Two threads is all that is needed too, especially given the fact this is technically rebel-aligned territory. As in, it is under control of Mandalore and they are in a coalition with the Alliance.

The lightsaber forge will require a resubmission and approval too, with your own details and the added shield generator.

That is all for now!
 

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@Vosrik

Dice is unnecessary. You are welcome instead to replace Thread 3 with that meeting with the Mandalorians. Two threads is all that is needed too, especially given the fact this is technically rebel-aligned territory. As in, it is under control of Mandalore and they are in a coalition with the Alliance.

The lightsaber forge will require a resubmission and approval too, with your own details and the added shield generator.

That is all for now!
Changes made!
 

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Looks solid. Just be sure to make that lore write-up resubmission, as mentioned above.

Plot will remain under review until approval, simply because of new precedence, but since I don't care and we all know it won't ultimately matter, you can go ahead and jumpstart this ship.

Still staying under review tho in case new changes are demanded. That Mando meeting should stay either way.
 

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Just posting in here to follow it since Deviant is no longer a part of the site staff. Also if you return please let me know so we can look over this and hopefully get it approved @Vosrik (I miss you buddy)
 
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