Dark Jedi Trials

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At about Midnight, Manann time a jet-black fighter with elaborate lettering "Scythe" lands in Manann's docking stations and a man passes into Ahto City. The man's name is Raven, a Dark Jedi hopeful. Raven is in luck as he notices a Republic Officer doing "buisness" with a scantily-clad Bar-wench in an alley, possibly the only part of Ahto City not under security surveilance.

Raven walks up to the couple as they flirt and taps the Republic Officer on the shoulder. The Officer, obviously drunk turns around to face him but sees a fist fly into his face smashing him backwards. The soldier's companion intakes a breath to scream but her throat is cut open by Raven's blade in a quick slicing motion. The soldier is still dazed and trying to figure out what's happening as he feels cold steel pressed into his neck, surronded by a cloth. The last thing he sees is a dark form, before all goes black.

Raven quickly strips the Soldier's outfit and puts it on, commenting how tight it is in the "Nether-regions". Luckily the cloth caught all the blood and Raven disposes of it by stuffing it into a crack in a nearby building's foundations. Slipping out of the alley, looking completly casual, Raven walks towards the Kolto refining facility

After arriving at the facility, Raven shows his passcard and tells the guard the officer's name that Raven will temporarily use. (Which was of course written on the card.) The Selkath salutes Raven. ((Selkath: Good evening General Biggs, I trust you have come to oversea the kolto shipment?)). Raven replies, astounded by his luck to have killed a general. Raven replies "Ah yes, can you please direct me to it?" ((Selkath: Ah yes, I told them you would need to know where it is, take a Right, then another right.)) Raven nods and enters.

Now, is this a stealth mission, or a slice the hell out of everything mission? thought Raven. Walking confidently to the door to The kolto harvester. Raven is greeted by 4 guards who immediatly halt him, and ask for his credintials which he presents. ((Selkath: Ah your shipment is right over here, General. Do you need help carrying it?)), says the Selkath guard as he points at the container with the Republic's shipment. Raven replies "No", and notices a control pannel, The Harvester. Raven walks over to it and inspects it. After several minutes of idol talk about the refinement process, and harvesting he asks what's keeping people from destroying the harverster? The Selkath proudly announces "Us", and says the panel is the harvester control, disabling it could throw off the shipments for weeks if not months. Raven replies "Well, that's too bad" and his blade slices through the air slitting the throat of the Selkath guard talking to him. The other three are stunned long enough for Raven to kick one in the face, sending him several feet backwards.

The other two Selkath opened fire with badly aimed shots, as Raven dashed forward, ramming his blade into a guard's head, then grabbing the nozzle of the other Selkath's gun points it upward and headbutt's him. Raven quickly flicks his wrist and his Vibrosword goes through the heart of the recently kicked over Selkath. Quickly drawing his small blaster, Raven shoots the remaining Guard in the face while taking a grazing shot to his torso. Luckily the wound isn't serious, and causterized when the blaster slid by,and Raven quickly conceals the wound.

After quickly deleting and canceling all processes he plants a grenade on the console and hides by a door. Quickly about 20 Selkath guards came in and almost saw Raven as he ducked behind a few boxes. The guards start wailing aloud, and checking to see any signs of life in their fallen comrades. Raven opens the door and stands up as if he just entered through the door, having concealed his Vibrosword and held his blaster forward he pretended to have just ran in. "What's going on here? Is everyone ok!?" Raven said almost too dramtically and pretended to look horrified at the scene. ((Broken Selkath, from edge of Tears: General, the kolto!...It's...we can't harvest it.)) Raven once again did the horrified look and offered his condolences. Raven sighed deeply and announced he had to write a report to the Embassy. The guards dismissed him, and went to check on the security cameras.

Raven ducked into an ally and shed his uniform, hiding it in a dumpster. Emerging on the other side of the alley in his normal black leather walked calmly to the hanger. A bulletin broke out on the cities' intercoms announcing this: "A Republic Officer named General Jax Biggs has been seen on security footage damaging Kolto supplies (purposly omitting the full extent of the damage). All security forces are to find this traitorous schutta!". Raven tried his best not to grin as he was stopped at least 10 times by Security forces asking if he had seen General Biggs. Replying "No" Raven calmy walked to the hanger and got in right as a port lockdown was announced. Boarding "Scythe" Raven blasted off and sent a message through the force

Master, I have finished, The Kolto will be out of commision for quite awhile .

OOC: I am rather new to this RPG and if this wasn't the way I was supposed to RP my mission please let me know what the proper form is. I just hope I didn't waste half an hour for nothing.
 

Lillianne Crasse

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OOC: Imaginative. One thing you didn't do is take the submarine down to the bottom of the ocean and get the harvester. It's below Manaan. You'd have to go through security to get to the submarine and then steal a suit to walk across the bottom. There are sharks to destroy and you can't carry any weapons while walking down there. Without knowing that you've done pretty good for a first time. Also, it's easier to read if you break up an rp into several posts.
 

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OOC: Yeah, I was worried about its length. I thought about the secret base, but then I remembered it was techinically illegal, and the Selkath must have their own Kolto refinery, with the Republic's being a secondary, small scale one.

So, am I in? :4:
 

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ooc: I am already made a thread on it. Look for it in "A day when the dead could not be saved,". Also, you should break it down into posts of at least ten to allow republic players to try to stop you. AND the selkath have camera's around the station. They can watch you at all times. You'd basicly be a target.
 

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Well, I felt odd joining your thread since you were already fairly far in it. And I'm not aware how the RPG works still (i.e. Republic players stopping me). But according to Jules it was ok for a first time, so I guess I don't have to redo it?
 

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Well, I felt odd joining your thread since you were already fairly far in it. And I'm not aware how the RPG works still (i.e. Republic players stopping me). But according to Jules it was ok for a first time, so I guess I don't have to redo it?
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She will make that call when she gets back.
 
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