Damon Anil (WIP)

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Damon Anil

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NAME: Damon Anil
FACTION: Dark Jedi of the Bogan
RANK: Acolyte
SPECIES: Nautolan
AGE: 16
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'10"
WEIGHT: 210 lbs. (40lbs for the 14 tendrils)
EYES: Black
HAIR: None
SKIN: Varying color from dark to light blue
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Large Glosses black eyes, Head tendrils.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes.

STRENGTH: Damon does not have a overly muscular body, though that is not to say that he is not in shape. His physical strength is at it's fullest when he is under water, when on land his strength his reduced quite a bit.
DEXTERITY: Damon is very stealthy and quite agile on land, when he is under water these skills are increased quite a bit.
CONSTITUTION: Damon is in near perfect health, and has average stamina on land where as his stamina is far above that in the water.
INTELLIGENCE: Damon is quite intelligent though he does not let it show, most of the time he jokes and plays dumb.
WISDOM: Damon is average when it comes to waste amounts of wisdom.
CHARISMA: Damon was what most would call a neutral, he is liked by some while at the same time others may hate him.

FORCE POWERS:
N/A Yet

SKILLS:
  • Pheromone Sensing Skills-Advanced skills(Enhanced by naturals sensing ability's)
  • Advanced Stealth Skills
  • Moderate Hand-to-Hand Skills
  • Expert Blade/Melee Combat Skill
  • Moderate Piloting Skills
  • Advanced Hacking/Slicing Skills

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Shii-Cho(Basic)

GEAR:
  • [ST]Red Lightsaber(Duel-Phase)[/ST]
  • Black Armored Sleeveless Chest Plate
  • Green Gloves with Reddish/Orange Forearm Guards
  • Black Cargo Pants
  • Green Combat Boots
  • Black Half Cape(around waist draped down to feet)
  • Utility Belt(Space to hang Saber as well as pouches for hacking and slicing equipment)

SHIP:
None yet

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:
Damon is a happy go luck kinda guy who is constantly smiling and making jokes, he enjoys having a laugh at other peoples expense when ever he can. Damon enjoys a good fight and finds great joy in facing strong and skilled opponents, he will face any opponent who will challenge him as long as they are not weak and present no challenge. He can be very talkative and then turn right around and not say a thing to anyone, he also enjoys the chance to learn and advances his skills and ability's when ever possible. All of this changes though when he become angry or aggravated, when this happens he becomes a dark and demented person who gets pleasure from the pain and suffering of others.

BIOGRAPHY:
Damon was born on a water and swamp covered planet called Glee Anselm, his parents wore members of there races leader ship. This made being a kid very dull for Damon as he was not aloud to do very much, the only way he was really able to get out and do things was to sneak out. Around the time he turned 9 standard years old decided to sneak out of his house and go to the port city on the surface of the planet, as he was doing this a large cargo ship was landing on the planet in the same port that Damon was heading for and shortly he would find him self in trouble. As the ship landed at the port the back hatch opened and out came three cloaked men, they said nothing as they began to make there way through the town to the local bar. As they arrived at the bar the men made there way to the bar where they began to ask around about a man who was said to be on the planet, as this was happening Damon arrived to the city and began to make his way around pulling pranks on the shop vendors and patrons of the area. He kept this up until he was spotted by his most recent victim who proceeded to chase the boy through the city intent on catching him and teaching him a lesson, meanwhile back at the bar as the men continued to ask around no one was giving them any information yet they proceeded to keep asking around.

As they moved to the far corner of the room to ask a man facing the wall he turned and looked to the group though he appeared to be looking right through them, the man in the back of the group looked to him and could see he was looking past them this made him turn his around to see the man they were looking for running out the back door. The man then looked back to his men who took off after the man as they made there way to the back door a large explosion could be heard and seen, this took out the two men that were sent after the fleeing man as this happen the man quickly appeared through the smoke after the fleeing man. Damon who was still running from his last prank victim was turning the corner as the man fleeing the bar was coming around the turn, as they ran into each other the fleeing man was sent head over heels landing atop Damon this gave the man from the bar who was chasing him to catch up. As the man from the bar caught up to them he with out a word drew a red saber from his belt and took the mans head off, he then looked down to the young Nautolan who had made the man trip.

As he looked to the boy he noticed that the boy was force sensitive and decided he would take this boy to train as a Bogan, and so he removed his hood and spoke "I am Syaden a Dark Jedi Master and you will be coming with me." Hearing this Damon got scared and hopped up running the other way, though as he did this he ran right into the man who was chasing him. Damon now caught by the man tried to get away though he could not, the man held him in the air then gave him a strong right hook to the jaw sending him flying. The man then walked over and went to kick the boy when he heard a man speak to him, "that boy is mine if you know what is good for you will leave him alone and get out of here while i am still willing to let you." Hearing this the man laughed and turned his attention to Syaden, who was still standing over the body of the man he had just killed but had put his saber away. As the man started towards him Syaden began to smile, the man almost to him cocked back to swing but was stopped by Syaden using force chock on the man until he was dead. He then looked back to Damon who was still shaken by the hit he then made his way to the boy, seeing this Damon attempted to get up and run again but he was to late and was knocked out by Syaden who then picked the boy up and made his way back to his ship after covering his head with his cloak once again.

Upon Waking up Damon found him self on a space ship with a nasty headache, he made his way out of the cargo hold he was in he then made his way to the cockpit of the ship. As he entered the cockpit he found to dark clothed men flying the ship as well as Syaden, who was meditating in the middle of the cockpit facing the door as if he was expecting Damon to enter. "What are you doing out of your room we have not arrived yet, where is the guard i placed at your room to keep watch of you," he asked the young boy who was very confused. Damon looked to the man who was now standing up, "what are you talking about and who are you and...." as he went to finish what he was saying he was grabbed by the back of his shirt and lifted into the air. "Follow me now" Syaden said to the boy in deep stern voice as he then return the boys feet to the floor and released his shirt. Syaden then walked from the room with Damon following, as they made there way through the ship Damon noticed many men in full battle gear. As they approached room that Damon had came from the guard was now there once more, Syaden walked up to the guard and began to speak to him pointing to the young boy a few times he then started walking again this time the guard also followed. They finally came to a small room with a hatch to exit the ship, as they walked towards it Syaden motioned the guard over he then grabbed him and tossed him into this room shutting the door behind him. The man Turned to run back but it was to late the door was shut, "those who dont follow my orders are useless to me" he said as he looked to the man in the room.

Syaden then looked to Damon and smiled as he pressed another button on the control panel, as he hit the button the room vented to space sending the guard into space to die. He then closed the door to space and walked away with Damon right behind him, after a short while they were at the room where Damon first awoke on the vessel. Syaden opened the door and walked into the room, as he entered the center of the room he sat on the floor then pointed to a spot right across from him. Damon moved to the spot and sat on the floor in front of him, Syaden then began to meditate as he did his body began to float. "I am Syaden and i will be your Bogan Master and teach you to be a Dark Jedi from here on out" he said as he floated, "now you will learn and practice your skills until i say other wise" Damon did not know what to say as the man spoke. "Oh and you will also refer to me as master at all times" he said as he opened his eyes to look at the young boy, Damon did not know what was going on or why he was taken but he did not ant to call anyone master. Over the course of the next year Damon was forced to do intensive training to build his body's physical strength and when he would refuse to do what he was told he was beat by his master, after a while he began to except the training to better him self in the hopes of escaping though as time went on he began to see that this would not be possible.

As he spent more time in space with his master he found him self like his role as a Dark Jedi in training more and more, it would not be long before he began to embrace the Dark Side and let it guide him along the path of darkness, by the time he was 13 he was almost at a expert level with melee weapons. He trained this skill with many of the soldiers aboard the vessel and also with his master when there was time, another skilled he picked up while learning form the crew of the ship was stealth which he seemed to pick up rather well. He also would practice his hacking and slicking skills every chance he got so that he could easily open most anything that was controlled by a computer. After a year of working on other skills such as his hand-to-hand and piloting skills as well as improving others that he already knew, it was now time that he went on more mission with his master to get some field training. This was cut short how ever when his master received word that he was need in the outer rim, he was told to take a small one man craft for a assault on a lone Jedi master who was alone out there. Syaden before leaving left instructions with the crew that should he not return they were to take drop the Damon at the temple to continue his training. It would be almost two year before word of his master defeat reached the the crew of the cargo ship, and so as they were instructed to do they set course for the Bogan Temple to drop Damon off to be trained.

KILLS:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
N/A
 
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cant start out with a lightsaber form or lightsabers unless given permission by bogan faction head (or you already passed the training of a padawan / alcolye / knight / crusader / master / lord

other then that you have to get a biography up in 24 hours or the mods will lock this.

its also a bit iffy to see how good he is in something

so using a point system or atleast saying simple average (5), above average(6), good(7), very good(8), excellent(9), perfect(10). would help

I like the fact that you went with a nautulan. Diversity yay. Also for human standards he would be quite big and fat for his age. Not sure if nautolans have a bigger / heavier build.
 
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Kalrim

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i am about to put the bio up sometime tonight, also the extra weight is to account for the 14 head tendrils that the nautolan have i figure they are around 5-8 pounds each so roughly 70-112 pounds just for them so i probable should actually add some weight. :CSly at least thats what i think i could be wrong.


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