Dalmik

[krano drall]

Dalmik

AGE

► 30​

SPECIES

► Human​

HEIGHT

► Five foot ten​

WEIGHT

► 130 pounds​

EYE COLOR

► Black​

HAIR COLOR

► Brown​

HOMEWORLD

► Corrusont​

GENDER

► Male​

FACTION

► Jedi​

RANK

► Knight​

FORCE SENSITIVITY

► Knows/Trained​

BIOGRAPHY

[beebox3=500px]Chapter 1 Indoctrination: Dalmik was born on Corrusont to two force sensitive parents. They did not have enough credits to support him and thought since they were both force sensitive even though they found out to late be to Jedi they thought there son could be one. They took him to the Jedi temple were he was tested for for sensitivity and he had a high medi colordain count. (Most likely spelled at that wrong) He was taken in by the Jedi and so his life began. He spent his years as a initiate studying old Jedi texts. He enjoyed reading as in his mind knowledge would unlock any door and thought that door there would be better knowledge. He found the Sith especially fascinating but not because of there power but because of how they used it. It baffled him why would you give your self over to something thing that would inevitably end them. Dalmik would spend hours and hours reading about the ancient Sith just to find out why they did what they did. To him it was a steel clad door that he could never find the key too. During sparring classes he would @often fight like the Sith with brutal attacks but even though his instructors told him how it could lead him to the dark side Dalmik never felt that pull. He never attached him self to the style to him what was brutal to others was little more then left foot forwards blade high strike. Despite his fighting style he never tried to hurt anyone one and if he came close he would simply drop his weapon and walk away from the fight. As he thought about it he found another iron door also related to the Sith, and the Jedi as well. Why is there emotion in fighting it is just a series of movements were you try to best your opponents. It was much like chess (I know chess is not in Star Wars but there is a very similar game I just can't get its name), and there is no emotion in chess. Eventually Dalmik decided to stop reading the books and search for his answers in the force. He would spend all his free time in meditation drifting through the force and his mind trying to get the keys to the doors.


Chapter 2: Finding the key


Dalmik passed his Padawn trials easily enough and was appointed a master. He enjoyed his masters company and they would often talk about the mysteries of the force. When sparring with his master Dalmik would always loss as he would never pour himself into the fight he would never apply his mind body and soul. His master would ask him why he never piloted him self in tot he fight Dalmik would simply say "I can't fighting is not a emotion it is just a series of movements". Dalmik's master eventually decided to take a different approach. He focused combat Dalmik's training on the force. Dalmik excelled as he had a amazing touch with the force because of all those years of mediation. In two years Dalmik could beat his master in a fight (Though not easily) by using solely the force. It was then Dalmik thought he had found the key. He went into deep mediation and just let his mind wonder were ever it needed. He slowly or together a theory. The Sith were not willing letting the dark side control them but it swept in like a river of fire. Dalmik wanted to test his theory but he also realized that doing so would cause him to become just like the Sith mindless slaves of the dark side. So instead he went back to the books reading about the history's of powerful Sith Lords and soon he found his theory was correct. He talked to his master about it and how perhaps he could help the Sith save then selves from the dark side. His master told him that the Sith were mindless best not people anymore and they could never be helped. Dalmik did not believe him and made a promise to himself 'If he ever found himself able to talk to a Sith with out getting killed he would try to save that Sith'.


Chapter 3: The key becomes the cage


It was time for one of Dalmik's knight trials. He was excited and ready to become a knight. He beloved he could easily pass the trials. His master wished him luck as he started the trials. He passed all of them well enough and was going to take the last one, the trial of the spirit. Dalmik thought this would be the easiest test as he spent days in meditation, however this one would be different due to how the counsel required it to be done. Dalmik went into the deepest mediation trance he had even done. Inside his mind he was standing in the Jedi temple library with a silver key in front of him. All of a sudden the racks of holo books crashed to the redound then disappeared leaving only a steel door. Dalmik understood what was happening and thought this was what he was looking for the answer to all his questions. He picked up the key and opened the door. He walked through and found himself standing by a river to fire. In front of him stood a Jedi that looked exactly like Dalmik. The Jedi told Dalmik one thing, "If you want the true key you must entire the river". Dalmik stood there all the answer to everything right in front of him.

He jumped onto the river of fire and felt pain pure pain, hotter and more intense then the sun. That was not the worst part as the pain faded Dalmik felt pure rage at the Jedi at everyone and everything. He hated how the Jedi feared power feared progress. He crawled out of the river of fire at the feet of the Jedi version of him he stood up with a light saber in his hand. His Jedi self spoke to him In a mocking voice "Now you see you have used the key and now you are caged. Caged as a best of the dark." Dalmik screamed and charged the Jedi version of himself. The Jedi version of him defended him self but Dalmik had the advantage for the first time in his life he poured emotion into the fight and it felt good. He hacked and slashed at the Jedi version of himself until he had disarmed him. He was about to finish the Jedi when he realized something. This was not the answer this was not the right key. This was a dark key one of pure evil. Dalmik had used it and unlocked the evil inside himself. He dropped the saber and all the hate and anger dissipated locked away once again in the deepest cell in he soul. He awoke in the Jedi temple he had passed his final test. He was knighted and just like that his real life in the world began. [/beebox3]

Apperance

[beebox3=500px]He is a normal height. When he is not wearing his armors hood he has jet black hair. He had a nice round face that would not stand it in a crowd. He is well built and not skinny. He has kind eyes. His light saber fits his hand perfectly and at the top is has slits so you can see it's blue glow. He wears the normal Jedi battle armor with the hood up most of the time however in less combative situations he wears normal Jedi robes.[/beebox3]

Skills

[beebox3=500px] lightsaber combat 6/10

Force ability 9/10

Acrobatics 5/10

Medical 2/10

Charisma 7/10

Intelligence 8/10

Ship flying 1/10

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Personality

[beebox3=500px] He is a very kind person and greatly dislikes hurting much less killing people.He enjoys reading and taking to other people about the history of the Jedi. The only thing he likes more then talking and reading is mediation. He will often spend hours of a day just sitting in meditation. He dues not hate or fear the sith at all. At most he pity's them and wants to bring them back to the light as he did to himself. [/beebox3]

PC Relations

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Legacy

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[210yeti]

Might want to add a section with what gear he has. Just a suggestion

 

[krano drall]

Might want to add a section with what gear he has. Just a suggestion

He has the force and a light saber nothing else :).

 

[Valen Pelora]

Hey @krano drall! I have a few comments on the profile.

• I believe this is your 3rd character in a very short period of time. @Dark child and @Malon have both suggested you slow down and take time to RP the characters that you have before jumping into new character. That would be my suggestion as well. I won't hold up approval on that ground but I would suggest really thinking about what you want to RP.
• Grammar: This is a nitpick point but the profile could certainly use a once over to make reading easier.
• History: There are a few issues I have. There is almost no information about what happened to him after he passed the trials. That is a huge section of history missing. If he was a member of the Order, how did he survive the destruction of Tython? If he was a member of the Army, how did he join and what has he been doing? The history seems to have a lot of contradictions that don't really jive together. The issues with emotions and learning about the Sith just seem out of place while I read it over. My two biggest concerns are "easily defeating the master" with only the Force. That is not plausible. The second deals with the trials. Even though he eventually realizes the Darkside is not the way, that really reads like a failure of the trial rather than success. I think it could be reworked slightly to make more sense.

Tag me when everything has been addressed!