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NAME: Corbacca
FACTION: The Twilight of the Force
RANK: Twilight Knight
SPECIES: Wookiee
AGE: 120
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 7'5"
WEIGHT: 298 lbs
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Black with yellow streaks
SKIN: Black
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: n/a
DOMINATE HAND: ambidextrous
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 9/10
DESTERITY: 7/10
CONSTITUTION: 8/10
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10
WISDOM: 9/10
CHARISMA: 7/10

FORCE POWERS:
Force Push
Force Pull
Force Lightning
Mind Influence
Force Jump
Telekinesis
Force Heal
Force Stun

SKILLS:
As he dominates over most others he uses it to his advantage. Has keen eyesight, smell, and hearing abilities.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form VII: Juyo

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He is powerful but not always applies his strength in the right place. He is quick an agile but doesn't always use that to his advantage.

GEAR:
Double bladed grey lightsaber
Yellow lightsaber
Black/ dark brown robes
Translator Droid named Baroke made of Mandalorian Metal

SHIP:
A small fighter like with room for a couple people.Name: Krayt Dragoon

PETS:
N/A

PERSONALITY:
He has had much experience on losing and everytime someone close dies he nearly falls apart. With leaving the order he has taken to reading any book he can get to to know what has been happening. As having years of wisdom placed in him he sees himself as a fountain of knowledge and guidance. He seeks friends and people to trust.

HISTORY:
He was brought before a Jedi as a child and learned he was force sensitive. He was then taken and trained as a Jedi. Cor then went to a planet to act as a sort of peacekeeper. The planet ended up having a civil war and Cor was in the center. During a street fight Cor was knocked to the ground and almost killed.But he called forth some anger and let out some force lightning killing his four attackers. As soon as he could he went to the spaceport and had to cut through several of his enemies. He didn't use any force powers because he felt tainted somehow. Since this knowledge about him using Dark Side powers would soon get out he left the order and became a mercenary. He tok a few random gaurd jobs and got some money till he was sent to look for one who appeared to be a force-user. Cor went looking around and found him. Cor fought the Sith kinght who was looking for a mysterious group called the Grey Jedi. He killed the Sith and took all the information the man had got over the years. With his eyes finally open he used the knowledge to find the Grey Jedi master and upon finding him pledged his allegience. He is soon going to be trained.

KILLS:


DUELING RING MATCHES:


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:


ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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Me likes, but I think Nexus may ask you for a little more history.
 

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Oh and one other thing, Vaapad was a style of form seven created by Mace Windu; form seven was called Juyo at this time.
 

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DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Speaks english as well as forty other languages.
DOMINATE HAND: ambidextrous

For one, English is called Galactic Basic IU. For two.. or for second... whatevah... ahem... forty...? Even for his age isn't that a bit... much?

As well, ambidextrous-ness isn't very well received here, just to warn you. You won't be rejected or anything, but the aforementioned fact will probably not be liked.
 

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How does a wookiee speak Galactic Basic anyway?
 

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Me likes, but I think Nexus may ask you for a little more history.
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Solus said:
For one, English is called Galactic Basic IU. For two.. or for second... whatevah... ahem... forty...? Even for his age isn't that a bit... much?

As well, ambidextrous-ness isn't very well received here, just to warn you. You won't be rejected or anything, but the aforementioned fact will probably not be liked.
So, C-3PO was fluent in over six million forms of communication. Forty is a pushover.

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How does a wookiee speak Galactic Basic anyway?
He can't, unless he was born with damaged vocal cords, in which case a Wookiee can't speak Shyriiwook. Also, note a Wookiee actually can't speak any other language then Shyriiwook. Because their vocal cords can't form the words. Like Gamoreans.
 

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Everyone took what I was going to say...
 

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Your lightsaber form is still wrong, it's Juyo not Vaapas, other than that the update looks okay...although I can't say Nexus won't find something wrong lol

And I've never heard of a black lightsaber...it seems kind of a misnomer as black can't emit light (if my awful understanding of physics is right) black is the only colour that can't isn't it? Anyway I'm not complaining, I think a black saber would be cool.
 

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Nexus, you just made the list. Also black sabers cannot exist.
 

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I am certain with the right rock you could do anything.

I swear I wasn't trying to make a crack joke.
 

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Well, it does say that in the most glorious days of the Order, there were lightsabers of every hue imaginable... But black/darkness is the absence of light, and lightsabers are tangible beams of energy that emits light. Black-colored lightsabers would be invisible then, hence not really a black lightsaber.
 

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Hey I have an invisible lightsaber!
 

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Oh crap: Corbacca's going to kill us all with an invisible lightsaber...
 

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MUAHAHAHAHAHA! But since you know my plan you will be first!
 

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#1. Heron's training on a planet that no one except the Jedi Council knows about, so he's safe. I don't even know exactly where he is.

#2. Cpl. Sokou travels frequently, so good luck finding her.

#3. Kuuki is in the middle of a war. Expect tons of Sith and merc alliance troops.

#4. Ninde is training with a Sith Lord. Good lucking fighting Drun0riginal.

I think I'm covered ^_^
 

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One crazy wookiee in the right place can take down anything :)
 

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although I can't say Nexus won't find something wrong lol
Here we go. To many force powers for a Padawan. Dual-phase lightsabers are never given to Padawans. NEVER. They're incredibly hard to master. He's damn OP. Nerf the stats. Not even Dusan has such great statistics. And as stated, Black lightsabers can't exist.
 

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Who cares aboot Black Sabers, its all about being creative and having fun as long as it isnt causing mass disruptivism. :D

Though the force powers and the lightsabers could do fixing. Wee more history wouldent hurt.
 
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