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NAME: Karnas.
AGE: 29
SPECIES: Gand


FACTION: The Jedi Army
RANK: Jedi Knight.


HEIGHT: 1.56 meter
WEIGHT: 65 kg
HAIR COLOR: none.
EYE COLOR: white/grey


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Karnas was, like most of his species, born on Gand. His parents quickly found out that he was force sensitive, and they hoped to become famous as the parents of one of the legendary findsmen. Thus, his parents offered him to the findsmen clan, whom happily accepted their offer. Karnas quickly showed potential as a findsman, and most members of his clan thought that he would become the strongest among them. However, in order to become the strongest, he would have to make sacrifices. At the age of 2, they had already exposed him to chemical baths and genetic manipulations in order to create knob-like growths on his exoskeleton. It meant that he would be far less agile, but he would be a great hand-to-hand combatant. It could be said that his entire youth had one purpose; make him ready for combat and war.

He received his first official orders at the age of 12. The orders were simple; use the rituals he learned to track down 'criminals'. Karnas tracked down many of these so called 'criminals', oblivious to the fact that these were good people, whom would be tracked down and murdered by his clan after he had located them. His clan eventually instructed him to assassinate a leader of a nearby village. Karnas managed to track the leader down with ease, but after having beaten his bodyguards, he couldn't finish the job. The fear in the man's eyes, it horrified him. He wouldn't be able to return to his clan without a trophy, showing that he had truly killed a living being. But he didn't want to return to his clan anyway, so he was left with a choice. Risk staying on Gand, where tracking him down would be easy, or leave the planet now he still could. Either way, once they found out about his inability to kill, they would come for him. It wasn't a choice after all, he had to leave.

The decade of training as a findsman proved to be very useful, because he already knew the necessary skills to survive in the galaxy. Members of his clan had gone after him, but he had managed to avoid them so far, although there were some really close calls. It took his clan three years to corner him, but their actions didn't go unnoticed. A young Jedi Knight happened to be near Karnas the moment his clan tried to kill him. The knight, unable to stand by and do nothing, saved Karnas his life. It didn't take long before the knight realized that Karnas was force sensitive. The knight asked Karnas to join him on his journey, and Karnas accepted his offer.

Of course, Karnas was too old to become a youngling. Despite this, he still tried to master the basics of the Force and became known as one of the better students in his year. There was however, one part of his training he refused to utilize: combat. Yes, he constructed a lightsaber and knew how to use it, but he had seen the devastating effects of violence and death. Even in his stages as a padawan, he was rarely seen with a lightsaber. He was a pacifist, not a warrior, or so he thought.

Karnas managed to become a knight while upholding his ideals. Fighting was never an option in his eyes, not even when diplomacy seemed to fail. Because of this mindset, the order sent him on a mission to Haruun Kal. Shortly after his arrival on Haruun Kal, something terrible happened. He felt it through the force; Tython, the beacon of light, was destroyed. His situation quickly became worse, for the mission happened to be a trap. His ship was blown up, and he was forced to flee deep inside the jungle. Haruun Kal was a dangerous place and Karnas was forced to let go of his ideals. He became more combat focused as the years passed by, fighting off many native humans and predators.

It took him nearly four years to escape from Haruun Kal, and an additional year to find his way back to the Jedi Order, now know as the Jedi Army. The jungles of Haruun Kal have left their mark, but Karnas is once again ready to faithfully serve the Jedi.


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Despite being a Jedi, Karnas hasn't neglected his training as a findsman, and the culture of his people. Like most other gands, he is cautious, patient and slightly xenophobic. He doesn't feel obliged to refer to himself as 'this gand', despite being forsaken by his people. Instead, he just refers to himself as 'i', like most other beings in the galaxy. He generally feels like a disgrace to his clan and his species as a whole, thus he rarely talks about his youth, parents, clan or training. In fact, running away from his clan bothers him so much, that he often meditates on the matter. Did he make the right choices? Or should he never have left his planet?

This inner conflict goes further then just regretting his actions. He absolutely hates himself; because he crushed the hopes of his parents and his clan. He didn't even want to be a findsman, he didn't even want to be a gand at all. He would've rather been a human or near human, someone with a skin and the ability to move freely without being restricted by a genetically enhanced exoskeleton. He frequently feels trapped, and not being able to breathe air doesn't help either. It's the reason why he's fascinated by Twi'lek dancers and acrobats. He believes himself to be born to fight and kill, and it's exactly what his clan trained him to do for more than a decade. Karnas often tries to prove that he is not a tool meant for killing, and has therefore vowed to never take a life. Because of all his regret and inner conflict, he likes to spent his time alone to meditate.

Not only does he question his own actions, but he questions the actions of the order aswell. Karnas believes in the unifying force, patience and looking in the future, instead of the now. Especially during the galactic war between the Army of Light and the Sith Empire, does he question the principles of the Jedi. Despite his critism, he's a true pacifist and a very selfless person. He's strict, but friendly and he enjoys company a lot more than he makes it look like. He especially likes the company of animals and people whom look far from human, because he can relate to them. Humans rarely notice how discriminating the galaxy really is, but the non-human species often do.

The jungles of Haruun Kal have shown him how brutal nature is, and he has therefore developed somewhat of a warrior's mentality, which is strange for a former pacifist. His emphasis has shifted from philosophy to combat, and he's able to instantly turn his rather kind personality into a cold-hearted warrior should the need arise. However, this does bring him very close to the dark-side, and long battles may therefore permanently corrupt him.


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Karnas his life revolved around training to kill, and later to protect. For that reason, he became a guardian, reylying on trances, force acrobatics and his findsman training to protect the galaxy. The findsman had their own martial arts, which Karnas perfected by implementing the force in those techniques. Not only did he perfect the martial arts of his people, but also their tracking ability. Karnas is able to use the mist of Gand to track nearly anyone, if they aren't protected by other findsman or strong force shields. Karnas is only able to utilize this, if he knows his targets identity.

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Gamr Hang

AGE

► 28
SPECIES
► Shistavanen
HEIGHT
► 1.82 m
WEIGHT
► 67 kg
EYE COLOR
► Brown
HAIR COLOR
► Brown
HOMEWORLD
► Uneva Prime
GENDER
► Male
FACTION
► The Jedi Army
RANK
► Jedi Knight
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Yes, trained.
BIOGRAPHY
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Hang grew up on Uneva Prime, the homeworld of his species. His future seemed bright, until the great winter came. Food and shelter became scarce, and this marked the beginning of a large scale shistavanen civil war. Hang lost his mate in this civil war, despite his many attempts to protects his pack. After four years, the Jedi finally intervened. With the help of some shistavenen such as Hang, they managed to end the civil war. Hang lost pretty much everything, but there was another path. The Jedi invited him to join them. Naturally, he accepted.

His training as a Jedi wasnt easy. He had learned to always keep moving because of the cold environment on his homeplanet, but the Jedi expected the exact opposite of him. Namely, sit down and meditate. Luckily, he made up for it by his brilliant fencing, empathic and diplomatic skills. He quickly ascended to knighthood, following the path of a jedi guardian. As a guardian, he started to develop an interest for cultures and lightsaber combat. Although that wasnt what defined him as a person. He became rather famous for staying on planets after their tasks were done, to support and help the victims. It earned him his nickname, 'the loyal dog'.

He felt the destruction of Tython through the force, during the aftermath of one of his missions. He knew he had to go into hiding, and went to the only other place he could call home: Uneva prime. He left his identity as a Jedi behind him, and ascended to the position of pack leader. Hang was one of the wisest among the pack leaders, and the only one who had ever left the planet. Because of this, he was chosen as a representative of his species. This new life even came with a new love. He now had a family, even children. But it didnt satisfy him, because he had once been a Jedi. The seven years on his homeplanet were harsh, he had to fight for territory, and utilized his lightsaber against the corrupt traders whom tried to steal their ice. It certainly made him famous among the shistavanen, but the sullustans learned of his existence aswell. The sullustans never betrayed him to the sith, whom ruled the galaxy at that given time. Instead, they supported him and often asked for his judgement.

One faithful night, the news reached him; the jedi had reunited under the banners of the Jedi Army. Hang promised his pack and family that he would return to them, but the galaxy needed the light of the Jedi, and the Jedi needed numbers. He would fight for their cause, and bring peace to the galaxy.

Gamr immediatly noticed it after he left Uneva Prime; a small spasm in his left leg. Naturally, this wouldn't be alarming, but it has gotten worse since he rejoined the Jedi. It has prevented him from returning to active duty, and he currently instructs initiates on Form I.


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Gamr is the kind of person you'd go to when you're in desperate need of help. He has a good judge of character, and is a very fatherly person. That may seem weird for his generally young age, but he's already at half of his species lifespan. Gamr is therefore a very mature and caring person, whoes advice is rarely ignored.

Of course, he's not a perfect being. Gamr has lost both friends and family, which has made him overprotective and a bit obsessive with protecting the initiates. If someone would die under his watch, he would certainly succumb to an endless grief. Gamr his great skill with force empathy further boosts his own emotions, and this is both a blessing and a curse. Namely because he can easily get caught up in what happens around him, be it good or bad.

Gamr has been a pack leader for a long time, and he had to fight to defend both his pack and position. Leaving his pack for the second time was a hard choice for him, and he's still quite conflicted. He knows that returning to Uneva Prime would result in his death, because he would no longer be able to survive the harsh conditions for another six years. However, he did promise to return. Gamr intends to die on Uneva Prime, and is therefore rather hesistant to give his life for the Jedi cause. And gamr is rather ashamed because of this.

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Hang has his personal ship, a rebuilt reconnaisance ship. This ship was originally in the possession of the Uneva Prime Water & Ice company, but they gifted it to Hang in his years as a pack leader and shistavanen representative. Hang outfitted it with two turrets, and some forward guns. The ship is equipped with a hyperdrive, and is made for long travels.
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