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Valik Extremis

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DARTH EXTREMIS

NAME Valik Extremis
AGE 600
FACTION
Sith

Biography



*BRIEF SUMMARY*
Valik was born on COLUMUS, years ago amidst a war known as the First Great Schism. Seeing how his species loved their isolation, they joined up along side the Jedi aiding in the war. Valik grew fond of the mystical abilities the Jedi had used and turned his course in hopes to train in the Jedi temple. Valik was hard at work proving himself to an adept amongst his fellow Jedi. Unable to physically wield a saber talon grew extremely powerful with telekinesis wielding his sabers with only a thought. Growing tired of constantly having to limit his mind in training to focus on the sabers and simultaneously telekinetically moving his crippled body, he modified his species mental hover pod to not only carry him but to also aid him amongst battle. Growing stronger with his powers talon was able to take on almost any foe that crossed his path.

Seeing valik had a vast knowledge of the force, he felt he could take on anyone and any Sith, which made him exiled from being able to join the council. Valik set out with a few other Jedi; against the councils orders, in secret to investigate a Sith gathering which turned out to be an ambush. Resulting in the life of a few Jedi and the rest fleeing, Valik with his arrogance he stayed behind, thinking he was able to handle the dozens of Sith. Little did he know he had over estimated them, and was over run. Barely escaping with his life he fled, unaware of his wounds he approached their ship. When he arrived, the remaining Jedi had already left him, stranded with the Sith still in pursuit.

Bleeding out and now aware of the extent of his bodily damage, valik wheezed fighting for air. His lungs fatally wounded and slowly failing, the Sith hovered around him. Even though defeated valik struggled, attempting to fight them away. His body lay near death, ever so slowly dying. One of the Sith stepped forward and picked talon up, carrying him away.

After a few dark decades, valik "arose from the ashes" with new look on life. When his Jedi brothers left him to die, his enemies whom tried to kill him, took him in, liberated him and gave him a new life.

Filled with hate and anger, valik arose to the name Darth Extremis. Devoting himself to the downfall of the Jedi order.


Personality


Full of anger and hate towards the jedi and their allies. Has no tolerance towards traitors and liars. Holds grudges and will do anything for revenge.


Physical Description

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Valik is a highly evolved and sported a large cranial cavity and stood 1meter tall. With a hairless, noseless head which made up a third of his height and had immense black lidless eyes with worm-like veins on his temples. However, his mental evolution had an impact on his physical body resulting in his physique deteriorating. As a result, his boneless legs became appendages that no longer were able to support his own body weight, so he uses a mental hover pod of his own design to move about in and out of combat. His body became simply a repository for his damaged lungs where he was forced to use a respirator to breath which coveres his nose, mouth and lower jaw, and had to wear customized mandalorian body armor to protect his 2 hearts and other invaluable bodily organs. Valik is a highly specialized organism with his brain containing four cerebrums and over one hundred lobes with each being dedicated to an independent function. Beyond the brain, the other organ that had developed in importance was his eyes, which is the only link between his highly evolved brain and the world around him. Which developed more than being simple photoreceptors, as they were able to see all the wavelengths in the electromagnetic spectrum. This had resulted in him being able to "hear" through his eyes by detecting and analyzing the frequency of sound or radio waves. This increased development of his visual senses had led to a loss in other organs with him losing the sense of smell, and holding only a vague sense of touch and pain.


Gear &Equipment


Rides a Hover pod with 6 robotic arms attached to the rear and sides of the seat and has 2 blasters attatched to the front hidden away. Wears a Custom (life support) mandalorian armor. He Carries 9 lightsabers (3 telekinetically wielded and 6 robotically arm wielded). Uses a Respirator to breathe.
 
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My opinion, I'm new so Its not my call, but.... this character seems a little to OP.... to telekinetically wield a signal saber is hard enough, but to wield three you would need to have mastered or be an expert in force telekinesis (The only other person I ever recall doing this was starkiller in his fight against maris brood). Also... He starts the game with 9 lightsabers!? (Don't need to explain myself there). He would make a Great NPC villain though!
 

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My opinion, I'm new so Its not my call, but.... this character seems a little to OP.... to telekinetically wield a signal saber is hard enough, but to wield three you would need to have mastered or be an expert in force telekinesis (The only other person I ever recall doing this was starkiller in his fight against maris brood). Also... He starts the game with 9 lightsabers!? (Don't need to explain myself there). He would make a Great NPC villain though!
Well he IS a columi. They were already amazing telekinetically.
 

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My opinion, I'm new so Its not my call, but.... this character seems a little to OP.... to telekinetically wield a signal saber is hard enough, but to wield three you would need to have mastered or be an expert in force telekinesis (The only other person I ever recall doing this was starkiller in his fight against maris brood). Also... He starts the game with 9 lightsabers!? (Don't need to explain myself there). He would make a Great NPC villain though!
His role is to just be a straight villain. And nothing more. I put an application in to actually be one of the sith FL so if i get it then he most definitely will be it
 

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in that case sounds good, i didn't know his race had a telekinetic advantage.
Also did you draw that, if so good work man!
 

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Ya i was bored. Im gonna finish it on tuesday. Thank you. Its not great but it helps the imagination
 

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I'm bad at the art stuff, so I gave a link to hero machine 2.5 with a code for my character :p
 
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