Cassian Dragunora

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Name:Cassian Dragunora
Surname:Cas
Age:21
Species:Human
Gender:Male
Sexual Orientation:Heterosexual
Force Sensitive?:Yes,But was untrained
Faction:Sith Order

Appearance:He normally wears a Black hoodie which covers his entire Black hair.His pants Have like a pair Knee-Protectors.his outfit are Coated with Cold-resistant material which gives it a Slight Blue-ish Color.He has a Scar at his right arm as his Birth mark,since a Surgery Droid "accidentally" Slashes his Arm with a surgical knife during delivery.He has Blue eyes,and his skin tone is Peach-White-ish.

Attributes:He has a rapport for Technology.He does'nt like to be noticed,so he like to keep a low profile.This makes him good at concealing his Tracks.Does not excel when it comes in Physical expertise.

Personality:He is borned in a Rough,Cold Colony world of Braius 3,so he was trained to be observant and adopt a "wait and see"Attitide in Making moves.He is a bit Friendly but still Wary to strangers.

Skills:To compensate for his lack of Physical Capability,he is an adept when it comes to Common droid Behaviour,and also Technological espionage.His Force Abbilities are quite raw,Since he discovered it when he was 19.

Gears:He hated wearing intricate Equipments,so he decided to play it simple.He has a control panel that was built on his right Glove which controls a Modified Scout Drone.He also Has a Small Visor connected to his Left eye which he can use to Locate or Hack Certain Computers(Anything that wasn't connected to a Powerful Firewall).
 

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Please tell me if there are something there that is Forbbiden.If there is,I am gonna commit the sacred ritual of Hara-Kiri.
 

christhebetrayer

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hey there myth, first of all, that scout drone will need a write up for that in tech forums if you want to use it and that small hacking visor is way too advance for this timeline and would likely not be approved, you can also start with two lightsaber if you want but they need to be in your equipment section to say that you have. I would also recommend checking out the Tech Compendium making it easy to find already approved equipment.

Also, your character needs a bio, where were his born, how was his childhood, how why did he join the sith empire etc, this is standard for all character and not really optional and to add to that I would also expand on his personality it's little to short I would at least expand it to a full paragraph if not more so we can get fully idea how he acts as a person, I would look up at approved profiles for examples.

Anyway, this is just my feedback as a player you don't have to listen to it but the character mods will likely bring up these issues I have mentioned.
 

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As this profile is not complete I have moved it to the Player Workshops forum.

@christhebarker 's review is correct so please do everything he mentioned.
 

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Thanks.I'll do the needed Changes after I have finished my works.
One question.Is The Crossguard-Type Lightsaber Allowed?I heard it is an Ancient Design In Legends And Canons.(Plus,I know Certain types of Lores because I have a Star Wars Chronology book.)
 
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