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Much better. This is still a work in progress, as there is much you can improve on, but I'll add him to the roster so you can get started. As your character grows and gains experience, you should come back here and add to it. As a writer, you may eventually decide to rewrite the entire profile to make it even better. Just don't let it end here. Don't let this be the last time you consider changing anything. You should always aim to improve your work. Anyway, best of luck.
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