Carthus Phoenix Kira

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Carthus Phoenix Kira

Born

► 478 ABC
Age
► 22
Species
► Human
Homeworld
► Unknown
Occupation
► Batchelor / Thief
Residence
► Corellia
Family
► Mother: Zara Kira
Father: Jexz Kira III
Faction
► Independent
Hight
► 6' 1"
Build
► Atheltic
Weight
► 176 lbs
Hair
► Black
Eyes
► Vibrant Blue
Force Sensitive
► Yes
Strength

Loyal
► Loyalty is something that has been bred into him from a very young age, to keep those that are close to you safe to never leave a person behind, to aways have their backs. Or to pull them up when they are out of line​
Charasmatic
►The life of a well off family has of course afford him the chance to mingle and dine with multiple people through the Galaxy, this alone was practice over the years, a fine art that was perfected and still being perfected over the course of time​
Intellegent
► Having experianced a good education from the cost of his family small holdings and fortune he was able to attend a good school, even experiancing a level of home tuition from time to time. This has brough on a level of intellegence, though perhaps it is more book smarts than it is practical intellegence​
Compassionate
► He shows compassion to most people he meets, if not respect to them. Of course there is a time and a place for everything as he was told, though he is not above handing over a few credit or buying a person a meal or two. His family at one time invested in an orphanage where it was required that each family member would spend at least four hours a week there one day giving something back​
Pranster
► He has a cheeky side, and not one to pass up a good laugh when possible. He has been caught a number of time setting up his friends to fall into a trap or two. This gives him a level of a deceptive personality however it has never been honed in that way.​

Flaws

Compassion
► Though one of his strengths it is also a weakness of his, his compassion can cause his temper to flare, for him to become brash and bold On more than one occasion it has gotten him into trouble​
Temper
►He has an extremely long fuse when it comes to his anger, but should he lose his temper it will go at full force. Losing sight of the here and now and even to a degree seeking revenge​
Youth
► Even though he is of age he is still young to the ways of the galaxy, some what niave at times​
Arrogant
► He is not often willing to change his mind without some kind of fight, be it verbal of physical.​

Talents

Force Sensitive
► Only a few of his family were force sensitive, what with either family emmbers having latent force sensitivity or none at all, it becamea bit of a lottery as to who was force sensitive. He had been told stories about the past force users and those of sith who wield such power but never thought much of it, after reading through his families history later on life however he became aware that perhaps he too had a connection. Unconsiously has "gut feelings" about things, or an object may move without him willing it.​
Aerobatic
►He not only keeps fit from running, but also stretched and exercises that has improved his flexability. It is not unheard of for him to be seen going for a midnight run, not always on the ground and often on roof tops.​
Sword training
► His family has a tradition that all children learn the art of combat growing up, mainly that of a saber or sword, he took this to heart, carrying a collapsable vibro blade with him most places he goes.​

History

Overview

► Carthus was born into a loving well off family, where he had most of his needs in life taken care of. His family is new to some ways and old in others the man that started it all and his family heritage was a nothing more than aChild when the attack on Tython happened Centuries ago, though he was lucky enough to escape with his life he lost a lot that day, mainly hope as well as his recently adoptive family and guardian, since then he saw fit to carry on the name and the heritage and took to starting a small business which he built at first through mercenary work. Until finally earning enough money to invest in manufacturing. That investment still holds today, which his father used to sit on a board for until the accident when Carthus was only 14 years old.​

The story goes that the ship his parents were on suffered a 1 in he can't remember chance of a hyperspace collision where they broke up and were scattered across the stars, however there was another story to go with that, one of greed and power grabbing. The story of another investor wanting to take his father’s shares and position within the company of course being too young to inherited and not knowing much the shares of the father got passed to the boy, who in a moment of luck and wisdom sold the majority share hold to the partner, this in turn removed the target from the young heir to the company and allowing him to still live off the dividence of what few shares he kept in the company.​

Education and Training

►He was enrolled in a private education system by his parents as had all of the family in the past, snobbery was high and bosting was always present. This was something that thankfully his father always guided him away from, getting the boy to take part in charitable work (Which for a long time Carthus saw as nothing but a PR exercise to show how great their family was) His training and education didn't stop at school, when school was over it would be two hours of combat training, no Kira family member was to ever be unprotected, they were trained to protect not only themselves but their family.​

Carthus like man of his family suffered with his temper, after one incident at school which resulted in Carthus being expelled his father told him about how like him he too suffered with his anger, it was then that he took his son on a trip to Alderaan where they spent the next few nights living in nature and surviving off basic rations. With no one around or additional stimuli the young ten year old found a level of calm, his father taught him how to channel his rage constructively.​

But soon his anger returned once they returned home, so his father came up with a plan and began to spar with Carthus, Purposefully winding the young boy up during saber practice only to disarm him in moments few. Each disarm and bruise a lesson that was slowly drilled into the young boy till eventually he realised his father was baiting him on purpose. Once he began to control his temper the matches began to last longer, the aches and pains became less and less. One day after a match his father told him “See, your anger you choose to lash out at people with often hurts you just as much if not more if you are not careful”.​

Run up to adulthood

► After his parents death he was angry, this anger sent him into a spin of depression, the boy started to refuse to leave the house much, taking solace in his family’s library room where he read about the formation of the company, fantasy books, lore and myths with legends. Within the books he came across an old drawing that was out of place to all of the other books. It was held in text of “Rise of the Hutt Cartel”, it was a childish drawing of a pile of rocks near a waterfall much like those his family visited on Alderaan, along with the drawing was a simple necklace holding a carved stone bound in some animal hide.​

Carthus never learned where or what that was from within any of the texts, but it appeared to have something to do with Ryloth by the looks of it.​

After a long year of being isolated in his family estate Carthus took to going out at night, mostly out to the roof top of his home, the curiosity of a teenager began to emerge, seeing a high building and wanting to know its view he began to explore the streets of the city he lived in.​

Each night Carthus would explore a bit more and a bit more, soon the exploration turned to climbing and exploring. The Climbing turned to scaling and running. Always pushing to reach the next height or the next extreme.​

Current

► Carthus now a young man and almost at the peak of his physical fitness or so he thinks anyway, mostly due to his later teenage years spent running around the streets of his home town and scaling walls. His charming manor has wooed more than one lady over the latest years and his name is known in a few minor circles. People still expect the young man with his charismatic ways and athletic physique to join the military. With his past as they say they are sure he would be an officer in no time at all. However that doesn't interest the young man, all that interests him is making the world a little less painful to live in.​

He continues to explore and try to learn more about his families past when he can and where he can, wanting to know if he has any relatives or if he is the last of his family line. For in the end Carthus most of his life felt the ache of missing that, a family that he once had.​


Notes and Equipment

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  1. DH-7 Blaster Pistol
  2. Collapsible Vibro-Sword
  3. XS-100 Light Freighter
  4. Small Estate on Corellia
  5. B-Series Astomech Droid
  6. Hand made stone Necklace
 
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So a few things:

1. Please add in his weight, just in case it becomes relevant for PvP
2. Is this character descended from a character from last TL? If so could you provide a link to the character and did that character survive till the end of the TL?
3. While unconsciously using the Force is alright for stuff like minor TK, the stuff about enhancing his speed and making great jumps is something that needs training. That will have to go
4. How did his father receive whatever training he had? Not comfortable with an entire family line passing down Force knowledge like that, the Sith would surely have tapped them up at some point.
 

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@Wit

*GASP* how could you ask a person their weight, that's private that. No worries added :)

I have put hyperlinks into areas of the text on the history that link back to aspects including the other character if it needs adding to be a bit easier to find will amend

in terms of the force and his father, I have made it so the force only became present in a rare few of the family but never was consciously there. And his father taught him meditation / a level of control with his emotion rather than any force abilities
 

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Approved!

Keep in mind the estate on Corellia would have to be something small, if it's something significant then it'll need a lore write-up. But like a small house is not a problem!
 

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No worries . Was tempted to make some kind of Wayne manor but small is more than good enough :p

Thank you
 

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@Jexz Something I missed when I reviewed this, partly due to a mistake on my part regarding the descendant character rules. A character from the last TL needs to be portrayed in a manner befitting their actions in the previous TL. As your character was not well known enough to be known 500 years later, I'm gonna have to ask that you remove the bits about Carthus discovering his memoirs from the bio. Your character can be a descendant, but he cannot really know who the ancestor was because it's been 500 years and Jexz didn't do enough to be known after so long. The memoirs effectively go against that as Carthus now knows literally everything about him. Using memoirs to know about him seems very much against the spirit of the rule to me. You're free to try and acquire them through a plot, in which case the plot mods will judge if it makes sense for such a record to have survived for so long, but it can't be part of the bio itself.
 

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No worries , I have an idea of how to adjust it . I will write it up the thoughts and ping you a message just to see if your okay with it.

To be honest like the idea more of plot character dev as you said also.
 

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@Wit

Made some changes, stripped out a lot of the history of the Family, keeping it down to some history on the company but has tie in stuff to open up potential expansion into family history for sub Character Plot Dev later.

Overview part of history is only to be used for a plot build it is not known to Carthus Character which I think i stated in the main body as well.

I have also amended eye color while at it because brown just was boring
Changed Ship that he has for a different one that I think is more suited for a person of his background.

Stone necklace added as possesion as may use this as part of a plot dev later on if thats okay, if not shall strip it
 

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Looks good! Approved!
 
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