Calem Trasmarth

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NAME: Calem Trasmarth

FACTION:
Insurgency

RANK:
Ambassador

SPECIES: Human

AGE: 20

GENDER: Male

FORCE SENSITIVE: No

APPEARANCE: Tall and slim, with light brown hair and black eyes.

ATTRIBUTES:
Calem is a good speaker and has a good ability to convince others to accept his ideas. He is a person loyal to a cause and will always offer help to those who need it. He is not a good fighter, preferring to resolve the situation through dialogue, but he has a good aim when using a weapon.

PERSONALITY:
Calem is a loyal and helpful person, always ready to help when needed. He is also a little dreamy, believing that with the return of democracy there will be peace in the Galaxy. Calem also tends to be a bit stubborn and hates when others do not agree with what he says. He tends to avoid conflicts as much as possible, preferring more peaceful methods to solve problems.

BIOGRAPHY:
Calem was born in Hanna City on the planet Chandrila in the last years of the Old Republic, his family was influential and highly loyal to the Republic. Even when Coruscant was conquered by the Sith, his parents did not stop believing that the Republic would survive. During his childhood he studied politics and oratory, hoping that in the future he could be part of the Galactic Senate.
When the Sith attacked Chandrila and destroyed the Senate building, Calem and his family managed to escape to the planet of Alderaan, there he learned how to use a weapon, a really desperate measure for a chandrilan since Chandrila is a peaceful planet, discovering that he has a good aim and how to pilot a ship, not being an excellent pilot, but knows enough not to die by piloting a ship.
When Alderaan was also dominated, his parents died in the conflict, being identified enemies of the Empire. Calem escaped this fate, fleeing to territories controlled by the Jedi. There he took knowledge of the movements for the restoration of the Republic, principally the Insurgency, in which he saw a great way to use his political talents to help restore the democracy.

SKILLS:
He is an excellent speaker, has a good aim and is a moderate pilot.

GEAR:
Always carries a hidden blaster pistol in case of emergency.
 
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Hey @JohnV

I quite like this character and the idea behind him! His personality fits well with his backstory and each other trait, in my opinion.

The only thing that I would say you could improve, in terms of this profile is possibly saying what gear he uses in more detail (You can use the Tech Compendium for a list of all approved tech).

Some ideas that I had in regards to 'fleshing it out' a bit more, if you wanted to: How did he gain his piloting/marksmanship skills? How did he find out about the Insurgency/go about joining them? Also, you could expand his appearance to suit his democratic skills (maybe he has an intimidating stance and has something about him that makes him more likeable/unlikeable or strong willed, eg. A scar).

Those are just some thoughts that you do not have to adhere to in any way (That's up to @Relent ). It's just my opinion/ideas.

~SG

P.S. Feel free to contact me if you have anything to ask etc.
 

JohnV

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Hey @JohnV

I quite like this character and the idea behind him! His personality fits well with his backstory and each other trait, in my opinion.

The only thing that I would say you could improve, in terms of this profile is possibly saying what gear he uses in more detail (You can use the Tech Compendium for a list of all approved tech).

Some ideas that I had in regards to 'fleshing it out' a bit more, if you wanted to: How did he gain his piloting/marksmanship skills? How did he find out about the Insurgency/go about joining them? Also, you could expand his appearance to suit his democratic skills (maybe he has an intimidating stance and has something about him that makes him more likeable/unlikeable or strong willed, eg. A scar).

Those are just some thoughts that you do not have to adhere to in any way (That's up to @Relent ). It's just my opinion/ideas.

~SG

P.S. Feel free to contact me if you have anything to ask etc.

Thank you! It's the first time I do something like this, so I was not entirely sure how to do,but I'll improve it.
 
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