Caden Bratts

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NAME: Caden Bratts
FACTION: N/A
RANK: N/A
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 28
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'2
WEIGHT: 180
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Dirty Blonde
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 500
FORCE SENSITIVE: No.


STRENGTH: (6/10)
DEXTERITY: (8/10)
CONSTITUTION: (6/10)
INTELLIGENCE: (4/10)
WISDOM: (4/10)
CHARISMA: (5/10)


SKILLS:
Trained in the Galactic Alliance to be a hard, mean, killing machine, Caden was the top in his class. He stuck with a Alpha Team on many Spec Ops Missions, such as assassinations and guarding potential clients. His combat skills, both close quarter and firing, are exceptional.

GEAR:
K-6 Tuk'ata
Anakkona Ballistic Assault Rifle

BIOGRAPHY:
Caden was raised by his former high ranking mother in the Galactic Alliance, Cass Bratts. She trained him to be a man who needed no help, a sole driving killer. As soon as he could he joined up, the top of his class. He joined Alpha Team, the Spec Ops Top Team, and for many years did anything what the alliance needed. No one was more gung-ho than Caden. Yet, War is never as glorious as glorious as it seems. One day, he was ordered to finish a potential threat in front of his kids. He couldn't, and left the team as soon as he could. He wandered for many years, helping people as much as he could. But he still wanders, looking for purpose.
 

Latte

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Holy giant-font-moly, Batman! :uwotm8:
 

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So, I'm not sure if you were planning on adding more to this, but you will most definitely need to add a personality section to this profile, or at least add it to his backstory. Also the bio seems a little confusing, does he have kids? Because it makes it seem like he does. Also flushing out his back story a bit more probably wouldn't hurt. Knowing some more things about his childhood or time in the GA or time after leaving the military could really help flush him out and make him more interesting.

Not a bad start though, keep it up! I'm actually really interested to see where you take him! :D
 
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