Brooke Antell

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NAME: Brooke Antell

FACTION: Unaffiliated
RANK: N/A
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 18
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5’ 2”
WEIGHT: 120lbs
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Red, cropped short
SKIN: Caucasian/tanned
CREDITS: 1,000
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Moderately strong
DEXTERITY: Nimble and agile; stealthy
CONSTITUTION: Very physically fit
INTELLIGENCE: Intelligent
WISDOM: Not very wise
CHARISMA: Has an aptitude for angering and annoying others

SKILLS: Brooke may not appear strong, but her slender frame hides a surprising amount of whipcord strength. Her forte is speed and stealth.

GEAR: A sharp tongue and searing wit

PERSONALITY: Brooke lives her life by her own rules and on her own schedule, and refuses to change for anyone. She rarely trusts people, and is always on her guard for something to happen, though it should be mentioned that once her trust and respect is gained, Brooke is an unfaltering ally and would gladly lay down her life for those of friends. In fact, though she almost never shows it, Brooke cares deeply for anyone she makes attachments with, which is another reason her trust comes with so much difficulty.

Brooke rises to adversity like no other, as she is stubborn as they come - the more you push her, the more she pushes back. Deep down, though, despite her faults, she is essentially good, as she carries no weapons, and has never killed before. It is a mystery how she has managed to stay unaligned for so long – but it is probably due to the equal disrespect and seemingly unprovoked hostility she has for all and any sides.

BIOGRAPHY: Brooke Antell was born in the wilderness of Dantooine. Her parents were researchers involved in the study and observation of wildlife, and as such paid no attention to their daughter - past making sure she was alive. The only time the child ever saw the few outposts and cities of Dantooine was when her parents needed food or supplies, and they always forced Brooke to wait at the outskirts because ‘it was dangerous’. In this manner, she not only began to breed contempt for figures of authority, but also escaped the notice of any Jedi who came to Dantooine looking for hopefuls. Brooke was strong in the force, however, deep in the wilderness of the uninhabited parts of the planet, no one took notice, and Brooke’s parents were too involved with work to give a damn. Even though she was young, Brooke got fed up with being ignored. She wanted a life of her own, away from Dantooine. She wanted to see the universe. So at the age of ten, Brooke left her home for good.

It was that day that she first stole. After all, you can’t buy a shuttle ticket with a sad story. Brooke left a note, and an apology for stealing the credits she needed – the last she would make for a while – and then left Dantooine to head to the largest city in the known galaxy; Coruscant. She arrived, a wide eyed, innocent ten year old who had no knowledge of cities or the outside world - completely naïve in all matters of the universe, light and dark. That would quickly change. She got lucky on her first day and found a husband and wife who owned a cantina that were willing to offer her a place to sleep and eat as long as she was willing to work. Brooke agreed – she wanted to make her own way, afterall, and she started immediately.

Over the years Brooke learned the hard way that only the strongest survive, so she started supporting herself by stealing and informing. She never spent more than a week in any one place, and she put herself in danger every day simply to earn enough for survival. Despite all of this; she loved her way of life. She was free – freer than she had ever been. No one told her what to do. If they did, she mouthed off at them and then ran. Years passed. The more Brooke stole the better she got at it, and she ran quite the informing gig in the slums of Coruscant. Because of her demeanor, Brooke drew trouble like a magnet, but, miraculously, always came out mostly unscathed. Little did she know, the force was the secret behind many of her skills; from eavesdropping to dodging blaster bolts. As she lived on the streets, Brooke slowly developed a bold, uncaring attitude and grew accustomed to speaking her mind wherever she went. To this day she is ignorant of the force and how it affects her.

ROLE-PLAYS:

Rodians will be Rodians...(Entrance)

Decisions at Dawn

EDIT: Tentative Character Picture-
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Join the lightside. We have cookies.

Also, I like how the character's biography is structured, allowing for Brooke to either fall to the dark side or the light side. It's your choice if you want her to become a Jedi (light), Bogan (dark), or somewhere in the middle, like Luminado (grey-ish).
 

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Well it was subtle, but still, let's not advertise our factions to new people.
 

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Hey, stop handing out faction propaganda! No es bueno! Its like walking through a mall and talking to the hot chick who ends up being someone selling something. In the words of a Mon Calamari Admiral, "It's a Trap!"
 

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Well it was subtle, but still, let's not advertise our factions to new people.

I'm not. I stated that she had some variety of force groups, mentioning the main factions along with that there are indie force factions, thus I gave an example for one. The cookie promise to the lightside advertisement was to mock the "Join the darkside" post.
 

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Which side has brownies? They are by far the best.

I figured starting neutral is always fun; things are more spontaneous that way.
 

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Hey, stop handing out faction propaganda! No es bueno! Its like walking through a mall and talking to the hot chick who ends up being someone selling something. In the words of a Mon Calamari Admiral, "It's a Trap!"

Ackbar doesn't exist yet, thus your quote doesn't exist yet. Ha!

Which side has brownies? They are by far the best.

I figured starting neutral is always fun; things are more spontaneous that way.

Luminado bakes some really good brownies. We even have some ice cream in the freezer.
 

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Not advertising, huh? -_-

The darkside has cherry pie... If you join you get it...and surprise butt secz.
 

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Not advertising, huh? -_-

The darkside has cherry pie... If you join you get it...and surprise butt secz.

Should it matter? Simply offering membership to a faction should nto be your concern. Now I'm going to read this profile and give it some good ol' critique.
 

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I doubt you even know the definition of advertising, Weiss. By the time you read this post and replied you will have already looked up the definition and then claim that you knew all along...

:P ftw
 

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Hey, I am quite certain some other fishhead has said those words 13000 years before him. At least a thousand times lol.

Their Brownies... I ate them all. Join (Whatever faction you wish), they have (object/food you desire)
 

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As far as I am aware, there's no rule against advertising(telling people about) your faction in user profiles.
 

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I doubt you even know the definition of advertising, Weiss. By the time you read this post and replied you will have already looked up the definition and then claim that you knew all along...

:P ftw

Jerek, please stop harassing me and others in every thread you enter. Instead of insulting me, how about instead you critique the character, instead of spamming. You're not the center of the universe so please get over yourself before you go off on another tangent and get yourself banned from the site... again.

Hey, I am quite certain some other fishhead has said those words 13000 years before him. At least a thousand times lol.

Their Brownies... I ate them all. Join (Whatever faction you wish), they have (object/food you desire)

Amen to that!

Now back to business at hand. I would suggest, though it's not mandatory, to add a pic for Brooke, if you can find one that fits her description and you like it. If you have difficulty finding one, I'd be more than happy to help search.
 

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Nice profile, Brooke. The beginning was a fresh concept in which I have not seen before really. The character itself has a lot of room to grow within the roleplay allowing you as others have said, to branch out into a different path.

Good job, I have a feeling you will go far within the site considering if you stay on with us.
 

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Jerek, please stop harassing me and others in every thread you enter. Instead of insulting me, how about instead you critique the character, instead of spamming. You're not the center of the universe so please get over yourself before you go off on another tangent and get yourself banned from the site... again.

Yeah, Jerek, I don't even know why that was called for. But Weiss you are being a little harsh on him. Seriously, it isn't helping anything, and you are both being difficult.
 
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