Bragl Pocoq

[SwordZX]

NAME: Bragl Pocoq
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: padawan
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 15
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'10"
WEIGHT: 150
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: Slightly tan
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Moderately strong, athletic.
DEXTERITY: Very agile and nimble.
CONSTITUTION: Very Healthy, rarely gets sick and is a Strict vegetarian.
INTELLIGENCE: Very intelligent with an above average human IQ.
WISDOM: Is fairly wise, but tends to forget to use his better judgment at times.
CHARISMA: Shy but outgoing. Friendly and loves to make people laugh.

FORCE POWERS:
Limited force push.

SKILLS:
Dual wields twin LightShoto.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Niman aka Form VI, but is not a master. He is self taught in the use of dual wielding twin LightShoto.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He is very nimble and agile. He is weak when it comes to force powers since he spends a great deal of time reading and training. He is sometimes hot headed and rash but normally cool and collected and mild mannered. He has a fear of High places.

GEAR:
Helmet and armor above and twin LightShoto inherited from his father who died when Bragl was 8. Each lightsaber has a kasha crystal in them which when wielded it helps clear the wielders mind of distractions, even during tense combat. He has not learned how to use this function properly yet.

He also wears a brown jedi cloak.
He has not started wearing his fathers armor at this time.
SHIP:
DROIDS:
PETS:


PERSONALITY:
Bragl is a shy but outgoing guy. He is a bit of a class clown but is intelligent and knows how to be serious. He is very book smart and loves to teach others what he knows. He has a positive outlook on life despite losing so many in his life.

BIOGRAPHY:
Bragl was born and raised on the beautiful and lush planet of Tython. And loves to meditate in and on nature to take his mind off all the loss he has endured in his life. His mother died while giving birth to him.

His Father was a Jedi knight that was killed by an unknown sith while on a misson to the planet Zoist this happened when Bragl was 8. He was taken in by the Jedi and inherited his fathers LightShoto and Armor.

His master was killed recently in an accident on Felucia where the ships engine malfunctioned. He is currently waiting to be reassigned to a new master.

He is recovering from the loss of his former master. And has a lot of healing to do. He is grieved that he wasn't there to help his friend and mentor during his last moments. This makes three people that he has lost in his life and it is hard on him.

To drown out the pain he focus's on his studies in the archives and practice wielding his two lightShoto in the training areas. Mostly in blaster deflection. He also meditates a lot to deal with the pain.

KILLS:


BOUNTIES COLLECTED:


DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:


ROLE-PLAYS:
Meditating on the force

 

[Sirocco]

"lightdaggers"? you mean shotos? you forgot to add weaknesses to this guy e.i. flaws in his charecter, phobias if any. it would be good to give this guy some more ditail.

 

[SwordZX]

Yes I mean LightShoto's But wasn't sure if everyone here would know what that meant.

 

[SwordZX]

Added Weaknesses and phobias

 

[Chairdor]

around the deviant link lets us see the pic without clicking it

Also you generally need more personality and biography, summaries are nice but don't be afraid to delve into his relationship with his master and his feelings towars losing him, that's kind of a big deal

 

[Sirocco]

I also adivse to make this guy much younger. a 10 year site skip will happen eventualy and your guy is kinda old for being a padawan. just helping out, would kinda suck badly if you suddenly had a 37 year old padawan. unless your charecter will start during the exile-rebelion period coming.

 

[Insoulent]

Sword, there's going to be a time-skip soon, 10 years in the timeline. Now, your character isn't obligated to change his age or anything (he's your character of course), but just a reminder. Also to help, you can add planets on where you were born, the planet your character's dad died, how he died, how that effects your character (if it even effects him), and the planet your Master died. Just easy ways to expand what you already have, without having to add to much. Other than that, you have a solid biography, if you need help with anything or have questions just send me a PM, glad to help you out in any way I can.

 

[Sirocco]

Sword, there's going to be a time-skip soon, 10 years in the timeline. Now, your character isn't obligated to change his age or anything (he's your character of course), but just a reminder. Also to help, you can add planets on where you were born, the planet your character's dad died, how he died, how that effects your character (if it even effects him), and the planet your Master died. Just easy ways to expand what you already have, without having to add to much. Other than that, you have a solid biography, if you need help with anything or have questions just send me a PM, glad to help you out in any way I can.

well said lol, thanks

 

[SwordZX]

I changed his age so that he is younger and now that the deaths are closer it effects him more. Thanks. I could use some ideas on planets and what sith killed his father.