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To finish a character that I have been working on for some time now. I really like the character idea, but I jus really cant seem to get around to finishing the profile.
Here is what I have so far, does anyone have any ideas, or anything to say that can spark me into bloody finishing it? That, and tell me what you think of it as of now.
"Hm...
And what have we here? This file just won’t do... though, I should at least see what they have to say about me. I wonder how well kept their records are."
Basic
Name: First- Alden, Last- Unknown
Race: Assumed to be human
Age: 31
Sex: Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 190 lbs
Eye Color: Green
Hair color: Blonde, usually kept short.
Distinguishing marks: A small scar on the left side of his cheek.
Alden smirked as he read all of this. "Well, most of it is correct, they wouldn’t really know that my eyes are no longer green though. So I guess that isn’t their fault." He continued down along the report to see what else they had to say about him.
Background:
It is currently unknown to us exactly where Alden was born. We do however, know that he spent some of his life on Coruscant, fairly little is known about what he did there, until he came into our employment. We know that he had some way of making money, and was fairly well off before he got here.
"Well, that was more than a little weak." Alden said as he looked over his very short background section. He supposed that since he had not really bothered to supply them with any of this information, they had not done very much in order to gain it... though they would not have found alot even if they had.
Alden pulled a pen out of his coat pocket, the long black coat went down to almost his knees. The inlays that it had in it made it so that the length was actually something that was quite useful. It had saved him on many occasions actually, when someone had thought that it would be a good idea to shoot him in the back.
He took the pen, and was going to scribble a few things into the background area but then changed his mind. Maybe they would have more later in the file.
Job Qualifications:
Alden is perfectly qualified to both work in our labs, and as a field agent.
Lab Qual.:
Skilled virologist
Very knowledgeable about symbiosis
Chemistry knowledge
Anatomical knowledge of many species
Amazing analytical skills
Field Agent Qual:
Physically fit
Skilled marksman
Very good at hand to hand combat
Seems to have a second sense( maybe a force sensitive?)
Skilled at field observation
Amazing analytical skills
"Yes, I was even quite the skilled one back then. But things have changed, and I am even better now.”
He grinned and thought about exactly what had happened to him when he had left the company. He had of course taken quite a few things with him, and those things would change him forever. It made him very glad that he had decided to study the things that he had.
He had taken a leave of this now deserted facility when he finally had figured out what he would need, and that had taken him almost a year of working for this corportation. The virus that he had created had not even been specifically made by himself, he had had enough clot around there to get a few people working under him. He had managed to convince the corporation that it was going to be a huge profit maker. Ironically, it was the reason that no one who worked at the facility was alive any longer.
The "virus" was actually more supressed symbiote than anything else. The virus part of it simply gave the symbiote a better ability to renegerate at high speeds, for when things were getting dangerous.
Here is what I have so far, does anyone have any ideas, or anything to say that can spark me into bloody finishing it? That, and tell me what you think of it as of now.
"Hm...
And what have we here? This file just won’t do... though, I should at least see what they have to say about me. I wonder how well kept their records are."
Basic
Name: First- Alden, Last- Unknown
Race: Assumed to be human
Age: 31
Sex: Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 190 lbs
Eye Color: Green
Hair color: Blonde, usually kept short.
Distinguishing marks: A small scar on the left side of his cheek.
Alden smirked as he read all of this. "Well, most of it is correct, they wouldn’t really know that my eyes are no longer green though. So I guess that isn’t their fault." He continued down along the report to see what else they had to say about him.
Background:
It is currently unknown to us exactly where Alden was born. We do however, know that he spent some of his life on Coruscant, fairly little is known about what he did there, until he came into our employment. We know that he had some way of making money, and was fairly well off before he got here.
"Well, that was more than a little weak." Alden said as he looked over his very short background section. He supposed that since he had not really bothered to supply them with any of this information, they had not done very much in order to gain it... though they would not have found alot even if they had.
Alden pulled a pen out of his coat pocket, the long black coat went down to almost his knees. The inlays that it had in it made it so that the length was actually something that was quite useful. It had saved him on many occasions actually, when someone had thought that it would be a good idea to shoot him in the back.
He took the pen, and was going to scribble a few things into the background area but then changed his mind. Maybe they would have more later in the file.
Job Qualifications:
Alden is perfectly qualified to both work in our labs, and as a field agent.
Lab Qual.:
Skilled virologist
Very knowledgeable about symbiosis
Chemistry knowledge
Anatomical knowledge of many species
Amazing analytical skills
Field Agent Qual:
Physically fit
Skilled marksman
Very good at hand to hand combat
Seems to have a second sense( maybe a force sensitive?)
Skilled at field observation
Amazing analytical skills
"Yes, I was even quite the skilled one back then. But things have changed, and I am even better now.”
He grinned and thought about exactly what had happened to him when he had left the company. He had of course taken quite a few things with him, and those things would change him forever. It made him very glad that he had decided to study the things that he had.
He had taken a leave of this now deserted facility when he finally had figured out what he would need, and that had taken him almost a year of working for this corportation. The virus that he had created had not even been specifically made by himself, he had had enough clot around there to get a few people working under him. He had managed to convince the corporation that it was going to be a huge profit maker. Ironically, it was the reason that no one who worked at the facility was alive any longer.
The "virus" was actually more supressed symbiote than anything else. The virus part of it simply gave the symbiote a better ability to renegerate at high speeds, for when things were getting dangerous.