Battle of Saleucami - Final Genesis OOC

[Prancing Yawn]

Take your time.

 

[Veritas et Lux]

sounds good

 

[Veritas et Lux]

I changed my post :D

better?

 

[Crystalmath]

Um should I still edit mine too?

 

[Prancing Yawn]

I think yours is ok, Super.

I got a post ready aswell, just waiting for a reply from Natise confirming..

secret plans..

 

[Sreeya]

Good grief you take forever.

 

[Veritas et Lux]

Good grief you take forever.

Agreed.

I'm about to post again. :CStern

 

[Prancing Yawn]

Agreed.

I'm about to post again. :CStern

Are you serious?

 

[Sreeya]

You've stalled this enough. The battle was posted on Friday. You and Natise were supposed to go first, and didn't. Sith ended up posting first after waiting 2 days on you. And now you're the only one stalling it again. If you don't post by tonight, Sith should get to take another turn. If you have a post ready, just throw it up.

 

[Veritas et Lux]

Don't be scurred. It's only [ST]pussay[/ST] sith...


sorry, hiw high reference xD

 

[Prancing Yawn]

Ok, it's up. Tell me if there's any problems with it.

 

[Veritas et Lux]

nope i dont think so. i replied too btw

 

[Veritas et Lux]

His communicator clicked off. Behind him, ten soldiers finished suiting up in special stealth suits, that would hide them from scanners and mask their heat signatures.
Hopefully.

Nuju and his troopers went down to the basement of the capitol building, where they found the entrance to the sewers in the boiler room. The soldiers activated their suits, and Nuju slipped into Force Cloak.

I'm being told that I need to change my post, however I'm going to argue my point because I carefully went over it before writing.

The line above states that his soldiers' suits would hide them from scanners and mask their heat signatures. (Hopefully.)
His soldiers are not hidden from the force, first off; and second off, the above passage states that Nuju 'slipped into force cloak', which does not define exactly what he was using the force to cloak from. I presumed that Nuju was using the 'force cloak' in the same manner that the 'special stealth suits' were hiding the troops. Lastly, even if Nuju was hiding himself from force affinity/sight, his troopers aren't so lucky to be protected; it's way too late to say that he was cloaking them all...

Thanks :)

 

[Prancing Yawn]

You're correct - Nuju is the only one not detectable with the Force. I didn't want to say he cloaked them all, cause I don't know if it's possible, and it'd be a little bit of a jerk move.

 

[Veritas et Lux]

It's not about it being a jerk move, it's a war. However, I just didn't like the fact that I was told I had to change my post because of something that had already been substantiated

EDIT: I'll learn to adapt to situations like a good writer should ;) it's a war.

 

[Prancing Yawn]

Ok. Now I won't go so easy :p

 

[Veritas et Lux]

mhm. :D neither will I... I'll start having spoilers for explicit text and my posts will be inspired by white chapel O.O' lolol

 

[Blueberrypie]

I... I squirmed when I read blue's and Super King's posts. I actually shuddered. You've written some sick shit guys. It's captivating tho.

 

[Zach]

Actually, you're all incorrect about Force Cloak. That doesn't suppress a Force-user's signature, it bends the physical light around his body.
Force Cloak

Force Stealth is what suppresses the user's presence in the Force.
Force Stealth

 

[Natise]

Alright I have a few problems with Super King's post, mainly the mortar shots. We have activated the shields, your mortars are not able to land on the building, the turrets, or on the building. Also, the GA snipers are highly trained and would be able to take out more than one of the heavy infantry, they came out of nowhere your troops would not have had that much time to react and hide. Next, you said that you lifted the turret from the ground and faced it to shoot the GA infantry. These turrets are mounted into the walls on the top of the capital, and set in place at the main gate to the capital. Lifting them off the ground would destroy them. Finally, the speeder bike trick would not work. The turrets targeting is having them shoot at enemy units, not non living objects such as the speeder bike.

P.S the troops are still in range of the shield and taking cover, the snipers and rockets are not able to hit them until your men cross the mine field.