Baldoren Caldorik

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Baldoren Caldorik


NAME: Baldoren Caldorik
FACTION: New Sith Imperium
RANK: Acolyte
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 14
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5’ 9”
WEIGHT: 103lbs
EYES: Green
HAIR: Cropped brown hair
SKIN: Pale White
CREDITS: 250
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: No distinguishing remarks
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Mediocre at best. Able to lift medium weight with difficulty.
DEXTERITY: Very dexterous. Can run quickly and quietly, able to control his body movements well.
CONSTITUTION: Average. Will fall ill every so often, though it doesn’t stay with him long. The worst illness ever suffered was the flu.
INTELLIGENCE: Higher than average intelligence. Is able to perform well with most areas of thought other than some areas of mathematics.
WISDOM: A quick and youthful wit keeps this young man from being considered wise but he does have some occasional insights.
CHARISMA: Charismatic and headstrong. It’s his way or the high way. However if he comes into contact with those of an astounding Charisma who hold his opinions he will follow them gladly.

FORCE POWERS:
Yet to learn any. His training has just begun.

SKILLS:
A silver tongue and the ability to recede into himself for deep and considerable thought about his situation. Has an excellent acrobatic and running capability.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form IV; Ataru

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Tends to dwarf other personalities and latch onto those he cannot. This may be considered a strength or a weakness, depending on whom he dominates or follows.
A considerable weakness is that, for a Sith, he has a certain... kind streak that at times prevents him from the darker aspects of his training. This tendency toward mercy means that his enemies, unless meeting Baldoren consumed with rage, may be granted mercy. This leaves them free to try and take revenge.

GEAR:
Com Link
Datapad
Holocron for journal entries
DL44 Heavy Blaster Pistol
Single Hilted Red Lightsaber, customised with a jagged shard of metal fasioned into a releasable dagger on the butt of the hilt.

SHIP: N/A

DROIDS:N/A

PETS:N/A

PERSONALITY:
As mentioned above Baldoren is a Charismatic and dogmatic individual, willing to step on anyone he deems necessary to be stepped on. Those he can’t step on he latches onto, following them into oblivion. Maybe. Eager and enthusiastic with a sharp wit and smart tongue he has a strange streak of kindness which sometimes leads to him showing unexpected and undeserved mercy.

BIOGRAPHY:
Baldoren Caldorik was born on the planet of Taris to two run of the mill human parents. He was by no means poor and was quite comfortable. It wasn’t long after he bagan walking and talking that Baldoren started to show signs of implacable reasonless ambition and passionate hatred and jealousy. He once took a knife and stabbed his father in the leg simply because he was told his place. This led to his running away from his parents home. He met a gang of young street thugs who adopted him as a sort of “little brother”. He stuck close to this gang for several years, before being ousted at the age of twelve because of the obcene amounts of petty power squabbles he started.

After a few months of lonely street dwelling a Sith Crusader, visiting Taris to hunt Jedi, found the boy. Upon noticing how Baldoren’s emotions and connection to the force were growing rapidly, he packed him into the back of his ship and dropped him on Korriban. Baldoren never heard from that Sith again, and for the next year was tossed around from temporary master to temporary master, learning shreds here and there, but only retaining the basics of Ataru Lightsaber combat form and meditation – something that didn’t calm him so much as inflame his hatred of those he was jealous of. The boy progressed quickly, and it was soon deemed he be put under a permanent Master so that he was kept in check, and his emotions harnessed.

KILLS: N/A

BOUNTIES COLLECTED: N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES: N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?p=802589#post802589
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?p=803199#post803199
 
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Toska

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Do my eyes deceive me? Did someone just write a realistically proportioned kid? Wow... in all my years I have never seen the like. Rp'd fourteen year olds are usually four feet tall and well under a hundred pounds. Anyway, interesting character.
 

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I said I'd comment so....

Mostly it's the biography. It doesn't give much of an idea about how he grew up, the full reasons behind why he ran away, how he survived on Taris, or how he joined the small gang he was apparently in(seems more like some sort of gang-wannabes), nor the reason for why the acolyte was there.

Expanding on that more would be beneficial to those who read your character's profile, as well as your own grasp of your character.

Moving on..

I just hope you're aware that the kid will possibly be considered a bit of a liability, until he actually learns some skills. But... I volunteered Anima to train him so such will be the case.

And there's my comment.

Edit: Typo fix.
 
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Baldoren Caldorik

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I see. I will touch up the biography then! Thought I'd done something stupid. I'll admit it's not my best work but it's a basis. I'll fill it out some more asap. Thanks again for your help and no need to worry, I'm aware of the risks of playing one so young.

I don't know about you Qualia but I don't know many 14 year olds who are less than 5'5"
 

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Do my eyes deceive me? Did someone just write a realistically proportioned kid? Wow... in all my years I have never seen the like. Rp'd fourteen year olds are usually four feet tall and well under a hundred pounds. Anyway, interesting character.

5'9 and 103 is a bit on the extremely small side don't you think? Not sure if I would classify it as a realistic 14 year old. The height? Yes. But the weight? No. I've actually never heard of someone with that small of a frame. Kids around 5'1 are 103 but someone being 5'9 and 103 would have to be extremely small framed and lanky as hell.
 

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I think perhaps my own weight was not ideal for proportioning then! XD I am rather lanky myself, you see, and all I had to hand was some mental arithmetic (blind guess). Still, being lanky fits his stats quite well.
 
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