Audric Cirrus

[Arcturus]

Audric Cirrus

NAME: Audric Cirrus
FACTION: NJO
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Human/Jabiimite
AGE: 22
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'9"
WEIGHT: 179 LBS
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Dark Brown
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000 Credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Only distinguishable if undressed, Audric has an abdomen scar running across his lower body, a result of his earlier surgery when he was just a child. Other then this, Audric is plain looking for a human, with no abnormal scars or marks.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Due to his declining health as a child, Audric is still desperately trying to regain his strength. Weakened from an unknown ailment as a child, Audric struggles with his health daily. This affects his muscles and strength, and its not unheard of Audric using the Force to give him a slight boost when lifting heavy objects. By himself, Audric has issues carrying heavy objects, and can only carry light.
DEXTERITY: Though weak and ill most of the time, Audric does have a sort of nimbleness to him. With a lightened frame and smaller stature, Audric has a dexterous body, allowing him to move quickly and without fear of being too slow. Though he can be clumsy when not focused, Audric has no issue with balance.
CONSTITUTION: Audric's sole problem in life stems to a mysterious illness that fell on his local village on Jabiim. Miles away from any civilization, the village's population became weak from some sort of disease, and Audric too was infected. His body wracked with pain, Audric was thankfully healed and taken away by a traveling Jedi before he could succumb to the disease. Even still, the disease crippled Audric's health, causing his pain almost daily. Constantly pale and sick, Audric relies on the Force to get him through day to day problems.
INTELLIGENCE: Due to his illness and hatred of all things physical, Audric spends most of his time reading and learning from datapads and holocrons. Intelligent enough for his age, Audric has a pure fascination of the galaxy itself, and hopes to gain more knowledge as life goes on. Dedicated to history as well, Audric hopes to rebuild the Archives of the fallen Jedi.
WISDOM: Though young, Audric is not wet behind the ears. His intelligence has gifted him the ability to think outside the box, and learn some hard truths about life. Thought high in both intelligence and wisdom, this has somewhat sullied his ability to think positively on life. Dedicated to learning more and more, Audric is wise beyond his years.
CHARISMA: Lacking in natural charm, Audric's declining health make him a grouchy person to deal with. Unable to truly charm others with his speech, do not mistake his grouchiness for anymore more then dealing with the pain. Audric can still write incredibly well, and is a great orator. Speeches come naturally to the man, but charm and conversation do not.

PERSONALITY:

Audric has lived a rather rough life, having barely survived an illness on his homeworld. Since being taken in by the NJO, Audric has come to deal with the pain daily, and as such, has become rather grumpy and grouchy. Unable to abide by recklessness and humor, the young Audric has been called several things by others his age, most of them referring to him as the "Old, crotchety twenty-something". Sarcastic and sometimes mean-spirited to those that look on the positive side of life, Audric does in fact have a heart behind his grizzled, painful exterior. He cares deeply for his family, when he can speak with them, and can, if a person can get close enough, care for a friend.

Though weak in both strength and health, Audric is an intelligent, wily young man. In addition, his talents with the Force enable him abilities that otherwise would not be initially possible for other Padawan's. Somewhat prideful in his abilities, Audric makes sure not to announce his strengths out loud. A contemplative person, Audric eyes the recent galactic wars with sadness, hoping that peace can be attained soon. Excited about learning more about the Force, Audric seems only truly happy when meditating on the power of Force can bring.
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BIOGRAPHY:

Born to a small family on Jabiim, Audric was the youngest of 3 children, both of his older siblings being brothers. Living in a small village miles away from the capital of Choal, the wet, dreary world of Jabiim was all Audric knew when he was young. Though their lives were rough and included many days of trying to survive off little food, Audric was loved by his family and survived solely on that. Had fate not intervened, Audric would've stayed on Jabiim and eventually raised a family of his own.

However, when Audric was still very young, a mysterious disease swept through the local villages. Bringing on a terrible fever, seizures and chronic pain, the disease wiped out several villagers and could not be cured by technological means. Losing both of his older brothers to the infection, it was not long before Audric came down with it as well. The disease wrecked Audric's body and left him weak and poor in health. As fate would have it, a travelling Jedi happened upon the village and was offered to stay in Audric's home. Noticing the young boys affinity for the Force, the Jedi offered to heal him, but explained to the family the importance of Audric's potential.

Audric's family, though reluctant, could not turn down the Jedi's offer. Audric was healed by the power of the Force, but even so, the illness wracked Audric's body with pain. Though the ailment had been cured and Audric would not die, he would permanently feel pain for the rest of his life. Staying true to their world, they bid Audric a tearful good-bye, and watched him leave with the Jedi. Upset at first at the idea of leaving Jabiim, Audric eventually accepted the fact that his family had saved him from the clutches of death itself by sending him away.

The Jedi brought Audric to the closest safe spot he could, and Audric was brought up as an initiate in the Force. Due to his special lifestyle, Audric was given advanced training in pain resistance, being able to calm the raging pain that threatened to destroy him. Though the pain has been slowed, Audric still feels it, and it has warped his personality greatly. The once care-free child had changed from the whole ordeal, and was now more world weary then ever before. Even so, the Jedi teachers could see the affinity Audric had with the Force, and there was talk of him being a great Sage one day.

Now a Padawan, Audric hopes to find a master willing to aid him in Force training. Excited to learn more and more of the Force and its abilities, Audric cannot wait to finally wield the awesome power of the Force and aid those that need his assistance.​

FORCE POWERS:

Force Push [l]
Force Pull [l]
Force Sense [l]
Advanced Pain Resistance [ll]​

SKILLS:

Wise beyond his years and intelligent enough to logically fix issues, Audric has many deductive and reasoning skills. Furthermore, his affinity in the Force grants him great strength when calling upon it, allowing him to accomplish great feats that other mundane Jedi could not. Rusty in combat, Audric relies on the Force itself to keep him going, and as such, has a proficiency with it, even as a Padawan.​

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form I (Shii-Cho) [l]

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Wise and intelligent even though young [x]
Dedicated and serious, not as naive as others his age [x]
Great affinity of the Force and its power [x]
Weak and poor health [x]
Generally seen as rude or mean-spirited by other students [x]
Hunger for more knowledge and power on the Force itself [x]

GEAR:
As a Jedi, Audric does not have much on his person. His robes and saber are always with him naturally, and Audric can usually be seen with a datapad, learning more about the galaxy itself.

ROLE-PLAYS:
None Yet.

 

[Ral]

Hey! Not bad for a first profile! My only issue is that you make it sound like the Jedi extorted his parents into giving him up, which a Jedi wouldn't do. I mean, he could have done that, but it isn't a very Jedi thing to do, so I don't want there to be confusion about that. The Order also doesn't tend to recruit children as much anymore, though theoretically it can, it usually doesn't as a whole. That said, it's your call what you wanna do, just make a note that if he did essentially extort his parents that this Jedi was a bit different from the others on his outlook. Or if there's another reason why this Jedi wanted Audric to join the Order that he would only heal him if Audric was allowed to join the Jedi, please list that.

 

[Arcturus]

Will do so. I will remove the extort and make it sound more like he was offering Audric's family the chance to take him and train him to his full potential.

In addition, I would like Audric to be taken away as a child as it adds more depth to him, being trained by Jedi his whole teenage life, and also means he would have a little bit more control over his abilities. I wanted to make a Jedi that was very powerful in the Force but physically weak and frail. Being brought up in the Order would definitely assist him with this.

 

[Ral]

Alrighty, thanks for answering my questions! Welcome to the Jedi Order, I'll get you officially added to the roster soon! :D

 

[Frannykins87]

Awesome profile! Would love to RP with you sometimes :)

 

[Arcturus]

Fantastic! I cannot wait to train and eventually become a Master/Sage. Thank you Ral.

I would love to RP with you Franny. Let me know when and where and we can do it.

 

[Frannykins87]

Great! My Jedi is also waiting for a master :) And really I am ready when you are. We can meet up on or near a Jedi base and have our characters even train together eventually, or learn about the galaxy something my Jedi loves to do :) Will PM you in a few minutes so not to spam this thread :)

 

[Arcturus]

Great. Cannot wait.