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History records that the only reason we exist today as free men and not the slaves of the Yuuzhan Vong is because Grandmaster Luke Skywalker found Oneness with the Force; when he gave himself up to the Will of the Force. Let us not abandon this knowledge.


FACTION: Indie-Knights of The Old Code
RANK/ROLE: Knight
SPECIES: Codru-Ji
AGE: 65
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'10
WEIGHT: 187lbs
EYES: Dark Brown
HAIR: Peppered/Brown
SKIN: White/Tan
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Typical Codru-Ji physiological traits, highly strong in the Force, Matukai tattoo over forehead going down on the side of the face beside each eye. Tattoo forming what look like beads wrapping around his left bicep, traditional and ceremonial Codru-Ji beads wrapped around his upper right bicep or laced into his hair and a thin bracelet gold in appearance on his lower left wrist.

*STRENGTH: 5
Despite the fact that Ashur's strength has weakened in his age he does keep an average strength for Jedi thanks to constant training and exercise.
*DEXTERITY: 6
Ashur is capable of moving and reacting quickly enough to counter even most Jedi. However, this does not mean he is truly all too fast, relying on short, quick movements rather than colorful bursts.
*CONSTITUTION: 7
Despite his age Ashur can take a few more hits than most others
*INTELLIGENCE: 6
Ashur has only slightly above par intelligence from the typical Jedi, capable of learning at a slightly higher rate but not at a particularly accelerated rate.
*WISDOM: 8
Having experienced the galaxy, the Jedi, and even the Sith, Ashur's greatest trait, and possibly his greatest weapon is that of his wisdom and knowledge.
*CHARISMA: 7
Ashur has found that his ability to resolve disputes without weapons has greatly increased over the years. He is quite the diplomat, but still has room to improve.

*Codruese
Codruese is his first language, one he knows well though he may not typically show it.
*Galactic Basic
Galactic Basic was the second language he learned, and one that was taught to him for nearly seven years starting at age 14. He is quite proficient in the language.
*Bocce/Trade Language
Going into a self-imposed Exile it is important to learn a language everyone speaks that allows you to lay low, or even find out some secrets you'd never learn otherwise. He is generally proficient in the language.
*Huttese
Going into a self-imposed Exile it is important to learn a language everyone speaks that allows you to lay low, or even find out some secrets you'd never learn otherwise. He can hold a conversation in this language, but he struggles with comprehension on some of the more complex words.


Combat
*Knives/Daggers 6
*Hand-to-Hand 6
*Teras Kasi Proficient
*Blasters 4
*Explosives 2
*Swords 7
*Lightsabers 7
*Form III Soresu Mastered
*Form II Makashi Proficient

*Trakata Proficient

Stealth
*Combat Stealth 5
*Tracking 7
*Slicing/Picking Locks 4
*Counter-Intelligence/Espionage 4

Misc.
*Weapons Repair/Maintenance 7
*Armor Repair/Maintenance 7
*Flight (Speeders/Starfighters/Personal Ships/etc.) 7



Weapons
*Lightsaber
The blade itself is viridian while the focusing crystal has 'imprinted' itself to Ashur. The hilt is made with Plasteel that has small pieces of Cortosis in it to make it sturdy and adorned with bantha leather and a traditional symbol of the Matukai hanging by string from the end of the hilt.

Misc.
*Datapad
*Holocommunicator

Clothes
Ashur typically wears an armorweave chest/backplate from his time studying under the Jensaari, a symbol that has been scorched away and is unrecognizable on the front of the chestplate. He will also usually wear a loose fitted shirt tied at the waist and with the kind of pants usually issued out by Matukai or Jedi with mid-calf leather boots and a scarf-like wrap made to form a hood.

He always wears tradition and ceremonial Codru-Ji beads in his hair and on his upper right bicep and a metallic bracelet on his lower left wrist.

He can also be seen wearing his old and torn Jedi Robes at times, which were dark green.



*Ballistakinesis Learned
*Tutaminis Mastered
*Force Body Proficient
*Force Stealth Proficient
*Force Deflection Proficient
*Force Weapon Learned
*Shatterpoint Proficient
*Mind Trick skills Proficient
*Force Light Proficient


I am old and have little use for words, so please, let me keep this short and all your questions in the end can be answered.
I was once indeed a Jedi, but these new ones have corrupted their own teachings, which eventually lead to my wife's death on the field of combat.
After she left me because of them I left them because of her, going into a sort of self-imposed exile.

I have seen the Zeison Sha, who despise me for being a Jedi, trained with the Matukai, and even worked trained in the Jensaari arts.
I have much history in my past, grandchildren I have never met and children I haven't spoken to in years.
I have many battles under my belt, tests, training exercises, missions for the Jensaari, Jedi, and more, and even a few mercenary related missions.
I have fell Sith, Mandalorian, Chiss, and even Jedi.
In the nearly twenty-five years since I left the New Jedi Order I have seen things from the eyes of the Sith, killed with Mandalorians, and tortured by the Chiss, and restored by Matukai and Jensaari.
These things have I seen, blinded from the Force because of the death of my wife.
But I have, in fact, seen the Will of the Force.
For the past three years it has told me to stay silent and hide - to finish my self-imposed Exile as it should be.
For the past two years I have actually listened.
But only a few days ago this sixty-five year-old Jedi was shown the Knights of The Old Code.
 
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This could be better, admittedly. I understand a character not being a man of very many words, Elijah is like that, but with your two paragraphs I learn very little about the character. He's old, seen a lot of stuff, exiled, and recently found the Jedi Separatists. What has he seen? Why is he exiled? Even if you don't go into detail, fleshing out these things are important for the writer and the reader.

Overall it's a good foundation for a solid character, it just requires some fleshing out.
 

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Was trying to leave these open so it could be developed in-character. I have a few plans for him so he is supposed to remain a general mystery, but I can flesh out a few things. ^_^

Oh, and it has said from the start he was in a self-imposed exile because he left after his wife died. That is one thing that I can't do much detail on as it pertains to his future story-line.
 
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Nice job, could be a little more detailed, but I understand now seeing your response to Django.

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Yeah, I'll try to specify on things that won't be a big thing that is supposed to be developed as a story item, but there won't be much.
 
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