Ashlynn Rys

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NAME: Ashlynn Rys
NICKNAMES: Ashly, Lynn, Ash
FACTION: The Accord
RANK: Cruciable Member (?)
HOMEWORLD: Alderaan
FORCE-SENSITIVE: Yes

SPECIES: Human
GENDER: Female
AGE: 25
HEIGHT: 5'5
WEIGHT: 120lbs

Personality
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Ashlynn is a young woman coming from the planet called Alderaan. Being a Rys, she is related to Leira Rys. She is actually her aunt. Hot headed and impulsive, she was the one who basically gave Leira her careless attitude. Being Leira's father's (Odyne's) little sister, was never an easy thing. Ashlynn had to be a bitch to him everyday just to get him off of her back. He was always one to pick, but Ash was always one to ignore it and move on until one day the switch flipped and she started giving it back.

Ashlynn wasn't a big fan of where she was living one because she had her brother beating on her, but once she fought back, he gave up on her. Since she ran from the Jedi and had no home, Ash has experience with living on the streets and is pretty street smart. She isn't a fan of strangers, but that also depends on how she is approached. She judges on first reaction and appearance. Which is an accidental flaw.

On the other hand, since Ashlynn is in a military like faction, she is very respectful to her elders and is a completely different person when it comes to the Accord and her comrades. Except to the ones who are jerks no matter what.. then she gives them what they deserve.
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Skills and Appearance
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    • Acrobatics - Adept - Ashlynn is quite skilled in acrobatics and when she isn't busy, she finds much fun in this activity and wastes time just doing acrobatics if there are no tasks she has to worry about
    • Martial Arts - Adept - She is still learning Martial arts, but loves practicing in this form of fighting, especially when it comes to lightsaber combat. She also helps others out with both of these things
Lightsaber Combat:

  • Djem So
  • Ataru
Force Abilities:

  • Force push
  • Telekinesis
  • Force Jump
  • Force Pull
  • Force Healing
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Ashlynn stands at five foot five and is petite, but very fit, giving her an advantage in martial arts. Her skin is white, her hair is brunette and she has blue eyes.

Ashlynn usually wears utilitarian clothing and doesn't like to dress up. When it comes to battle, she carries two blaster pistols and a detachable lightsaber. One side is blue and the other green. It's a double bladed saber, but it breaks in half for easier combat and a worse player against her enemy.

Ashlynn is a skill acrobat and prefers speed and ability when it comes to combat, so tighter clothing is always needed in her opinion.
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Biography
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Ashlynn was born to kind parents. Her brother is Odyne Rys. Ashlynn was born a few years after her brother and was always the one who was chosen last. Her brother Odyne, is older than her so he thought he was the boss of her. This quickly changed when she was handed over to the Jedi Order at age six, leaving her other siblings. The transition in to the Order was a hard one, and she often found herself getting homesick. Odyne made this no better. He constantly picked on her, and tried to beat her up. It didn’t end very well on his end. Since she had always been homesick, before she was trained, she ran from the Jedi and returned home.

After she had beat him up, he had given up on her, leaving her to train on her own and leaving her alone and friendless. When he returned, she was now 13 with a Rogue Jedi master who was able to excellerate her training and her brother returned with a gun and tried to get revenge for all those years ago. She ran from him. He had hit her in the back of her knee cap, but she never stopped running, but he had also got her in the shoulder.

Ashlynn had gotten out of range to where he couldn't see her and then continued into town until she passed out. Another Rogue Jedi Master had found her not far from her own ship, so she picked Ashlynn up and took her into her ship. The woman who had taken her in was named Jaya Wild. She specialized in healing, so she took Ash into her medbay and got her all healed up to the point where only scars were left as the reminders or memories.

Once Ashlynn had awoken, she had been pretty confused and quite scared of where she was until Jaya had introduced herself and talked with Ashlynn for a little bit, getting to know her. Without hesitation, Ash told Jaya her past with her brother, Odyne, to her about her previous master after her brother left her and how she could never go back to that family. After the explanation, Jaya pittied the girl, but figured it was something she was used to, so she offered for Ashlynn to shack up with her and as a return gift, be trained under her and learn more about the force and get her first lightsabers.

For the next few years, Ashlynn lived and trained under Jaya and enjoyed every bit of it. When she was 15, she earned her first lightsaber crystal, making her ice blue lightsaber and then a year later, she earned her white crystal, then making modifications to both lightsabers, turning it into a double blade or two separate blades.

Jaya helped her reconnect with her mother and father. Only to find they were dying, and her two other siblings were nowhere to be found. She spent her last days with them, and hatred for Odyne only built under these circumstances.

Years later, Ashlynn had finally reached the age of 24 and her master wasn't doing too greatly. It turned out to be a deadly disease she had contracted from healing a patient and saving their life from it. She had absorbed it into herself with the knowledge of knowing that she would die not too much longer from when she healed the patient. Not long after Jaya passed, Ash had heard somewhere that Odyne had a baby. So she decided to visit and see him. The wife was nowhere to be found, but the red-haired baby was. The baby wasn’t very well cared for, and this upset Ashlynn. But she had no way to help, since it was Odyne’s child. She silently left, and


It had soon happened though, that with Odyne being Odyne, he threatened Ashlynn to drive her farther from him. During this time, Ashlynn was one who didn't like danger, but would get into trouble no matter what. But with her adult side and mother side kicking in for her niece, Leira, Ashlynn had left the Accord, going into hiding. Though her worries grew, as Odyne mysteriously disappeared, and with him the child.

She returned to the Accord. She is still searching for Leira.


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On the Run No More
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im curious about ashlynns personality. theres some bare hints of how her mind works and how she behaves, but her personality section really only talks about part of her background w/ no relation to how that influenced her personality, and the first paragraph really only talks about how shes related to leira. i like the notes about her being respectful due to her being a jedi since that tends to come with the trade so to speak, but what makes her tick? why was she "a bitch" to her brother? how does she react to rude people? how about nice people? she may be respectful, sure, but wheres her limit on that respectfulness? how does she react internally while still maintaining outer composure? im curious to see how you expand on her personality.
 

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First off, you may want to read Odyne's biography and tweak the childhood according to that. Odyne and his Force sensitive sister, whose name was Aradia (but you can change it to Ashlynn, I don't think it'll matter. Misitkuhl is permabanned so he can't really make edits.) were taken to the Jedi temple at a young age, so maybe they had issues within the Order? And their parents did die, but this would likely be unknown to them (or maybe you could make it known to Ashlyn. Perhaps she was there for their death, and blames Odyne and has ill will against him for being uncaring)

Also, the Rys family started on Alderaan, so you may want to change the Malastares to Alderaans.

Second, Leira's mother died in child birth. So, she wouldn't be around to make her a Godparent.

Third, Odyne and Leira were low-key after Odyne left the Order. He didn't want people to know he was abusing his daughter. Maybe she left the Order for a while in fear of him finding her?

Really, this all can be fixed with a few minor tweaks, and it won't take very long. Other than that, I like this character :)

Cool Faceclaim and template. I like the way this looks.
 

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First off, you may want to read Odyne's biography and tweak the childhood according to that. Odyne and his Force sensitive sister, whose name was Aradia (but you can change it to Ashlynn, I don't think it'll matter. Misitkuhl is permabanned so he can't really make edits.) were taken to the Jedi temple at a young age, so maybe they had issues within the Order? And their parents did die, but this would likely be unknown to them (or maybe you could make it known to Ashlyn. Perhaps she was there for their death, and blames Odyne and has ill will against him for being uncaring)

Also, the Rys family started on Alderaan, so you may want to change the Malastares to Alderaans.

Second, Leira's mother died in child birth. So, she wouldn't be around to make her a Godparent.

Third, Odyne and Leira were low-key after Odyne left the Order. He didn't want people to know he was abusing his daughter. Maybe she left the Order for a while in fear of him finding her?

Really, this all can be fixed with a few minor tweaks, and it won't take very long. Other than that, I like this character :)

Cool Faceclaim and template. I like the way this looks.
Well, if you remember, you and I talked about this. You never said that Odyne already had a sister. I didn't know where to find his bio, so I just made what I thought happened.

Anyway though, I guess I'll make these fixes tonight. I just got home yesterday from PA and I'm tired..
 

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Terribly sorry. I linked Odyne's Bio in the word Odyne
 

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Hmm.. I was thinking maybe she could bump into one of your characters while he's on a mission or something and they end up helping each other. I haven't really thought it through.
 
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