Arian Korzak

Arian Korzak

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(Just saying, this is my first try. So I expect I'll be told somewhere I screwed up, hopefully it wasn't to bad.)




NAME: Arian Korzak

FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK:
Padawan
SPECIES: Human
AGE:
17
GENDER: Male.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, trained.

APPEARENCE:
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 150 lb
Eyes: Hazel
Hair: Dark brown, cut short.
Naturally tanned skin.
Thin but somewhat broad shouldered


ATTRIBUTES:

Arian is a mostly well rounded student in both more intellectual study, the force, and combat. However once people and emotions get involved his confidence drops like a meteor shower, or he becomes utterly apathetic. Typically he attempts to actually be the latter, it is far less stressful although he may end up hurting someones feelings. Because of his horrendous social skills he has grown to be incredibly quiet and even more introverted, and while this is not a good focus for someone meant to appear a caring person it has made him capable of focusing on studies and practice. This only furthers him from others because his attention was switched to be fascinated by the force itself. Although with confusing feelings he typically has three possibilities of what he's like: apathetic, logical, calculated, adept force abilities on small objects and actions (e.g. Creating heat, using the force to protect his hands and forearms from lightsabres, and moving small items very quickly); then there is the sarcastic one, he is often smiling sometimes almost evilly with a dark glint in his eyes, he has a morbid sense of humor and is a dangerous foe in combat; thirdly there is what he refers to as his "normal self", still with odd amd varying emotions but more rounded in abilities and knowledge, as well as being the one more emotionally effected.


PERSONALITY:

Arian is very introverted and selective on what he spends his time on. His emotions vary from merely apathetic to utterly confused, but usually on the rationally based side of things. He bases his morality off of how everything effects the future, like how many people will die and what life will be like far in the future. He is incredibly intelligent, creative, and future planning, so predicting the overall actions of someone or some action is actually quite easy for him even without the force. He has noted how certain morality and little details effect the overall picture of things. Despite being a jedi, he verges on the dark side in certain situations, and after extreme levels of mental and emotions stress he has rhe possibility to enter what can most effectively be called a rage.


BIOGRAPHY:

Arian was always different as a child. He was born to a rather large and moderately rich family which had some history of being connected in some way or another to the force, mostly by having a force sensitive every generation or two. His family was already rather strict when it came to morality and rules, but he fit into it quickly and became even more so. Even when very young his mind was working faster and more efficiently than some adults, however because he was often apathetic or logically based alone he appeared either aloof or mature with some spurts of childishness. He grew both mentally and physically rather quickly, and was always the one to tell someone if they were wrong or too learn how a magic trick worked. His willingness to be confrontational made relationships even worse as he saw fighting not as an emotional battle but an intellectual learning period, unless it was clear his "opponent" was being highly emotional.

At around the age of 6 it was incredibly clear he was a force sensitive. He would often sit in his room and meditate when things got to emotionally heated, during these times things often began to float randomly. But an even more queer fact was that he always wore one or both of two things, a vibro dagger with a smooth hilt, or a durasteel ring with his families crest on it. He would rub the hilt of the dagger or the ring when thinking or in stressed positions and it would almost magically calm him down. Another use was that he could "apply" memories to them, mainly for study, and when caressing them the memories would return in vivid detail. They assumed this was yet another force ability although really it was merely a memory trick.

It didn't take long for him to get accepted to begin learning the jedi ways, he was brought by a reletive of his who was also force sensitive and was more willing to point out that he should be tought by the Jedi or would likely succumb to the dark side because he didn't fully understand it. Although confrontational on morality and flaws he was a rather peaceful negotiator. And while he loved physical combat almost as much as intellectual ones, he would never force anyone into them. He was incredibly patient but a rather fast learner, he also preffered the use of many forms of ending a battle instead of simply using one style or method. If negotiations had already been tried and failed, a stealthy or clever attack was the next move. But because of his introversion and lack of social skills he knew too well he would never be a leader, an advisor perhaps but not a general himself. So instead he remained the silent strategist, picking away at flaws and combining methods to achieve the most effective mix.


SKILLS:
Unarmed combat: Arian is highly adept at unarmed combat, using his natural height and flexibility to overcome most enemies. His speed and agility was incredible and he had a lot of natural advantages. His ability to snake his way around an opponent made him capable of taking on larger and smaller opponents well without injury, unless he wanted to cause it. And when he did want to cause it he did well.

Shatterpoint vision: Although neither perfected nor always working he does possess some form of shatterpoint vision, the ability to see a weakness. He may not always be able to exploit it, but he still may know it. Sometimes he achieves this by meditating on it after the fight instead of during or before combat.

Trance: Arian can get into a force trance almost on a whim and it takes only a few second to get deep into it. This is greatly strengthening in both mental and physical abilities, and cause his skill to grow greatly with a few long term effects. This also allows him to prepare scenarios in his head to understand how to best win, it helps that the trance also enhances his precognition.

Sabre combat: apprentice defensive, adept offensive. He uses a combination of all the jedi styles to fight, among less used methods as well. His defensive is mostly evasive or deflective not blocking. In attack he utilizes many forms but Ataru among his favorites and most incorperated. However in certain situations he will enter almost a combat trance in which he utilizes mainly Vaapad and juyo like an expert, during this trance he becomes intensly strong, fast, and agile making him a blur of force. This is surprisingly hard to get past with attacks but during it he also becomes less precognitive and tactical instead using the force ro enhance himself physically. Despite all this, unless using vaapad/juyo attacks, he is still not as skilled as other knights. Capable of posing a threat, not to be underestimated, but still not as good as jedi knights or sith whose focus is combat. His low stamina for full blown attacks makes it difficult to win against someone with exceptional defensive skills. Starting on defensive is very bad for him but easier if his opponent uses a single blade or blaster.


Marksmenship: Acceptable, below military.

Has good throwing accuracy and force.

Force: He is very in tune with the force. Typically having much superior senses and precognition. However unless he is utlizing it it will not aid him physically. He lacks healing abilities except in a trance. He is still learning but has much potential. He almost always refuses to use the jedi mind trick except to calm someone, which he is fairly good at. He is however very skilled at using it for other deceptions such as blocking the sounds of his footfalls, minimizing lights reflection on him, and giving some numbing to pain. Mostly he utilizes it for some telekinesis and mental and sensory enhancement. However in combat he will use it for a variety. During his use of it he has studied how to generate heat or cold, and generate minor force lightning. A common trick he would use is to attempt to block sabres or bullets with a force shield around his hands or forearms, or simply a spherical force shield around him. However this is very taxing and only works for a short time before the sabre or blaster begins to burn through. Studying other methods like force vacuums, fire jets, and using it to increase stamina. Very good at using the force to increase speed and physicals, but exceptional at using it for extreme leaps.


Sufficient pilot, adept at evasive manuvers.

Understands technology and weaponry but cannot explain it.

Very skilled at acrobatics and speed stepping but has a lack of running stamina. Short rests can help tremendously.


Wall crawling: He has learned to use the force to attach himself to smooth surfaces, even upside down ones.

Instant style switching: Mainly used for combat to suddenly change combat styles, but he has also learned how to mimic personalities he makes up in his head at the drop of a hat.

Quick learner: He quickly learns new concepts and talants

Strategical mind: He plans far ahead and is incredibly intelligent. He is also based almost always on rationality above emotions by nature, which assists in not being turned to the dark side. However he is certainly not immune to it, his stress levels can become high from emotional stress and this gets him dangerously close.

Incredibly fast and agile.

Finds using dual blades to defend against an opponent who is also using two blades to be difficult unless he's attacking.

Apprentice to force fields.

Skilled in stealth.

Moderate underwater combat.



GEAR:
Two white bladed phase-sabres that are connectable at the hilt to become a sabre staff, waterproofed when not in use.

Black jedi robes and outfit, when turned inside out become off white.
Grey gloves.
Grappling cable. Communicator.
A phric vibro-dagger from family.
Durasteel ring with family crest, can be used to hit things.
Smoke pellets.



ROLE-PLAYS:
Getting started



SHIP: Antarian Starfighter



DROIDS:
Typical astromech droid. Name: M8-B7


KILLS:
N/A

COMBAT:
N/A
 
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@Arian Korzak hey buddy looked over your character sheet, welcome to SWRP glad you can join the Jedi faction. If you have skype or have any questions don't be afraid to ask me, I am a member of the Jedi faction leadership official title is assistant faction leader, or AFL. Anyway back on topic.

Your character looks good and I hope you enjoy RPing with him, if you need help or anything just ask. Though I would ask if you could please include how he joined the Jedi, did one of his family members take him to the Jedi, did a random Jedi who just so happened to be walking around find him and that sort of stuff.

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/jedi-sign-ups.64235/page-20

Here is where you would need to sign up to official become a member of the Jedi order. Just need to provide a link and once you just add a bit in the Bio it will be good. Also you don't need to have the explanation of what is suppose to be in the personality and Bio section, so if you wish to delete or remove that part don't worry.

Hopefully you enjoy your time here, if you want to know the site story just click here.

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/the-story-dawn-of-the-republic.64243/

An the official role your character would have is Padawan so for rank you might want to put that instead of apprentice.
 

Arian Korzak

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@Arian Korzak hey buddy looked over your character sheet, welcome to SWRP glad you can join the Jedi faction. If you have skype or have any questions don't be afraid to ask me, I am a member of the Jedi faction leadership official title is assistant faction leader, or AFL. Anyway back on topic.

Your character looks good and I hope you enjoy RPing with him, if you need help or anything just ask. Though I would ask if you could please include how he joined the Jedi, did one of his family members take him to the Jedi, did a random Jedi who just so happened to be walking around find him and that sort of stuff.

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/jedi-sign-ups.64235/page-20

Here is where you would need to sign up to official become a member of the Jedi order. Just need to provide a link and once you just add a bit in the Bio it will be good. Also you don't need to have the explanation of what is suppose to be in the personality and Bio section, so if you wish to delete or remove that part don't worry.

Hopefully you enjoy your time here, if you want to know the site story just click here.

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/the-story-dawn-of-the-republic.64243/

An the official role your character would have is Padawan so for rank you might want to put that instead of apprentice.

Oops, must have forgotten. Thought I did.

Thanks very much!
 

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@Arian Korzak finally just want to ask you put a bit of history of what happened when he was a Padawan did he get a master, did he have a small adventure just something small doesn't have to be much than I will approve man. :)
 

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@Arian Korzak finally just want to ask you put a bit of history of what happened when he was a Padawan did he get a master, did he have a small adventure just something small doesn't have to be much than I will approve man. :)


I'm actually going to ask to get a master I think. But I'm gonna go with he had one for awhile but they died during combat, he witnessed it but was incapable of helping because he couldn't contend with the amount and quality of forces his master was dealing with. That good?
 

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Looking forward to your character being approved, I have a really young Jedi Padawan, so we'll have to RP!
 

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Looking forward to your character being approved, I have a really young Jedi Padawan, so we'll have to RP!
Thanks! That'd be fun! Might be easier once I get a master for him, want to make sure everything is in place that way I don't screw up. As much as I might have at least.
 

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Don't fret, you're doing great bud. :)
 
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