Andromeda

[Marf]

Thankyou so much. That really means the world to me ^,^;

I haven't worked nearly as hard on a character since I started playing Satoryu. I've been drafting and brainstorming ideas for the rest of the biography all night and should have it up soon. Stay tuned!

 

[Taz]

I think I almost like Andro better then Sato. I'll have to up a game a little if Virion gets picked to compete with her under the guidance of Arc.

 

[Kat]

She is absolutely fabulous. I love her! ^^

Wish I could write a character bio as good as this. 10/10, Marf.

 

[Marf]

BIOGRAPHY IS FINISHED.

It took me 8 hours omg Dx

I left the end bit short because I'm considering having her kill Campion ICly.

I hope you guys enjoy it.

 

[Gamov]

I certainly enjoyed it, Marf.

Andro is easily among my favorite Sith here. Her profile is so very well written and I like the inclusion of her "to kill" list. Gives her some strong personal motivations that will no doubt make for some great stories in the future.

I'll definitely be keeping track of her. As if I wasn't already. Haha

 

[Marf]

No more comments on the new part of the bio? Oh come on now I am upset.

:20:

On a humorous note the entire last part of the profile was wiped when my internet timed out, so I spent like 2 hours re-formatting everything. Luckily I still had some of it saved on another site.

 

[Wit]

No more comments on the new part of the bio? Oh come on now I am upset.

:20:

On a humorous note the entire last part of the profile was wiped when my internet timed out, so I spent like 2 hours re-formatting everything. Luckily I still had some of it saved on another site.

That just might be one bump too many. You don't want the Hal treatment, do you?

 

[Calixis]

I don't comment on these things very often, but since you seemed keen I figured I'd give it a look over. I did particularly like how Sadeon looks upon Andro akin to a sculpture, something to be molded, perfected and sold off, and that he can take pride in his creation (or rather, that he made it, nor necessarily her) yet his willingness to do what he pleases with 'it' like an object.

Tristesse not actually being mute was a twist that I was quite fond of. That being said, I'm not really sure where "love interest" comes into it, assuming it was referring to her? Unless I'm missing something.

 

[Fang.]

you've made another character that terrifies me before I even finish reading her, congrats marf

 

[Marf]

I'm debating whether or not I should have her able to talk again and if I should RP it out in-character, or just write it into her profile once she's promoted.

I don't comment on these things very often, but since you seemed keen I figured I'd give it a look over. I did particularly like how Sadeon looks upon Andro akin to a sculpture, something to be molded, perfected and sold off, and that he can take pride in his creation (or rather, that he made it, nor necessarily her) yet his willingness to do what he pleases with 'it' like an object.

Thankyou for taking the time to read it all and post your thoughts, it really means alot. I'm very glad you picked up on Sadeon, he's by far my favourite NPC that I've designed and I'm hoping to use him as a villain in Andro's future threads.

Tristesse not actually being mute was a twist that I was quite fond of. That being said, I'm not really sure where "love interest" comes into it, assuming it was referring to her? Unless I'm missing something.

Indeed, the love interest referred to Tristesse. It's meant to be implied that Andro had a crush on her and viewed her as a love interest, even though the feeling wasn't mutual.

you've made another character that terrifies me before I even finish reading her, congrats marf

Thankyou! That means I did something right XD

 

[Marf]

This was absolutely wrecked before, but I saved it.

It took me 5 hours but I saved it.

No more formatting today.

 

[Logan]

Still looks quite good Marfy, but the font is rather small and I had to strain my eyes to read. :(

 

[Marf]

PROMOTED TO CRUSADER!

All sections have been updated! The personality has been replaced completely. I kind of went and wrote way too much and had to seriously trim it back because I couldn't shut up DX

Fun times and epic space adventures ahead! and she can talk now!