Alyona Nálan

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Name: Alyona Nálan
gender: female
species: Pantorian
home world: Pantoria
Age: 21
Level: 1
Faction: Exiles
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Appearance

With the typical blue skin, the golden eyes with black pupils and hair in the color of wisteria she fits the typical picture of a Pantorian girl. She fears that the dark side corrosion may disfigure her. But she also knows that not every dark side user is transformed in a physical way.


Biography


Vengeance. Vengeance is not the way of the Jedi, at least this is what I had been taught by my master. It eads to anger, anger leads to hate and hate leads to suffering. Yet Vengeance was the very tool the Jedi had embraced for the last 100 years. Hordes of Jedi shadows, thousands of Jedi crusaders, an army of false knights. I myself had been one of them, an apprentice of a Jedi shadow, a fully appointed knight of the Jedi Order. But my shift started before I ended my aprenticship. I was departing for a last mission as a Padawan with her soon to be former master. A commission that would change her life, the order to assassinate an assassin. It was a dark night, on a moonless planet. My master was sure that this glance into my future would be the right thing to do before becoming a fully-fledged knight of the order. I did not know how right he was. After we returned from the mission, my master was full of pride for what I had done, I was but ashamed. Stabbing a shocked and irritated man in the back, while my master had attacked him simultaneously, there was no glory to be gained from such an action. I soon became a knight, having mastered the basic concepts I was no longer an apprentice, I was a member of the Jedi order. But to fully understand the force you must look at all off its aspects, not just the dogmatic narrow view of the Jedi, I understood that now. For weeks, I had to conceal my feelings, the doubt, the hatred and the shame. If the Jedi truly were fighting for the righteous cause, why didn’t we arrest that man? He deserved a trial, like every criminal. The burden of having killed that helpless man shattered my believes into the order, and wherever I went I was complimented for my doing. As I told my master about my concerns he said that it was normal to be flattered after your first kill, and that this feeling would pass with my next assassinations. But the biggest shock was yet to come, the night in which my saber turned red. That night I gave in to my hatred and tried to kill the next helpless man, my master. Unluckily, he survived. Now I live afar from Jedha, and once again I am an apprentice, an apprentice of the dark side, for the dark side provides power for powers sake, and I have much to learn. To bring vengeance to the Jedi as thy thought me to.


That would sum up her most recent developments, but leaves a lot open. So here is here entire Biography:

Alyona enjoyed her early years on the planet Pantoria, living with her parents and her little sister. But when the Jedi sentinel guarding their village discovered here force abilities he sent her to Jedha at the age of 4. She was eager to learn and quite gifted with the force but what drew the Jedis attention were her abilities with the lightsaber. As the Jedi needed warriors in this unstable time they provided her with a more extensive lightsaber training and spared her some force training without her knowledge or consent. When the time came for here to become a Padawan she was given to a renowned Jedi shadow to further improve her set of skills in lightsaber combat, stealth and hiding her presence. She did not enjoy her training. Requesting to be assigned to someone else with a more peaceful profession, but her master explained to her how the best way to protect someone was to destroy the root of the evil and that attack was the best defence and how she should not defy him by requesting a reassignment. Afterwards she was as loyal as she could be. But after her first mission things went worse. She could not bear the burden of having killed someone whom she deemed innocent. As she told her master about this he underestimated the doubts which had started to corrupt her mind and acted if nothing happened. She was lost. Unwilling to seek help in other Jedi as she earned compliments left and right for the thing she did and unwilling to expose her weakness she grew feared of what she had become a killer. And the morning she awoke with a red saber ultimately doomed her path. After discovering the changes to the crystal which she must have corrupted in her sleep she cried for hours, unsure what to do. Knowing of what inhumane acts she was capable of in her sleep she was on the verge of killing herself. But that would do no good, since the saber would be found within her chamber even if she were to kill herself. She could not speak to her master, had he not once told her that once dipped into the dark side one could do no better than die? He would surly kill her the moment he would find out about the crystal. She could claim to have lost her crystal, but what if it happened again. But after hours of thinking she reconsidered. This monster she had become was not her fault, it was the fault of the Jedi. They had deliberately forged her into a killing machine since she had set foot on the planet against her will and would have used her as a tool for the rest of her live. And before she left Jedha, that night she attacked her master in his sleep, wounding him heavily, and choping one of his legs before leaving


Personality

Once Alyona was a happy and joyful girl, who wanted nothing but to help. She was also full off self-criticism, insecure and obedient. But that changed a lot. Her new self is a mere projection to shield herself of the immense self-hatred which is the driving force of her strength. It is a power hungry, revenge thirsty cold-blooded killer who engulfs in the darkness and enjoys every moment. Her hatred towards the Jedi is the easiest way to blame someone for her fall and she will do anything to cripple the order.


Information for other players

Should you play a Jedi character who was trained at the same time or remains a lot at Jedha you could know her. Though her disappearance and the murder of her master seem to be connected, it was not proven that she did the kill. After all her master was annihilating Exiles all over the place and had enough enemies for sure, but it was unlikely that an Exile would risk coming to Jedha and inside the temple.


Equipment

She carries her own crimson red lightsaber with her and a blue lightsaber which she stole from her master. She possesses only a little amount of credits and normally clads herself in civilian clothes.

She is also in possession of a “TR140 Series Light Freighter” and an astromech droid which she stole back in Jedha. The droid still thinks she works for the Jedi and she will have to find someone who will reprogram it, so that she can use it without fearing a Jedi might turn him against her.

Skills and Abilities

She can pilot the ship. It was the same ship with which she and her master departed for her first assassination mission. Her Jedi robes are within the ship but she normally clads herself in civilian clothing to avoid attention. She is even in the possession of one formal dress should the situation require it.

Link to the tech:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/tr140-series-light-freighter.77492/
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/3n-series-astromech-droid.77568/
 
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Just so you know, it's 'Pantora' and 'Pantoran'. Cool profile though!
 

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She cannot have been part of the Jedi Council at any point. Sorry.

Please link the tech.

Also, just a suggestion (by no means mandatory), but how about maiming (and maybe believing the master died) but not killing the Master. That way he can serve as an antagonist later on for a plot.
 

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I did not mean the council, thats just plain ridiculus. I meant the order. And I'll change the bit with the master.
 
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