Alonso Ty'ri

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[ISB CASE FILE: #2976]​
Alonso Ty'ri
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[NAME]
__Alonso Ty'ri
[FACTION]
__New Jedi Order
[OCCUPATION]
__Padawan
[SPECIES]
__Human___________
[HOMEWORLD]
__Taris________
[AGE]
__15____
[GENDER]
__Male[COLOR=#1a1a1]___________[/COLOR]
[HEIGHT]
__5'5"
[WEIGHT]
__120 lbs
[HAIR COLOR]
__Brown
[EYE COLOR]
__Green
[LAST KNOWN LOCATION]
__Taris
[STATUS]
__Alive
[Threat Assesment]
__Young but unpredicatble
[DISTINGUISHING CHARACTERISTICS]
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  • N/A

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PROPERTY OF IMPERIAL SECURITY BUREAU


SECTION 08


//04|278_12|75//




CONFIRMED SIGHTINGS




[1]​Taris – 1016 ABY

Reports of a new lost child have proven to be accurate. The lords will not be pleased that another force sensitive was recruited to their cause before we could identify.



[2]​Taris – 1017 ABY
This lost child is different. He is stronger in the force than most of his peers and far more ruthless. Perhaps if he awakens to the dark side, we may turn him to our cause after all.


[3]​Taris – 1018 ABY
Target showing signs of mental instability. It appears to manifest itself in dissociative identity disorder. Further investigation unwarranted. Unfit for Sith candidacy. Life expectancy poor.

[SKILLS SUMMARY]
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  • Sleight of hand
  • Lock-picking
  • Force Sensitive
  • Exceptionally agile

[ASSET SUMMARY]
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[KNOWN ASSOCIATES]
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[Threat ASSESSMENT]
__Exceptionally quick, but inexperienced. His force abilities may give pause to our soldiers, but he is not versed in actual combat. His unrefined techniques will surely fall to our disciplined onslaught.



The information above may be used IC by any Sith or Imperial characters and is an accurate representation of the character as they currently appear in the RP. Anything that follows after this point is purely for my own benefit. Using any of the following information IC without first acquiring it through proper roleplay will be considered metagaming, and that isn't any fun =D.





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DOB: 1,008 ABY [15]
Taris]


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ALIAS[ES]
Scorpion


SPECIES
Human


HAIR COLOR
Brown


BUILD
Lean
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NICKNAME
Idiot
Trash
Worthless
Blaster Sponge


GENDER
Male


EYE COLOR
Green


HEIGHT
5'5”



FORCE SENSITIVE
Indeed
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STATISTICS

Strength:■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■
_Alonso is of below average strength, even for his age. This comes as no surprise to those who knew him on Taris. The Lost Children were known to be malnourished waifs who struck quickly and with precision, using their age to supply an element of surprise.​
Dexterity:■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■
_The Lost Children were trained to strike as fast as lightning and vanish just as quickly. Failure to do so meant capture or death. Alonso was one of the fastest.​
Constitution:■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■
_The Lost Children were malnourished children. They were expected to swallow a poison pill if law enforcement were to ever give chase. And their first strike was expected to be their final strike. Alonso has below average stamina.​
Intelligence:■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■
_Not an idiot, but not particularly intelligent. A street orphan has no need for smarts. Smarts don't keep you alive. Acting smart gets you dead.​
Wisdom:■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■
_As a street urchin assassin, you learn a thing or two about the streets. You learn if you can take somebody by looking at their posturing. You know if those three guys on the corner are going to follow you into that alley. You just know the streets. Alonso is wickedly street smart. His wisdom doesn't really extend to anything else though.​
Charisma:■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■
_Raised to never make an impression, Alonso is good at being invisible. He doesn't talk much and frankly, he doesn't know how to handle people he wasn't called to stick a knife in. This whole 'guardian of peace and justice' thing is quite mind boggling for him.​




PERSONALITY

”I ain't nobody. What, you tryin' to tell me I can be like you? I got news old man, I ain't like you. First, I ain't that ugly. Second, I ain't no goody two shoes. I ain't nobody's knight in shining armor. I'm that minor villain that dies in the first act.”



Alonso doesn't remember much about his parents. Obviously, he had them. If he didn't, he wouldn't have a name. Not that it mattered; what his name was. Ever since he was six he was known as Scorpion and a smattering of derogatory names as compliment. He has no idea what it feels like....being loved.


Alonso's driving factor is survival. He will do anything to survive. On the streets, there is no justice. Nobody is going to come and save you. Everybody's morals are screwed. Every man, woman and child for themselves. Save yourself, or die. Since escaping the lower levels on Taris; Alonso has decided that he doesn't want anybody to have this live in this manner any longer. He believes that it is the duty of the strong to protect the weak. Not oppress them.


Alonso isn't the most eloquent of individuals. He's rude, uneducated and sarcastic. This, coupled with his constant internal struggle with his 'Scorpion' persona makes for a very anti-social person.

He loves to hope in a thing called justice; but until recently, nothing he's seen in life has made him believe it truly existed. He hates to see pain and suffering. He cries himself to sleep every night, remembering what he's done. And when he dreams, he wakes in cold sweats; remembering the faces of all of his marks as they breathed their last.


A Lost Child is invisible. They don't make friends. Other Lost Children all maneuver around and back stab each other. There can only be seven Lost Children at a time. If a Lost Child kills the others, he becomes most competent. Ensuring further training and a greater survival rate in the future. A vaguely Sith tradition.


Alonso doesn't trust anybody. Everybody's got an angle. Everybody's looking for a way to get over. While this means he isn't easy to deceive, it also means he likes to do everything himself. While this may have worked on the street, he is finding the concept of working with others hard to grasp. A vital skill when playing on a galactic scale.

He has a personality separate from Alonso. The personality goes by his codename; Scorpion. Scorpion is everything Alonso is not. Ruthless, without remorse, without empathy. Cruel, jealous, hateful. Alonso created the personality subconsciously to distance himself from the assassinations he was made to carry out. As he's aged, he has begun to struggle to maintain his position as dominant personality. He hopes that by learning the ways of the Jedi he can once and for all rid himself of Scorpion.




HISTORY
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”I have a monster inside me old man, he comes out whenever I'm angry or sad, depressed or lonely. He hurts people man. I don't want to hurt nobody no more. Not unless they deserve it. You tellin' me you can help with that? If this ain't a dream, then damn it. I'm in.”



Alonso could only suspect he was born to human parents. He thought he looked human enough, at least. But, regardless of who his biological parents were; they were dead. A blurry memory now. His mother, father, sister, brother from the time he was six was The Shadow Man. And the place of education The Shadow Man sent his children was known as the Taris Lower Levels, and their curriculum consisted of only murder.

The Lost Children. That's what The Shadow Man's seven prodigal sons were called. None of the children knew why they were chosen. Why their families were killed, with the exception of the one. Not at first. Then The Shadow Man started teaching them things in between bouts of unconsciousness after the beatings. He called it The Force. And with The Force, the children found power. The Shadow Man gave them an outlet for this power. Kill and be treasured. The more competent the Lost Child, the more knowledge The Shadow Man gave to them. The more knowledge they received, the less likely it was that The Shadow Man would kill them in one of his frequent rages. Alonso witnessed the life and death of fourteen different Lost Children. Six died at the hands of their patron. Three were killed by other Lost Children, one committed suicide and three were killed by Alonso himself.

Alonso didn't take to murder. Not at first. He was soft. Too soft. He cried non-stop after his first assassination. However, when the tears stopped; the boy was no more. Scorpion had risen to take his place. Scorpion was ruthless, laughing as he plunged his lightsaber (given to each Lost Child by The Shadow Man) into each new victim. However, he always left Alonso to pick up the pieces of his humanity every night.

Alonso spent seven years as an assassin. Over time, he became experienced. Trusted. Powerful. With power, came knowledge and with more knowledge came more power. So the cycle went. Outside of his profession, Alonso used his power to protect those who could not protect themselves. He hated to see the weak be abused and taken advantage of by the strong. Especially when the reason was: "because".

However, with knowledge and power among The Lost Children, came jealousy. Alonso was attacked on three separate occasions by three different Lost Children. He regrettably had to end their lives.


Just as Alonso was beginning to grow jaded in his world view, a Jedi Exile arrived in the Lower City. It was rare for anybody wielding a lightsaber, save for The Lost Children and The Shadow Man to loiter around in the Lower City. So, it came as no surprise to Alonso that he was called to slay the man. Nothing could undermine The Shadow Man's hold on Taris' criminal underground.

Upon tracking the Iktotchi down, Alonso instantly knew that he would not be able to best the alien. He knew it surer than he knew the same of The Shadow Man. The inevitability of his defeat was certain. He was trapped. If he ran, he would surely be killed by The Shadow Man. If he struck, he would surely be killed by the alien Jedi.

So, he did something completely out of character. Alonso knelt in front of the alien and asked to be made strong. Strong enough to ensure that nobody in his domain would suffer the injustices that he'd had to endure.




Force Powers


  • Force Cloak: Every Lost Child is expected to attain some level of success in using this technique. Failure meant a speedy death. Alonso has some skill in this technique, but in actuality The Shadow Man was only a fallen Padawan himself. His own knowledge was limited. Alonso can mask his sound rather well, but he can only muster the concentration to mask his person for only a few seconds at a time.
  • Force Speed: Alonso fought long and hard to be taught this bit of information from The Shadow Man. He is by no means a master at using Force Speed, only being able to use it in short bursts. In his previous line of work, this meant rushing to a mark and accelerating the thrust to their heart.




Lightsaber combat


  • N/A. The Lost Children were all given lightsaber shotos to carry out their assassinations. However, this was due to the sheer stopping power of a lightsaber. None of them were taught any forms, and more often than not; a lightsaber was treated as nothing more than a glowing dagger.








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Credits for the profile layout elements go to Gamov; who in turn credited Cassanova, Gaja, Starburns and Bee. So, I just completely ripped this off. Don't shoot me >.<, I'm just really lazy and like things to look nice >.<​
 
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Hope I'm not wrong about this, but are those pictures to do with Shingeki no Kyojin? This guy looks really rad, good work, man. :)
 

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Hope I'm not wrong about this, but are those pictures to do with Shingeki no Kyojin? This guy looks really rad, good work, man. :)


Yeah, it is. I wanted to avoid using established anime characters for RP characters...but that last picture I used in the profile sold me on it xD.
 

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I'm jealous...I wish this charrie was mine >_<

Seriously though, awesome job ^^.
 

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It wasn't destroyed ala Death Star level destruction. But it was bombarded pretty hard by the Sith in the KOTOR story line. And probably others before or after that. It's been a popular target for devastating bombardments throughout history.
 

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To be fair it is once again a smoldering ball of death, courtesy once again of the Sith.
 

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You probably know more than me! In KOTOR I thought it was G-O-N-E

But I'ts cool.
 

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Yeah it got leveled but not destroyed. Just at the first of the year the Sith glassed all of the mandalore sector so that includes Taris yet again.
 
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