Alexander Redwind

[Zen]

NAME: Alexander Redwind
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 13
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 4'11
WEIGHT: 100 lbs
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Red
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: No
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 3/10
DEXTERITY: 8/10
CONSTITUTION: 5/10
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10
WISDOM: 5/10
CHARISMA: 4/10

PERSONALITY:
Alexander is different, he is a troubled soul but a collective mind. He seeks to create balance and peace among everyone. In his own way. Odd enough he super quiet a shy normally when around large crowds and tends to judge people a lot in his head. He judges them because he can. Not to mention he is even more shy around women.

BIOGRAPHY:
Alexander was born, on a the richest and Biggest City Planet, Coruscant. At the age of six, a Jedi Master Sought for him via the Force, and gave him the option to do something greater with his life. The Jedi Master sought, Alexander because he had been around the planet Coruscant. During a Mission, Alexander seemed to be laying there knocked out. Upon waken up, Alexander was greeted with food and water, after taken a bit. Jedi Master offered him a place to call him. In which Alexander agreed to it. Once he agreed he would join the new Jedi Order. Where Alexander does his studies mostly.

FORCE POWERS:

Force Sense
Force Leap/Jump
Telepathy

SKILLS:
No you.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Shii-Cho

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Small and Fragile

GEAR:
Lightsaber


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[Richie B.]

Hey @Zen your characters Bio is a bit short, plus the Jedi order is in hiding and I'm sure if you go into more depth with your characters backstory than it would great. Plus you will need to sign up your character to be a Jedi which can be done in the Jedi forum. @Ben @Raydo @Ral Aran these guys can help you more since they run the Jedi faction.

 

[Zen]

I understand it's short. But I wrote the bare minimum words for Application. Which is 50 words in total for Personality and History, my good sir.

 

[Ral]

Hey @Zen your characters Bio is a bit short, plus the Jedi order is in hiding and I'm sure if you go into more depth with your characters backstory than it would great. Plus you will need to sign up your character to be a Jedi which can be done in the Jedi forum. @Ben @Raydo @Ral Aran these guys can help you more since they run the Jedi faction.

This^

And those stats need to come down. Way down. Two 10s? Lol no. And judging by his personality his wisdom and charisma need to come down a couple of points as a 13 year old who is shy and judges people "because he can" wouldn't be very wise or charismatic.

 

[Zen]

There you go fixed the stats. Whatever you call those things.

 

[Richie B.]

I'm not sure if you actually did the stats change, it still shows two 10s, plus you still need to sign your character up in the Jedi faction forum plus extend the bio if you really want to RP with this guy.

 

[Zen]

I'm not sure if you actually did the stats change, it still shows two 10s, plus you still need to sign your character up in the Jedi faction forum plus extend the bio if you really want to RP with this guy.

I changed wisdom, And Charisma. Please don't tell me what to do I made this Padawn out of request for Padme. Nor do I need an extended Bio Buddy. The Min requirements for any bio is 50 Words in Personality and 50 words in History. It is my choice if I wish to add more or not. Thank you very much. Please don't post here again. Good Day to you sir ^.^

 

[Ral]

Yeah that attitude isn't going to fly. I can't tell if you're being light hearted or not, but profiles are a place for feedback. We're community moderated, which means users are more than welcome to post critiques of profiles and help people expand and improve their characters. You don't have to listen to them, but blowing them off shows a disrespect which won't get you very far.

And in any case, the bio is too vague and doesn't answer any question. Why would this Jedi Master seek him out on nondescript city world where there are presumably a lot of people and other Force Sensitives? How did they know or find them? What world is it? Because it would be doubtful that a Jedi went to a Sith world and Coruscant is a wasteland.

 

[Zen]

Yeah that attitude isn't going to fly. I can't tell if you're being light hearted or not, but profiles are a place for feedback. We're community moderated, which means users are more than welcome to post critiques of profiles and help people expand and improve their characters. You don't have to listen to them, but blowing them off shows a disrespect which won't get you very far.

And in any case, the bio is too vague and doesn't answer any question. Why would this Jedi Master seek him out on nondescript city world where there are presumably a lot of people and other Force Sensitives? How did they know or find them? What world is it? Because it would be doubtful that a Jedi went to a Sith world and Coruscant is a wasteland.

I am well aware of how this community is done. However, I don't see any need to make a fantastic profile for a Padawn. That no one is ever going to read and simply skim through it. Nevertheless, I plan on expanding the history as my character rps and interacts with others. The minuiman requirement for application is fifty words. Ral, I am not trying to be mean. Do you honestly expect a Padawn's history to be splendid? If I want to make my character semi boring that is my choice..

 

[Ral]

It doesn't have to be interesting, but I have my own standards I have to hold it to when approving profiles. It doesn't need to be a work of art, and for the sake of my own time I prefer brief profiles, but the minimum is hardly enough to make a character. Having the name of the planet he's from and how he was found by this Jedi master isn't a lot to ask for either.

 

[Zen]

It doesn't have to be interesting, but I have my own standards I have to hold it to when approving profiles. It doesn't need to be a work of art, and for the sake of my own time I prefer brief profiles, but the minimum is hardly enough to make a character. Having the name of the planet he's from and how he was found by this Jedi master isn't a lot to ask for either.

I'll get to it in the next six hours, and I'll pm you then. With a Name of the planet and How he was found. But that is all I am doing as far as history is involved. Because you asked nicely <3 ^.^