Alexander Maltov

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Name: Alexander Maltov

Faction: Republic Navy

Rank:Captain (Naval)

Equipment: Single .45 Caliber Semi-Auto Handgun

Looks: Brown hair, brown eyes, tall. Caucasian.

Force Sensitive: Yes, but doesn't know it. Thinks he just has a good gut instinct.

Personality: Alexander is an arrogant bastard. But he is also selfless. Alexander has the drive to get to the top of the food chain in the navy. He has that desire to prove himself to the galaxy and will never back down from a challenge. Yet at the same time fully expect him to stab you in the back. He is a loyal friend and a strong leader. Charismatic and confident, men are willing to follow him.

History:Born to two military parents is hard on a kid. And it puts you in a position where you want to prove yourself, especially when your father wins the Medal of Honor. Posthumously. His mother raised him, going from planet to planet. He was born on Taris and raised on Corellia. As a student he received top marks in every class. A brilliant student, he went on to the Corellian flight academy, joined the Navy as a captain.Weakness: Women, Money, and power. Anything to do with swords or knives.

Strengths: Tactics, Ships, fighters and fixing things.

Ship:

The Republic Destroyer Exeter

An A1A Precursor Class Destroyer manufactured by Costa industries.


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I'd suggest grammar and spell checking the entire bio, and extending his history.
 

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What? His grammar is fine. If you are talking about the stylistic hiccups in his writing, then label them correctly instead of calling him out on nonexistent mistakes.
 

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I was referring to the strange breaks in his sentences, and numerous startings of sentences with 'and' and 'but.' You are correct, though, and I apologize to Burc with my rather hasty examination.
 

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It's all good, I have a strange writing style when it comes to stuff like this. :P
 

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What? His grammar is fine. If you are talking about the stylistic hiccups in his writing, then label them correctly instead of calling him out on nonexistent mistakes.

Wouldn't really be calling him considering he was just suggesting.
 

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Updated with Ship. LET THE EXETER DESTROY!!!
 
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