Agutha Royascho

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Name:Agutha Royascho
Age:29
Species:Human
Faction:Jedi Exiles
Rank:Apprentice
Homeworld:Naboo
Height:194 cm
Weight:70 kg
Gender:Male
Force Sensitivity:Yes,he is trained

PERSONALITY
People who knew Agutha before his exile would describe him as a nice and kind individual who would help and aid anyone who needed his help but also very forgiving.He used to be really Charismatic and was really loved by his peers in the jedi order.

After his exile from the jedi order,things changed for him.He became a closed character,twisted and evil because of the dark side of the force.He gets angry easily over failure and isnt as forgiving as he used to be.Agutha also doesnt trust people easily due to his past.Lastly he can be really manipulative when he has to and will do everything to achieve his goals.

APPEARENCE AND EQUIPMENT
Agutha is a tall individual.His armor consists of a medium protection chestplate which is grey coloured.He wears a grey coloured mask which amplifies his voice a lot and sounds really deeply.The mask is grey coloured,having some ancient like designs on it.He wears a black coloured cape and boots which are light grey coloured.His face which is under the mask has a scar on his left eye.His eyes are red and yellow due to the usage of the dark side and he has short hair.He owns two lightsabers although the first is his old one which is blue and the other one is red which is what he uses.Link for armor reference is provided: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/agutha-royaschos-armor.77076/

STRENGTH AND WEAKNESS
Strength:He communes with the force a lot and uses it more than even his lightsaber.Becoming a master of the dark arts,he can sense people easily nearby.He posseses the ability of force lightning and the ability to choke someone using the force along with the standard force push and pull.Having a lot of confidence,his morale cannot be brought down easily

Weakness:He is weak in close combat with a lightsaber.He can be deceived a bit easier than the standard exile although when he does,he will destroy the person who did so.He can be exhausted really easily against opponents who use acrobatics a lot in close combat while he wields his lightsaber.

BIOGRAPHY
Agutha was born in Naboo to an aristocrat family.When he was 2 years old,his force sensitivity was discovered by the jedi order.Before being taken in the jedi order a year after,he witnessed his parents being murdered by their political oponents while he was hidden under a table and he wasnt found.When the jedi came in,it was too late and he was taken to the jedi temple of Jedha where he became the initiate of a Twi'lek Jedi knight.

After passing his trials and acquiring his lightsaber,he was appointed a jedi knight at the age of 18 years old.He formed an attachment,which he kept hidden from the jedi order,and it lasted untill his last years in the order.He had fallen in love with an aristocrat lady in Naboo during a mission and they stayed in touch ever since they met until his last years in the jedi order.When he was 24 years old,his attachment was found by the jedi order and he almost got banished because of it.The girl he loved abandoned him,thinking that the attachment created between the two would destroy Agutha.His trust to the order was destroyed and he served temporally.

When he was 25,on his last mission with his former master,his master was murdered by a dark jedi and Agutha was found with his former master's body in a room.It was believed that he murdered his master and was accused of treason.He was banished from the order afterwards and started his own travels around the galaxy for 2 months untill he reached the planet of Ossus,where he was brought in by the jedi exiles and was welcomed to join their ranks.Full of hatred for the jedi order,he joined and was trained in the ways of the Exile Sorcerer (Which explains his use of the force more than a lightsaber).He was focussing on all of his hatred an anger for his former friends which made him even stronger.Now,he is travelling around the galaxy and seeks to continue his training in the ways of the force,and to exact revenge on the people who banished him.

DROIDS AND SHIP
He owns a starfighter called Vengeance which is black coloured.He also owns one protocol droid.The protocol droid is one of the PB-Series (Link for reference: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/pb-series-protocol-droid.76759/).The shi he is using is a bi-vane starfighter class (Link for reference:(http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/bi-vane-starfighter.76686/)​
 
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If there is anything that can be improved,dont hesitate to suggest it!Thanks for your time in advance
 

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Its a good start, but there are a few things that need to be done.

1. Please add spaces after punctuation, it makes it difficult to read without proper spacing.
2. The Temple on Tython would have been abandoned during the time he would have been growing up there. Please pick another location.
3. What was the attachment that he had that was discovered by the Jedi?
4. Links to tech write ups for his equipment and assets; armor, ship, droids, etc.

Tag me when you get these things fixed.
 

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By the way,with tech write ups you mean that i need to refer to the tech threads that my character is using?
 

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I think i fixed it.Im still getting used to the character template haha.
Your character cannot own a broadside class frigate to start the RP. He also cannot start with NPCs who are loyal to him.
 

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That looks better, though i will remind you that starfighters are not hyperspace capable.

The only hyperspace capable ship acquireable without RP is thr Nerf herder light freighter which would require another crew member.

Also you still have the mention of the jedi temple on Coruscant, thats going to have to go. Try Ossus or Jedha instead.
 

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Alright,i wasnt really sure on what location to add honestly.Fixed it.Again thank you for your time
 

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@Arclight
Alright,i wasnt really sure on what location to add honestly.Fixed it.Again thank you for your time

One last thing, your armor doesnt follow the tech rules. Force users cant wear armor with functions, such as space life support and electricity resistance. Im gonna need you to bring his armor in compliance with the rules using the proper tech submission template.
 

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Is it alright now?I removed the life support and electricity as you said!
Close enough for me, though im sure tech will be telling you to use the standard template

Approved!
 
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