Aeton Maydar

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NAME: Aeton Maydar.
FACTION: Jedi Order.
RANK: Jedi Padawan.
SPECIES: Nautolan
AGE: Thirteen Years of Age.
GENDER: Male.
HEIGHT: 1.6 Meters.
WEIGHT: 187LBS.
EYES: Large black staring eyes. No eyelids.
HAIR: No hair is present on Aeton.
SKIN: Darkish green/brown.
CREDITS: 1,000.
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Unusual Spiral Birthmark. (Back)
DOMINATE HAND: Ambidextrous, uses both hands.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Aeton is force sensitive.

STRENGTH: Aetons strength is that of an average man.
DESTERITY: Aeton is very very Agile.
CONSTITUTION: Fair, Common Health.
INTELLIGENCE: Highly intelligent, although somewhat weak at English.
WISDOM: Has a fair amount of wisdom for his age which can only get better.
CHARISMA: Like every Nautolan, Aeton is blessed with a wide-white smile.

FORCE POWERS:
Aeton, yet to learn the ways of the force. (Will be updated.)

SKILLS:
Aeton is a strong swimmer, like most Nautolans. The fact that his species can breathe under water gives him the edge over other species at swimming.

Enjoys climbing rocks, mountains and over forms that give him a good upper-body and mental challenge.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
~Yet to be learned~

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Swimming - The fact that his species can breathe under water gives him the edge over other species at swimming.

Reading – His large, eye lidless eyes gives him the advantage at reading as he can read faster, for a larger length of time.

Climbing – Since being a child, climbing was always a childhood hobby.

GEAR:
Large backpack.
Modified Vision Binoculars.
One brown robe with lighter brown vest.

SHIP: N/A. (Yet to acquire.)
Does your character have a personal ship? If so, describe it in moderate detail (what does it look like, what can it do, what types of weapons and engines does it have, etc.).

PERSONALITY:
Aeton is a friendly, loving and caring Nautolan. He loves to read, swim and rock-climb. He feels that these are the three strengths he musters the best. Whenever he has the chance, the young Nautolan splits the three. Sharing reading among swimming and rock climbing. He also loves to duel for fun, although is not so strong at doing so. He has an aspiration to be one of the many Jedi upon reading upon their ways. Aeton looks forward to what he has in store in the near future.

HISTORY:
Born in the Sabilion Region on the amphibious planet of Glee Anselm, Aeton grew up to be a loving and caring Nautolan amongst his friends and family. He loved to rock climb the highest mountains on land and read about the mysterious ways of the Jedi. He also found a new found love dueling, but not to the death or for money. It was all about the fun. Whenever he had the chance, he and a few friends would swim in the deep murky rivers close to his home.

The area of which Nautolan lived was notorious for it's hunting. Aeton would take up on the sport of hunting at a seven, and much to the dislike of his family would bring home fresh, but small bloody meaty carcasses of animals slain by him and his friends. Of course, these would be rejected much to the upset of Aeton. Aetons teachings by his mother, father and the elders of the village would consist of brief conflicts with the non-amphibious Anselmi and how each conflict was settled by the Nautolans' martial superiority grinding the Anselmi aggression to a standstill. Still, at a young age Aetons family the 'Maydars' were forced to leave the planet of Glee Anselm due to the usual Hurricanes and Tornadoes caused by the planets climate.

It was said the whole family moved to Alderaan when Aeton touched on age eight. This was an unusual world for Nautolans, who resided near the small seas so that they could do their normal, habitant swimming daily. Aeton was soon requested by the Jedi order to come to the world of Ossus. There, Aeton would supposedly learn the ways of the force and meet his Master. On his travels from Alderaan to Ossus Aeton had a dream, a dream that he would once become a great Jedi. Something he'd always dreamed and read about.

Upon arriving to the 'Great Temple of Ossus' Aeton, amazed by what he was feeling, seeing and experiencing walked through the great halls of the marvellous temple, passing smiling kind faces and eventually reached a courtyard. The courtyard was in the middle section of the temple, it was springing with fresh green grass and flowers. Aeton dropped his backpack by his feet. Not knowing who his Master was or waht he looked like troubled Aeton, he sat down on a stone pillar that spread along the courtyard and waited, anxiously.

While waiting thoughts crept into Aetons mind "What if i dissapoint, what if he doesn't like me?" The thoughts troubled the soon-to-be Padawan. He gritted his shining white teeth. Determination sprung wildy into his mind "I WILL do good, I WILL impress" It was as if he was in a world of his own, everything was queit and he stared to the shining cobbled floor below. He could see his tendrils dancing with excitement on his shoulder, his smile gleaming brightly. A voice struck his mind, bringing him back to reality. "I am Vizza, the Jedi Knight who will be your master" a hand was extended infront of Aetons eyes, he looked up into the Zabraks purple eyes taking his hand in his. "Aeton," he replied his name in awe at the Jedi. "Shall we?" Aeton nodded and followed the Zabrak into the Great Temple.

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The death of Master Vizza drove Aeton into a terrible state of depression, Aeton began to feel uprising emotions of both hatred to himself and to others. Strangley, he blamed himself for Master Vizzas' death and began recalling his one failure in a past training session with Vizza. Though Aeton had not been told fully of the occurances leading up to Vizzas death he soon became more and more calm, thoughts of the large, blue eyes Zabrak would bring him peace and comfort. Still young, Aeton awaited placement with another Jedi to continue his training.


KILLS:
None.

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None.

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None.

ROLE-PLAYS:
None.​
 
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Jaqen H'ghar

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this is a good start for a profile...but umm.....coynite aren't on the usable species list >.< If you look at the roleplay profile section, the very first stickied post will help you out on choosing a race.

Because of our timeline many planets have yet to be discovered or explored so we have a limitied but wide variety of races.
 

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this is a good start for a profile...but umm.....coynite aren't on the usable species list >.< If you look at the roleplay profile section, the very first stickied post will help you out on choosing a race.

Because of our timeline many planets have yet to be discovered or explored so we have a limitied but wide variety of races.

Basicly that...

...plus, he seems to be quite the ultimate Coynite...
 

Aeton

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I didn't notice that list - Damn.

Oh well - I'll change it.
 

Trakon

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Sounds like a good profile and as always, EXPAND DE HISTORY!
 

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~The whole thing will be re-written due to me epicphailing.~
 

Jaqen H'ghar

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lol contradictory:CHappy:

no there is a limit to the races we have, however there is still a relatively wide variety to choose from.

Therefore it's paradoxical not contradictory. Lrn2English.
 

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Aye, I agree with Sheo, for once, it is pretty good.
 

Dan.

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Nautolan? Yus! Kit was ossims...

And Sheo, just gmailed my English teacher...you were contradictory speekin. Not that I care, of course, I was just pointing stuff out for an LoL
 

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very nice, I like it. ^_^

Ya know, I think you like cause it's a blank template :P

Anyways, I would suggest you give a bit more detail about the move to Alderaan. Maybe something about his family life there, or more of the family conflicts. I would also push forward some. Detail it up to the point he enters the jedi order :P.

On more of a... formatting note, you might want to delete the excess stuff, having an extra history (w/description), ship, and all the other headings that've been repeated, make it a little sloppy and hard to follow :P.
 

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Well, I'd take you as a padawan, but I'm not sure if other Jedis from the site would be happy, since I took the last 3 padawans avaiable...
 
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