A Kingdom is Born

[Mortivica]

1. What is going to happen in your plot? Over the course of a few threads (actual number not determined until we see where the story is going), my character Xiang Liu will discover the current King of Lorvian City (and Panatha) is her Father (which has begun in a thread titled a Not So Homecoming). In the plot, she will work with the King to rid the city and planet of the criminals that have brought Panatha to near ruin; while using cunning and deception to earn his favor. She will, in the end, kill him and any heirs giving her the rights to the Panatha Kingdom.

2. What other players will be a part of this? Siris (written by LeavingOrbit)

3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place? Panatha

4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen. I believe it will take a year, possibly two, in-character years to achieve this. In the course of that time, Panatha will grow prosperous in the Outer Rim, and a new Panatha Kingdom will rise. Also, it will give the Jedi Exiles a haven. And possibly a well of Force Sensitives to give to the Jedi Exiles.

5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"? To rule Panatha as it's Queen. However, to avoid drawing Jedi attention (for now), my character will use imposters as the face of the Queen while she rules. Only a handful of NPCS will know the truth.

6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose. No

 

[Sreeya]

@Mortivica you need to be a minimum level 3 to become the queen of a planet. As a level one, you wouldn't even be able to have any ties to anyone in power. I'm going to reject this as it's simply too ambitious of a plot for a level 1. A level 1 plot would be something along the lines of going to the planet and maybe appealing to a very small city's local population. At level 2, an indirect connection to royalty might be possible to establish, but this early on we're certainly not going to approve a plot to become queen.

Rejected.

 

[Mortivica]

fair enough....but I still want to work toward that plot for my charrie. Besides, it is entirely possible to be the daughter of the King, considering her bio. but Level 3....my goal. Thank you for the feedback....Suggestion...you might want to include that rule in the Plot Forum. :) Have a nice day!

 

[Sreeya]

fair enough....but I still want to work toward that plot for my charrie. Besides, it is entirely possible to be the daughter of the King, considering her bio. but Level 3....my goal. Thank you for the feedback....Suggestion...you might want to include that rule in the Plot Forum. :) Have a nice day!

Actually no. Something like connection to a King needs to be explicitly stated and approved, and your profile doesn't have that written, ergo you won't be able to handwave that in. No one can start as the daughter of a planet's ruler as it offers an unfair advantage. Even if that may be the case, it certainly won't be discovered/relevant until level 3. Furthermore, after looking at this again, you'll need a planet submission for Panatha, so please start with that. Once you have that submitted, you can start weaving your story towards it.

As for including rules in the plot forum, the whole point of plot submissions is to have a case by case look at plots, so no we will not be adding a new rule every time something comes up in a plot submission. That's why I'm telling you right now why your plot can't go on as is.

I recommend submitting a small and immediate goal for your char that ultimately fits into the Queen arc. Just start small and it'll be fine.

 

[Mortivica]

A planet submission for Panatha....where do you think the Epicanthix came from? You can't have an approved species where the planet is unknown. The Vahla I can see....homeless and nomads. But a planet submission...oh how I love making those. I'll do that then to ad to the Lore of the site.

Actually, I'm not handwaving the connection to the King in....I'm actually writing stories for that, hence why I didn't include it in her bio; making her a fatherless daughter. The only thing in her bio is in her appearance where she has a unique tattoo on her calf and in the current thread, the King has one on his left forearm. Not handwaving, building it up. That's what I do....write stories....not make up fantasy.

But I'll take your suggestion....and see what I can weave from there.

BTW...I'm not arguing....just trying to work with you :)

 

[Sreeya]

A planet submission for Panatha....where do you think the Epicanthix came from? You can't have an approved species where the planet is unknown. The Vahla I can see....homeless and nomads. But a planet submission...oh how I love making those. I'll do that then to ad to the Lore of the site.

Actually, I'm not handwaving the connection to the King in....I'm actually writing stories for that, hence why I didn't include it in her bio; making her a fatherless daughter. The only thing in her bio is in her appearance where she has a unique tattoo on her calf and in the current thread, the King has one on his left forearm. Not handwaving, building it up. That's what I do....write stories....not make up fantasy.

But I'll take your suggestion....and see what I can weave from there.

BTW...I'm not arguing....just trying to work with you :)

Please stop with the snarky attitude. These comments were entirely unnecessary:

That's what I do....write stories....not make up fantasy.
A planet submission for Panatha....where do you think the Epicanthix came from? You can't have an approved species where the planet is unknown.

If I'm asking you to do something, there's a reason for it. Submit a workable plot, cut the attitude and we'll see where that goes. This conversation is now over.