A disturbance in the force.

[Outlander]

I didnt even want to pvp and i was working on him!

The character has a big flaw that needs to be fixed before anything else, and that is the whole balance to the force thing. I know you're working on him, but that's the big problem that needs to be fixed before anything else.

We can't all choose when we PvP.

 

[Darth Furus]

The character has a big flaw that needs to be fixed before anything else, and that is the whole balance to the force thing. I know you're working on him, but that's the big problem that needs to be fixed before anything else.

We can't all choose when we PvP.

No I was emphasis on was. now i'm just going to leave him as dead.

 

[Outlander]

No I was emphasis on was. now i'm just going to leave him as dead.

He isn't dead though. I really think you should work on fixing him as a character. It would give you a playable character as well as being a very good learning experience.

 

[Darth Furus]

He isn't dead though. I really think you should work on fixing him as a character. It would give you a playable character as well as being a very good learning experience.

ya but it seems like no one like anything i do to change him. also pm before an admin sees this and gets mad.

 

[Mr.BossMan]

Well, this is now proof a FS can be beaten by a non FS.

You may not know it @Darth Furus but you have settled an argument that he been around for eons, you have balanced the force.....

 

[Darth Furus]

Well, this is now proof a FS can be beaten by a non FS.

You may not know it @Darth Furus but you have settled an argument that he been around for eons, you have balanced the force.....

well at leat that makes me laugh.:D

 

[Mr.BossMan]

well at leat that makes me laugh.:D

Ya man where all friendly round here. So I guess I'll help you out. Here's some tips or advice.

1. Make your post longer and more detailed. No one really likes one liners, especially in a PvP setting.
2. Fix up your character. He's not dead, this is the diverse role play forum, which basically means your in an alternate universe. Not Star Wars, or well not the current timeline.
3. Maybe while your in a roleplay with another member, make a PM so you can get on the same page with your fellow Roleplayers.
4. Don't start off as a Darth, cause you can't do that.
5. Always counter attack a strike, all strikes, against your person.
6. Make sure you tread carfully with open roleplays, as they are dangerous.
7. Enjoy your stay at Star Wars Role Play!

I'm out of advice. Outlander and Nor'ball are much better suited then me.

 

[Marcus]

Yeah, the bigger issue for this read here was mentioned by @Mr.BossMan #5 above. You seemed to ignore a lot of what Norbs did to interact with your character, and you had a sort of "god" complex where you just did your own thing and somehow thwarted everything. Pay attention to the details of your partner(s) - even experienced writers can get lost in the details, so it is critical to pay as close attention to what is being thrown at you.

And along those lines, write things like "And if the strike would ring true, the lightsaber blade would go right through the man's torso. Even with a miss, the man might smell a bit of burnt armor when the blow nipped the shoulder or torso protection." Something like that leaves it up to the next person whether you run them through or not. ;)