A disturbance in the force.

[Darth Furus]

A disturbance in the force
Plot:​

For the past few months Darth Furus has been sensing small eregular disturbances in the force. These shutters as he calls it are becoming larger and more often, and this has made him curious about what this means and how to find out more about these issues that may soon be the largest problem in the Galaxy.

Setting:​

Right now Darth Furus is in ectospace a bar on tatooine looking for new allies to help him in his quest. It is hot loud and there are a number of odd or illegal things going on around. One of the only things that he does is stand near the center of the room and shouts aloud "I have need for a group of people who are willing to help me find the cause of a disturbance in the force!"

 

[Nor'baal]

He was not entirely sure what had brought him to this particular backwater - for his target was long gone. Gallanto sighed, for what must have been the 100th time today. Tatooine was such a disappointing world, the sand was so coarse and irritating, and it got everywhere. Shaking his head, he pulled down his goggles and put on his hat, as he walked into the local Cantina. Checking over his fire-arms, today two DL-44 blaster pistols at his hips, a vibro-sword over his back, and a wrist mounted flamethrower.

Ducking slighlty, so as to not hit his head atop the door frame, Gallanto Korad, Bounty Hunter, Lover, Fighter, walked in to the bar. Like all back end dumps it was littered with Spice Peddlers, a Hutt sat in the corner auctioning off slaves, and in the middle of the bar a lunatic ranted at how he had 'felt a disturbance in the force'. I've got a bad feeling about this, he thought, like a great many before him had in such situations.

''Take a seat pal, your causing an ruckus.'' he said to the professing man in the center of the bar, his hands hovering over his fire arm. Gallanto had earned the moniker 'Quickest Draw Outside the Core' for good reason, and he hoped that today, he would not need to put his skills to the test.

 

[Darth Furus]

Darth Furus puts his hand over one of his two lightsabers feeling a little on edge because of his time in the sith and the battles he has fought in.
he says " I dont want anyone to get hurt now. so how about we sit down and talk about this, nice and calm like."

 

[Nor'baal]

The Hunter softly chuckled, and with his left hand, pulled a re-breather mask over the lower half of his face, before lowering the hand back down to his side, his right hand never having stopped hovering over the blaster on his right hip. The man is clearly drunk, spiced, or heat-stroked, he though the himself. Gallanto, not one to take risks with strange people in distant bars, placed his bet on the man being a blend of all three, and reacted accordingly.

With a swift flick of his right hand, he drew his blaster, holding it at hip height, before once again emphasizing that the man should take a seat, and expressing as much with a swift incline of his head toward the alcove at the back of the room. ''I do not see why a man should stand and start spouting out that they have 'Felt a disturbance in the force' either you're a quack, a loony or looking for trouble.'' he argued ''So take your mumbo-jumbo and go someplace it belongs. The space port it a five minute walk south of here, and you can get a ship to the Empire, no doubt the Sith there will here you out.'' he instructed, his pistols aim never leaving the man.

Activating his HUD with a blink, he monitored the mans movements, cautious as to how the lunatic would react. Hopefully he would calm down, so as to avoid any unpleasantness, but with the Hunters eyes never leaving him, and his trigger finger ready to fire, Gallanto was more than ready to take the man out if needed.

 

[Darth Furus]

Using the for to read the mans mind. Furus senses unease with this man. so he removes his hand from the hilt of his saber and says with a smile.
"I am not on drugs, crazy, or heat stoked let alone ant combination. I also haven't been part of the sith for over a year, they would rather kill than help me. But you seem the type to like adventure and glory. Am I right?"
going to sit at the nearest table, while he singles the strange man to fallow him.

 

[Nor'baal]

Watching as the man removed his hand from his blade, and moved toward the table, Gallanto took his opportunity to act. This guy needs to calm down, he thought to himself as he reacted to the man whom he considered insane.

One didn't just come into a Cantina in this part of the Galaxy and start proclaiming Sith Edicts to the assembled scum, it made the locals uneasy. Gallanto needed to take him out, and so he did - squeezing the trigger of his side arm three times as he watched the man turn toward the table, losing three bolts towards him.

Watching as the searing hot lasers headed towards the man, aimed at his torso and arms - Gallanto drew his second blaster, ready to react if required.

He had told him to cool off, to leave - and the man would pay the price for his refusal.

 

[Darth Furus]

Very damaged and bleeding Furus draws his bladedes andforce pushes this man who just attacked him and bursts into a rage while letting out a furious and blood curtailing yell that causes the whole cantina to go silent. After this he puts the man's head between his bladedes and tells him. "I am no Sigh you imputant boy. And I don't whant to harm you as you so rudely did to me. But I need your help, the university could be in danger if we don't fund out what I have been sensing. So please I beg you to put down your wepon and talk to me in a sivilsed manner."

 

[Nor'baal]

Falling backwards slightly as the mans poorly aimed force push struck him, Gallanto was surprised to notice he was still not being attacked - his opponent instead opting to scream loudly. Smirking, he shot - this time with two pistols - at the Sith, firing six shots at the screaming man in rapid succession.

Holding his position, Gallanto watched the shots speed towards the Sith - the heavy beams of laser blasts harrowing toward him, the torso, head and legs being their intended targets. He continued to fire yet more shots at the man, just to be safe.

 

[Darth Furus]

Using force jump Furus jumps behind the man and stabs him trough the back and kicks him to the ground

 

[Nor'baal]

It was miracle that the man had avoided all of his blaster shots, and Gallantos eyes widened with shock as the man jumped through the air, as if to land behind him. Blasting once more at the man as he arced through the air, Gallanto rolled forwards as the Sith passed over his head, moving away from the Siths landing position, dropping a thermal detonator as he did so.

His roll completed, he turned, remaining crouched as he did not have the time to stand - and detonated the explosive right where the Sith would be due to land. He fired another three shots at the man, through the fires of the explosion, just to make sure.

 

[Darth Furus]

as the smoke clears Furus is no were to be found until suddenly the attackers wepons are cut to peices by a light saber and he chuckle " you really are a funny man! why not help me out? I promise not to hurt you and stop this fighting if you only sit and talk to me."

 

[Nor'baal]

as the smoke clears Furus is no were to be found until suddenly the attackers wepons are cut to peices by a light saber and he chuckle " you really are a funny man! why not help me out? I promise not to hurt you and stop this fighting if you only sit and talk to me."

Fortunately, through the HUD that the man boasted, Gallanto was able to see through the smoke that bloomed from the exploding thermal detonator. Watching as the man appeared to try and leave the vast blossoming explosive fire-ball, despite the fact that all logical outcomes would have left him an arm-less, leg-less stump on the ground, Gallanto saw him jump over to stand behind him - yet again.

Moving his blasters out of the way of the mans light-saber, before driving his knee into the mans lower torso, and forcing him to the floor, the Hunter fired - point blank - with his left hand blaster into the mans forehead, and then - using his wrist mounted flame - opened a plume of flame onto the Siths body, before kicking him away.

 

[Darth Furus]

Before the shot could be le loose Furus uses force push and then uses his lightning to fry all of the mas electronics. Then readies his saber .

 

[Nor'baal]

Before the shot could be le loose Furus uses force push and then uses his lightning to fry all of the mas electronics. Then readies his saber .

It appeared that the Sith had chosen to ignore the fact that he had just been shot square in the head at point blank range by a DL-44 Heavy Blaster Pistol. Not holding any electronic circuit within it, any attempt to use force lightening to disable the weapon would have been futile, however such an attack would have been effective on the flamer - which bore within its casing a small tube canister of flammable gas. Unfortunately however, Gallanto never had to worry about that, for the blaster shot would already have seared through the Siths skull, rending his brain apart with the heavy shot, before splatting his brains out the back of his skull.

Kicking the Sith to the ground with ease, he blew the smoke away from the barrel of the pistol. Turning to the barkeep - and tipping his hat - he tossed him a credit chit. ''Sorry about the mess.'' he said, before walking towards the door.

 

[Darth Furus]

Well looks like this rp is completely destroyed now.
Thanks for ruining my first ever rp!

 

[Nor'baal]

We are in diverse RP my friend - so all of this is "Non-Canon" and doesn't take place in the main story line. Threads like this are good learning points for you, to develop your posts into longer ones with more detail, and also not ignore incoming attacks and the like.

If you like we can work through this RP thread with input from others to develop your posts and responses?

 

[Darth Furus]

No i am just going to quit using this character, because he is now dead and i can seem to get any respect from people about him.

 

[Outlander]

No i am just going to quit using this character, because he is now dead and i can seem to get any respect from people about him.

Diverse RPs don't matter, so he's not dead. As for respect, we can't really respect someone we have no reason to respect. Of you edit him, he may become an interesting character torn between the light and dark. But the whole balance to the force angle just seems like something to artificially add importance to him.

As for posts, I'd really take Norb'aal up on that. If this was an actual PvP fight, you would have been called out several times for breaching PvP rules.

 

[Darth Furus]

Diverse RPs don't matter, so he's not dead. As for respect, we can't really respect someone we have no reason to respect. Of you edit him, he may become an interesting character torn between the light and dark. But the whole balance to the force angle just seems like something to artificially add importance to him.

As for posts, I'd really take Norb'aal up on that. If this was an actual PvP fight, you would have been called out several times for breaching PvP rules.

I didnt even want to pvp and i was working on him!

 

[Marcus]

Agreed with the above, mate. Let these guys (or this guy, @Nor'baal ) guide you. Having someone help you through a character and/or some roleplay, hand in hand, is something every newcomer or returning player needs, in my view. Take advantage of the offer, as they are genuinely wanting to help.

*looks at Norb and Outlander and runs away crying*