I was just stating a fact that you shouldn't force your beliefs on others, so you don't have to be sarcastic, and if you weren't being sarcastic I apologise for my insinuation.
Nothing seemed out of the ordinary about the skies above Coruscant that night, there were the usual 1 million ships going around the planet. Then a small interceptor starts crashing through the atmosphere at high speed, the pilot, Reaver, sends out a distress call in the hope he will be rescued...
Yes but all that aside, I talk about taking over the world and handing the control of certain countrys to my family and freinds, and keeping all the worlds money and distributing it evenly across the world so I beat you by a long shot. And who is Hoorex?
Thanks for the help guys, I really appreceat it. I would have rathered that you had worded it all differntly, you know by saying stuff like "I think you should change this because....", but thanks any way.
Right, I wasn't exacly thinking right when I posted this so I will make a few more changes, and I'm not trying to start an argument, I'm trying to stop an argument occuring, but I think I might have just failed that.
Well if you look at the last part of his history he has just been in an asteroid feild that damaged his ship and he has just crash laned, think about it would you be healthy after that, and as for the rank he had he was a excelant fighter and he had officer training and the fleet admiral was...
I'm sorry I had a go at you guys, I know your just trying to help, but I'm not that good at this sort of thing, all the rp's I have been in never really asked for stuff like my charictors stats, just the first bit, like the name, age, gender.
Reaver
NAME: Reaver (It's a nick-name no one will know his real name, he is trying to keep a low profile)
FACTION: None, yet
RANK: N/A
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 18
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6 foot
WEIGHT: 170
EYES: Silver
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Caucasian
CREDITS: 0
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None...
"Ok, activating tractor beam" the Nav Comm technician says. The tractor beam reaches both ships and slowly pulls them in. "This is Fox Seven, I see a small pirate fleet leaving their base, they have a capitol ship and five cruisers, they should reach you in three minutes, we will try to hold...
The Avia Carrier arrives to retrieve The Shadowstalker. "Our sensors show a small pirate base around sector 06.06.07" the Nav-Comm technician says to The Shadowstalker, The Outrunner, Fox Three, Fox Five and Fox Seven. "Ok Fox Squadron, scout the area and report any movement that could put this...