I like what you're saying here, but what skill with a lightsaber? He has had very little formal training with a lightsaber. He wouldn't be all that good an actualy style yet. I just picked out the form he's learning. Only real training he's had is with physical weapons which is the only reason...
I've never believed in giving my characters kryptonite like weaknesses or min/maxed compared to more subtle ones like personality based ones. No point in giving him a bad knee or something just for the sake of him being hobbled in some way. I write characters that are fully able to stand on...
Onsori unloaded the younger girl in his arms gently onto a wooden stretch table, inside of the hut. Turning his attention back to Isabella, he rushed to the door looking to help her in as well, noticing her fall earlier. He moved to give her a shoulder and get her off of the limping foot he...
"So you're sure they are Jedi," questioned Onsori Planetfire as he walked towards the entrance of the community, lightsaber in hand. The brain underneath that crown of horns was buzzing with the feeling he had earlier.
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Jedi Padawan, Onsori Planetfire, back on his homeworld of Kashyyyk after so long. His large, three person starship landed at the exact coordinates of his small Wookiee family's community. As his ship touched down, he could see the piece of the whole village, composed of mostly children half his...
Character's name: Onsori Planetfire
Link to their profile: www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/onsori-planetfire.59596/
Your desired rank: Padawan
Character's name: Onsori Planetfire
Link to their profile: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?65882-Onsori-Planetfire&p=1230884#post1230884
Desired rank: Padawan
Onsori Planetfire
NAME: Onsori Planetfire
FACTION: The New Jedi Order
RANK: Jedi Padawan
SPECIES: Zabrak
AGE: 20
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'2 1/2"
WEIGHT: 210 pounds
EYES: Brown
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Tan
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Vestigial horns, black facial tattoo in the design of a tree...