Xan

And to be fair, Lutomi raises a brow probably equally as often.

I'm going to entertain myself with simply counting how many times Xanthus shrugs in his threads.

I need a breakthrough for Jamie. His character lacks direction, or at least a clear enough one for my tastes. So either he's pushed to change or he's killed by his own actions. I like the risk.

Now I view this like a pvp. Everything I wrote in my post is subject to change based on your reply and how you inject Xanthus into events. So I'm completely cool with you molding the clay to better fit what you were looking for. BUT I think the very last paragraph benefits both our stories very well, you your failure and thus your growth and me my killing and thus my growth, and so should stay. Tell me how you feel.

Belif >:Z

Oh, lol. All I know is that Lutomi was yelling at me the other day-I think I already told you about it ;) But she was telling me how she and Afro thought Ark was metally ill for attacking int he first place.

I bet you've been talking to Lutomi and Afro Ceasar then right ;) lol

I know that, but Ark doesn't! ;)

It just hit me. You've decided the perfect conflict between us, and for Jamie ;)

:D -I don't think I want to look at it though. I mean an Acolyte attacking a Master doesn't merit a good outcome...

HEY! We almost have the same amount of posts! I barely past you probably an hour ago! just random weirdness from this end. Pay no attention ;)

Meeeee

Just to be clear, Pelamb didn't kill anyone in the fog. I leave that to Xanthus ...after he discovers all the bodies of the crew along the way. ;P Maybe he cut off a hand or slashed a thigh or something. But otherwise left the remaining natives in a cluster**** of disarray and otherwise confusion of who they are to each other. They're family after all. They don't take separation/internal discord easily.

Sounds good. And now Lutomi is giving me crap for attacking Xan as an Acolyte, lol ;) I knew I should have just run away! Leave Ras' body to the wolves...

Lol, nice timing btw. We decide to write him out of the thread the very day he returns... too funny! Either way, I'm not sure how willing he is to continue RPing in that thread. It sounds like he won't have much time to post, and it sounds like he wants to create a new charrie! So in all likelihood we're alight, and won't have anything to change, but it's funny the timing!

hey I wanna say sorry for ditching in the middle of that thread and after that long ass wait. I am sorry and id love to make it up to you sometime but I still am unsure if I can jump into an RP and keep it active so Sorry mate I wish I didn't have to ditch it :p

I have to say though, Xanthus is getting soft. He used to just have pockets upon pockets of Grenades!! Why he wastes his time today, lifting his lightsaber....flailing his arms around....getting himself tired....I'll never understand. Couldn't he kill with a thought? A tray perhaps?

Ditto! :)

While I read you, I think of the numerous eloquent styles of the classic novelists. And I say, many try but few impress as much.

Although I must ask for clarity. Is it more difficult to write the epic fight, or the emotional development?