Will do I appreciate it. Ungol is going to be a separate character that I use in the Sith Eternal, I don't think I will necessarily have Marik fall the Darkside, right away at least, and I think he will come to realize that Ungol is a Sith and choose to try to reform the Jedi from within. If...
He doesn't share them openly, on the outside he seems like a normal, if at time reckless Jedi Knight. I'm going to go through and clarify a few more things regarding his views, which are at the core of the character and how he will move forward. The Ungol cracater is going to be a PC as well and...
Ok so I revamped it so that Marik is going to remain a Jedi for the time being, albeit one with unique views on the Jedi and their role in the Galaxy. Please take a look through and let me know that you guys think.
Thanks for the pointers guys, I will sit down with this and do a large edit to make things work better.
I will need some confirmation though at to whether I am allowed to have my character be a fallem Jedi or if thats forbidden as of now.
In terms of the Kaan family being descended from Sith...
I split up the bio so that it has a family background as well as a bio. Still over 1500 words but I really don't see how I can trim it down without altering the actual story. Let me know what you think.
EDIT: Removed the Duel with Umbrael, I will role play that out as a solo thread.
Marik Kaan
NAME: Marik Kaan
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Jedi Knight
SPECIES: Human of Coruscant heritage
AGE: 25
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6 ft
WEIGHT: 200lbs
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
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Hey guys, some of you may or may not remember me, last I was involved with the storyline was during the Sith Exile timeline. Unfortunately life got in the way and I sort of had to drop out but I'm back and hoping to get involved with this new, and quite interesting from what I can see, timeline...
I have a few players I’ve been talking to about it. It won’t happen immediately as I want to set it all up so you won’t have to worry about having enough people.
Thank you for looking it over! I appreciate the time!