Sivaprasad
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OK, sorry. As for the red 'saber...thousands dead? idk, that seems pretty excessive unless you really are ok with that many people dying lol. also "energy blade of some kind" i think people would recognize lightsabers for what they are. it's not like there are so many types of energy blades that nobody would immediately think light saber. also his blades aren't red, they are a more orang-ish hue but that's irrelevant.
it's a big post with a little much. for the thread to last in a way that won't end up with Geir either killing more people and being recognized i would say leave some of the new reports to carry on through the whole thread. also maybe because i'm a format freak it's difficult to read when you space all of your lines apart instead of just have it be a connected paragraph.
instead of having it be "sentence one is here"
"sentence two is here"
"sentence three is here"
have it be like "sentence one is here. sentence two is here. sentence three is here." and then naturally it will wrap around back to the left side of the post and continue on over to the right. just for future reference so that is allows for maximum use of space and not making stuff force people to scroll super far.