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Name: Lylieth (Moon) Cahrira
Faction: Mandalorian
Rank: Commando
Species: Mandalorian Twi' lek
Age:28
Gender: Female
Force Sensitive: Not a bit
Appearence: Lylieth is a pink twi 'lek (Her mother was red, her father white) that stands around 1.7 meters (5 foot 5 and a half inches.), weighs about 70 Kilograms (154 pounds). She has a few spots on her that are more white or red, rather than pink (one on part of her left collar bone is white, a large one on her left leg is red, and there are many spots on her tails.) Her tails are somewhere around 2.5 feet long (0.762 meters). She has had a few scars, but they have faded far too much to see, even up close. Outside of her armor, she is generally either wearing A: A dirty, grimy mechanic suit (or possibly an old flight suit, can't tell under all the dirt), which means she is either doing repairs or trying to make something. Or B: A rather tight blue and gray under-shirt and some tight black pants (this is worn under her armor, form fitting so that it won't get in the way.)
Attributes: First, I will put these into "DND" terms, (0-20) then I will explain them.
Strength: 14 Dexterity: 16 Constitution: 14 Intelligence: 19 Wisdom: 10 Charisma: 10

Lylieth, or Moon, as is her code name for missions, bounty hunting or otherwise, is rather strong for her size, able to keep a blaster steady and rather good at close combat fighting, but she won't be flipping over speeders or anything like that, and punching a droid in the face would probably break her hand as well as the droids face. She is very dexterous, and can crawl through tight spaces with ease, she can dodge very easily, and could probably even match a Jedi's abilities with her own in close corners (not that she's tried that, yet). Lylieth also can withstand a decent amount of heat or cold, and will be able to fight, even when heavily injured, for a time, as well as having a high metabolism and immune system means that poisons and wounds from blasters can be healed from rather quickly. Perhaps her best trait though, is her intelligence, being an able mechanic, quartermaster, and tinkerer, she can take apart/disarm almost any technology very quickly, and put it together better than it was originally. Her best display of this is optimizing her proton torpedoes, blasters, and other weapons with her own personal touches. Her perception and charisma, however, are only that of an average persons, and she can make mistakes, say the wrong thing, not notice that land mine, or be unable to break that code.


Now on to weaknesses: Lylieth can become over-cocky when she hasn't failed in some time, and can forget her own limits, as well as forgetting that her allies are competent and able to protect themselves. While she used to believe in non-lethal force, she has secretly become obsessed with killing, and will use that to solve many of her situations, especially if she views her current enemy as scum. Morality<loyalty, she will do anything for Mandalore, and it's cause, although her faith in Mandalore has recently been shaken greatly, believing that they are the ones who will bring the best form of order to the galaxy. If ordered to kill someone she knew, she will most likely do it, if that order comes from a Mandalorian who outranks her. She suffers from "absent seizures" which on the inside is an abnormality in the electrical activity in ones brain, but on the outside, it essentially looks as though they were "spacing out" or unfocused, usually either dropping whatever they have in their hands or just standing, still as a statue. Usually, this lasts only for about ten seconds. It is unknown what exactly causes these to happen so often with Lylieth, but they do, most often when she is working on repairing or making something. This causes her to miss deadlines on repairs at times, and has even occurred during combat. She is passively searching for a cure for this, but to no avail. Because she seems to know a lot about many things, especially technology, Lylieth is scared of what she doesn't know or can't comprehend. The force is one of those things, so she naturally feared the Sith as well as the Jedi, even though she has never met one of either. She doesn't understand how they work, and, her clan being Ordo, has a natural hatred of them as well. If she sees one, she will generally stay away, and the only things that fuels her want to engage them in battle (other than orders) is the desire to study a lightsaber, another thing she has never encountered I put this at the bottom because it ties into her personality to, Lylieth can easily get so focused on making and repairing that her emotions are virtually nullified, and although she generally tries to be kind, while she is repairing something, she has been known to take a cold, uncaring tone, especially if someone interrupts those repairs. She has sometimes been known to ignore anyone below or at her rank so that she can finish modifying or creating something. Also, being obsessed with technology, Lylieth will sometimes take apart crucial technology, even whole ships, to figure out how they work, sometimes under the guise of "repairs and maintenance".

Personality: Lylieth is, in conversation, a generally gentle and well-mannered person, even sometimes bordering on shyness, and often times won't speak to someone unless they come to her first. She will try to be kind to someone (as long as they aren't in the way of her duties or studies.), but if they clearly aren't interested in her being nice, she will deffer to being a cold, unfeeling person. If they change their tone, she will try being nice again, if not, this is clearly the better way to speak with them. Lylieth was/is a bounty hunter. She enjoys fine cooking and drinks (not necessarily alcoholic, but if it's good...) and wants to have a nice, big house with lots of droid servants one day, preferably one large enough to let other people stay in, especially members of her clan, Ordo, and her friends Kaul and Herrith which she is probably most loyal to. She left Taris because, well, it was boring there, and overpopulated, full of criminals, and toxic on the surface, none of which appealed to her. The one thing it did have was resources, which she will probably miss, along with her family. But there is no time to think of what one will miss, now is the time to look to the future, and what it will bring to me. Time to serve a cause, to earn something beyond Taris, to become something better. Now, she looks to what she can get to quickly, and that will support her as well as being something she can support. Now she will serve her new family and cause. Mandalore.

Biography: Born on Taris, Lylieth was used to living underground, poor, crowded and under constant crime threat. Since age six, she tinkered and experimented with different technologies, making droids, lights, and other things to sell for food and to help her parents with rent. She did not enjoy having to support her parents financially, but understood she wouldn't survive otherwise. Eventually, poverty did what it always does. Promotes crime and violence. Her father joined a gang to make money for the family, and was eventually captured by local police. Due to the abuses her father had put her and her mother through (which I'm not listing, as I refuse to make "my family was bad" something that motivates this character. Seen it too much, won't personally do it, if you do that's okay, but not for me.) she recognized the police as the force that brings order, and peace.

At around sixteen, she bought a very small house of her own, and took up guard duty, earning her some training, money, and something to do. This quickly resulted with her mother disowning her, which she was fine with. If her mother wanted to live in a world of Stockholm syndrome, she could do so on her own. She quickly bought armor that could withstand the Taris surface, which was inhospitable, and got tons of stuff from the crashed starfighters and buildings, re-purposing and repairing, creating and inventing. This earned her a decent amount of money, which she used, along with an old ship and her guard armor, as well as anything else she owned, to sell and build up what she has now, which has been bought from multiple sources (Black markets and legal ones alike). She became a bounty hunter at twenty four, capturing, and sometimes even killing, to make more money so that she could get off that rust-covered rock. Lylieth managed her way to Mandalore, which took her in with open arms, and she has decided to return the favor by giving them her best services. Lylieth is obsessed with technology and will do her best to put those abilities to Mandalore's best use, as a soldier, using her advanced and customized weaponry to destroy her enemies.

Skills: Mandalorian combat training, ability to take apart and put together almost any technology, and optimize it, capture/kill tactic knowledge, near super-intelligence, advanced programming and coding abilities, hand to hand combat, average pilot training, average bomb-making ability, well above average weapons knowledge, including optimizing weapons in the middle of battle sometimes, ability to hack into/shut down almost any security system (she practiced this a lot as a guard, and as a bounty hunter) the ability to keep a cool head in the heat of battle.

Gear: Beautifully painted (Gray primary, Pink secondary) set of CCT MK II armor (Wild card function is a retractable wrist blade (Vibro) Hard point is a flamethrower on her right arm). Link here:http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/mandalorian-dominion-technology.73900/
One empty data pad
One data pad full of functions for her droid, and many notes on different technology she has encountered in the past.
XPC-71 (Flashlight and holographic sight, said it had a rail system specifically for these so I think I can use it here.), Link here: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/xpc-71.64975/
Magazines: 7 (189 charges)
Type 15-S silenced carbine, Link here: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/type-15s-silenced-carbine.68438/
Magazines: 5 (125 rounds)
EMP grenades X5, Link here:http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/electro-magnetic-pulse-disabling-grenade.67996/
Role plays: Link to the one that shook her faith: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...-justice-and-a-pink-buddy.74840/#post-1368119

Relationships:has a friendship with Kaul and Herrith. (RFVFS and Herrith Hendarsin)

Ship: Aggressor class Attack craft, Painted all gray (There are only two holding cells, the other space is used for recharging her droid(s) and a few extra cots in case she needs to bring friends into battle) Link here:http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/aggressor-class-attack-craft.72598/

Droids: RZX-637 *EndBringer* Guardian Droid, named Rose, painted with a gray primary, pink secondary, as her armor is. Programmed to be able to fly her ship, operate a second blaster, and the standard protect/serve protocol. The head is surprisingly untouched, however. She has built this over the course of years, and it is one of her greatest accomplishments, she will not get rid of it. Link below:

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/rzx-637-endbringer-guardian-droid.70256/

Pets: No, doesn't enjoy them either.

Kills: None yet!

Combat: None yet!



Change Log: Lylieth has become in factuated with killing, and has made two friends, as well as had her faith shaken due to a lack of change in what she has done in the Mandalorian armies, and the fact that she took down a Hutt when working with a rag-tag group of friends and disreputable rebels.​
 
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This is a WIP, as hard as I tried not to make it one, so be gentle, but not too gentle, I am new so I want to be pretty good at this, but I won't be on for awhile, so don't expect me to reply or edit until Monday. Sorry guys.
 

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I feel like the biography could definitely be expanded upon, one paragraph seems a bit barebones when it comes to a character. You're fine not having 17 paragraphs like I did with my mando, but I think 3 or 4 is a good number to show gradual progression and major life events as they reach their current age. That's just my opinion on it though, one paragraph seems crowded when you try summarizing 28 years of a person's life.
 

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Even though this is a WIP I'm just going to point out the things that need to be added or taken away. I would do so in our PM but then someone else would be likely to repeat what I say.

I'm guessing you'll add more on appearance later because at the moment all we know is that she is a female twi'lek.
I agree with Kuroshi in that you could expand on her bio a bit as well as her personality. In addition to this she's quite good at a lot of skills but her only real weakness is that she's prone to being headstrong. I'm not saying that it's unrealistic but there should be some challenges for her to face besides social relations.

I like the idea of a character being able to adapt to situations and modify weapons to suit their needs however:

Vagabond armor (Modified, pending)
Z-4 jetpack (reinforced with extra durasteel platings, doesn't lift as quickly due to this)
FAIDX20 (Fast acting incapacitation dart, hooked to wrist launcher)
Utility Gauss Launcher (Modified to be more small and light-weight)
ACR-4-26 Sonic Rifle (Many modifications, including advanced magazine/charger (holds 15 rounds, instead of 5)

The problem with these is you can't really change a piece of tech (unless the change is purely aesthetic) without it having to go through the re-approval process. This may seem unfair but allow me to explain.
If a weapon has 5 shots, and you upgrade it to 15 that will drastically improve it's battle capabilities and the weapon as a whole. Imagine trying to take a revolver with 5 shots and then trying to add a cylinder with 15 shots. It's going to change how much the weapon weighs and how it preforms drastically. The tech is designed so that PCs are on a somewhat level playing field when it comes to PvP. If you make a weapon smaller and lighter then it will preform better and will allow your character to overpower others players with ease. Same thing goes for armor, if you take a Medium ranked armor and make it Light then you're effectively negating all the disadvantages of that armor. I couldn't find anything on the FAIDX20 but poisons and toxins are a bit of a grey area and Clayton has been hesitant to approve their use in the past.

All this being said I think it would be amazing to RP as a Macgyver type character who can make a bomb out of just about anything so definitely do not remove that as one of her strengths.

Typically WIPs are best placed in the Player Workshops board which I mentioned but you have almost everything you need in the profile...

This is more of an aesthetic thing rather than anything really important but you can remove the Mandalorian part from her species because you already have Mandalorian listed as her faction.

Everything is looking pretty good though so after you finish adding everything you need don't forget to sign her up in the Mandalorian Sign-Up board.
 

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@Dark child hit the nail on the head. The only thing I want to add is that, if you want, you can try to submit a modified piece of tech through the board if you so choose. Although, since the tech approval process tends to take a while, you might want to consider how important it is for you to have a special variant of whatever you're submitting.

Regardless, I like where this profile is going, and I'm sure the Mandos will be happy to have you!
 
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I feel like the biography could definitely be expanded upon, one paragraph seems a bit barebones when it comes to a character. You're fine not having 17 paragraphs like I did with my mando, but I think 3 or 4 is a good number to show gradual progression and major life events as they reach their current age. That's just my opinion on it though, one paragraph seems crowded when you try summarizing 28 years of a person's life.
Okay, I have updated her bio and personality, and added to them a bit, what do you think?
 

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Okay, I had to change the gear around a bit, but I think I've finally got Lylieth ready to head out into the world, what do you think?
 

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I would suggest adding links to the tech boards for each piece of equipment.

Also what are FAID darts?
 

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This is looking a lot better. I like everything you've added to the bio.

"I put in the links, am I ready to join yet?"

Just give the Mando AFLs a little time and they will get to it. I'm not sure if any of them are even on right now.
On the FAID darts I'm guessing they will still be ok but you might want to send Clayton a quick PM just to double check.
 

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This is looking a lot better. I like everything you've added to the bio.

"I put in the links, am I ready to join yet?"

Just give the Mando AFLs a little time and they will get to it. I'm not sure if any of them are even on right now.
On the FAID darts I'm guessing they will still be ok but you might want to send Clayton a quick PM just to double check.
Alright, I'll see if I can figure that out, since I haven't met Clayton yet to my knowledge.
 

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Actually, I think I'll just take those down, they seem to be in a huge controversy at the moment and using them on PCs is most likely considered cheating, so to make sure I don't use them for that, I'll take them down for now.
 

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Actually, I think I'll just take those down, they seem to be in a huge controversy at the moment and using them on PCs is most likely considered cheating, so to make sure I don't use them for that, I'll take them down for now.

I would keep them, if you like it. I wouldn't consider them OP, since you need species specific darts and because slug throwers are garbage against armor- which most PCs wear. Clayton approved them, and the tech rules for weapons haven't changed significantly, sooo... I say you're good to go. If they were a problem, they would have been archived.
 

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I would keep them, if you like it. I wouldn't consider them OP, since you need species specific darts and because slug throwers are garbage against armor- which most PCs wear. Clayton approved them, and the tech rules for weapons haven't changed significantly, sooo... I say you're good to go. If they were a problem, they would have been archived.
Thank you so much, but I think I may actually be better off not relying on them, now that I've had some more time to think about it. Again thank you for your support though :)
 

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Hey there, lookin' good! Approved

though a side note, have you looked at the faction armor that we have in the Dominion? Since its faction armor its technically superior to indie armor.
 

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Hey there, lookin' good! Approved

though a side note, have you looked at the faction armor that we have in the Dominion? Since its faction armor its technically superior to indie armor.
Actually, yes, however I wanted to be approved before I went for something like that. Since I have been approved I will look it over again and see what I can do!
 

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Actually, yes, however I wanted to be approved before I went for something like that. Since I have been approved I will look it over again and see what I can do!
Awesome! :D
 

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Awesome! :D
If I were to reject the armor, I'm guessing that I couldn't use the functions of the armor "Like wild card and wrist weapon hard point"? In all actuallity I'm sure they'd be easily interchangable, but if I have to go through the tach board that could take awhile and i want to get on with some missions ASAP. My main problem with the Mandalorian armor is that my character is very agile, and that could be taken away relatively easily by that armor. Honestly it's still very worth it so if I have to, I'll go for it.
 

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If I were to reject the armor, I'm guessing that I couldn't use the functions of the armor "Like wild card and wrist weapon hard point"? In all actuallity I'm sure they'd be easily interchangable, but if I have to go through the tach board that could take awhile and i want to get on with some missions ASAP. My main problem with the Mandalorian armor is that my character is very agile, and that could be taken away relatively easily by that armor. Honestly it's still very worth it so if I have to, I'll go for it.
We have a more medium armor below it, that sacrifices some of the tech for functionality - but yes you can't just pick and choose pieces of the armor. Tbh CCT is all I use on my character, and I've had no issues with it.
 

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We have a more medium armor below it, that sacrifices some of the tech for functionality - but yes you can't just pick and choose pieces of the armor. Tbh CCT is all I use on my character, and I've had no issues with it.
I think I'll go with the heavy CCT, I was thinking the ENSO MKII would help with the soul-crushing heat of Mustafar or Tatooine, but I think the tech FAR outweighs such a small factor. Especially for a character that is obsessed with technology. Thanks!
 
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