Sith Order Kedum Ran

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Name: Kedum Ran
Faction: Sith Eternal
Rank: Legionnaire
Species: Bith
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Height: 6"0'
Weight: 180lbs
Force Sensitive: Yes, trained

Appearance:
Kedum Ran appears as a typical Bith. Standing 6 feet tall and weighing in at 180 pounds he is slender, yet surprisingly well toned. His large black, glassy, eyes seem to hold no discernible emotion. He is bald with very pale green skin, rare for a Bith but common among his lineage.

Attributes:
Kedum Ran stands at the pinnacle of physicality, for a Bith anyway. Well toned and strong as a result of his training with the Eternal Legion, he is considered more of a scalpel then a sword. Quick precise strikes are his forte. He lacks stamina due to his Bith physiology. Only having one lung means he has little endurance, needing to finish any physical confrontation quickly before literally collapsing. He is frailer than a human who has gone through similar training. In addition, sonic grenades and the Bith do not mix, as his head will explode if one goes off and he is in too close proximity. Kedum seeks to learn only those Force powers that will allow him to accomplish his goals as a weapon of the Sith Eternal. He has a lust for learning more about the dark side, hearing of the old rituals, he is obsessed with learning more of blending science and the Force.

Personality:
If compared to Bith in the galaxy proper, Kedum Ran would be considered a psychopath. He is by no means a pacifist and seeks only to further the goals of the Sith Eternal from the shadows. Calm to a point of creepiness when not on a mission, as soon as he put's his mind to something, he will see it through to the end. His is obsessed with learning more secrets of the dark side and will do anything in the pursuit of that knowledge. He is highly dedicated to eliminating what he sees as stagnation in the galaxy, especially among his own kind.

It could almost be said that Kedum has two personalities that changes based on the situation. Normally, he is calm, soft spoken, and abnormally polite. He is tolerant of others and brushes off insults as if he does not even know what they mean. When exposed to something that interests him, he reacts as almost a giddy child, eager to learn. However, when threatened or given a mission by his superiors, Kedum becomes almost a different being. Those around him who have witnessed this side speak of Kedum almost exuding confidence and malice. He will not speak unless required or hesitate to lash out with violence if necessary or insulted. Nothing will distract him from accomplishing his task, which will be completed no matter what with no regard to those who get in his way, be they friend or foe.

Biography:
Kedum Ran is a descendant of followers of Xendor. His ancestors a clan of outcast Bith, considered mutants by their own people for having the ability to reproduce and not suppressing their natural urges. Devoted to the teachings of the Legions of Lettow, the Ran clan survived alongside the other outcasts. Due to their mutation, the Bith among the Legions fell into inbreeding as normal Bith relied on artificial means to reproduce. This resulted in dwindling numbers and a decline in intellect and physical capabilities, no matter how they trained. Few remained capable and from among these few, spawned Kedum Ran.

Born 10 years after the Sith Eternal came to the Legions of Lettow, Kedum knew little of the old ways. The last hope of his dying people, his family demanded only perfection. The beatings, the torture, it broke him, resulting in two distinct personalities. The limitations put upon him though deemed him unable to be a warrior. Instead, he was trained to be an assassin, a tool through which the Eternal Legion could re-mold the galaxy. With their re-exposure to the galaxy through the Sith Eternal, the Ran clan become increasingly more agitated, craving a way to reverse their own fortunes instead of shaping the galaxy to the Sith Eternal's view. Upon promotion to Legionnaire, Kedum Ran slaughtered his family in the night on orders of an unnamed superior given through a dream. They had become a liability, risking preemptive exposure. While Kedum is devoted to the Sith Eternal's vision and follows orders without question, the imprint of family has influenced his own goals in making the galaxy a better place.

Skills:
Trained as an assassin. Competent duelist if needed but only enough to remove himself from a disadvantageous situation. Moderately skilled in the Force, but only in abilities that aid in his missions or have the possibility of blending science and the Dark Side.
Force Sense
Buried Presence
Force Enhancement
Mental Manipulation
Telekinesis (still training, limited use)

Gear:
Lightsaber - red
Datapad
Comlink

Role-Plays:
N/A
 
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This looks okay so far, just one thing I noticed: You mentioned a couple times "THE Eternal" coming to visit your old tribe to be the bridge to return to the galaxy at large. Did you mean "the SITH Eternal"? If so, please specify that. Once that's fixed, it should be okay to go. Thank you! @BarelyAScientist
 

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I meant it as following the event when The Eternal came to the remnants of the Legion but I can see how that was confusing so edited to the Sith Eternal! Thank you for the feedback! @Insalius
 

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Thank you for the quick response! It looks good now, so now it has my...

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