Joran Miran

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Character Name: Joran Miran
Faction: Galactic Alliance
Rank: Rebel
Species: Human
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Force Sensitive: Nope

Appearance: A relatively short person, measuring at 5 foot 6, he has a relatively charming face. His eyes resemble the oceans of Manaan, and his hair the sun. To complement this, he is also light, with a slightly below average weight. His white skin is delicate, and soft, easily broken but also relatively easily patched up. With no real scars, his appearance is certainly something which can attract a far more welcome attention...

Attributes: Joran is an incredibly intelligent person. Graduating from the University of Coruscant with technology, he passed with flying colours, constantly showing an exceptional preference for logic and reason over emotion. His dexterity is also a fine skill for him. The skills he possesses with the swiftness of his hands, and his coordination were gained from his time using computers and the complex technologies required to graduate. If there was ever something which had to be done with speed and skill, he was the man to call on.

Unfortunately, whilst he did work out a little at the university and after, he is by no means the most endurant soldier in the Rebel army. He barely scrapes any necessary fitness tests, and so probably isn’t tested for long, and physically draining activities. Strength is also a weakness. He barely can lift a relatively heavy stone, finding it difficult to keep up with any physical activities. This is why he usually plans things out, and lets other, far more stronger soldiers to do the physical activities.

Biography: Born in Coruscant under Imperial rule, he had a basic childhood, born into a wealthy family. When he began learning the basics, he was noted to immediately hold a great grasp on academic subjects. Through schooling, he always excelled in Maths and Science, showing a precocious talent not seen in a long time. Through his family’s wealth, he was able to attend the best possible schools, and his intelligence simply developed further and further through this

Joining the university, he studied technology. Here, he learnt all the different types of computing and other technologies available in he galaxy. He took an avid interest in this, delving further and further into this, always inquisitive. The lecturers there were always questioned, leading to an incredible test score. However, he was unable to join the Imperial military, due to the lack of his physical ability. He did join the Imperial Government as a clerk, but this bored him to such an extent he resigned. With his family embarrassed, they kicked him out, and he got into a freighter, heading to the Outer Rim. Landing on a planet, which he did not know, he met many like minded people. Detesters of the Empire, from the outside and within. When he learnt their true nature, as Rebels, he asked and was accepted to join them for training. And now he works as a soldier, passing the physical tests. Just.

Personality: Cold. But when people get to know him, warm. When first meeting someone, and in command in general, he uses his logical brain to work out what is necessary for victory or defeat. He can show a lack of empathy, or sympathy, or both for his soldiers, leading to some disliking him. However, for those who take the time to get to know him, he is a friendly and loyal person. He can also seem nerdy, and always wants to set things right, correcting the tiniest of things.

Gear: Typical Rebel Armour-http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/rebel-trooper-armor.84623/
Standard Issue Rebel Blaster Rifle-http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/r5r-blaster-rifle.84389/
Standard Issue Rebel Blaster Pistol-http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/r5-blaster-pistol.84388/
Portable computer-http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/tds-1100-portable-computer.84504/
Datapad-http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/dtx-1480-informaster.84508/

Skills: Joran is most definitely a computer savvy. He almost has a natural gift for computers, and is able to use, or hack into many different types. His intelligence and logic is also something which has gotten him out of a tough spot before, able to use it when planning operations and strategies. However, he is a poor shot to say the very least. His marksmanship is certainly a wanting quality. This could also be said of his hand to hand combat. He's usually one to back off, or provide cover fire for his troops.
 
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"Landing on a planet, which he did not know, he witnessed the Rebels form."

I don't like the "witnessed the rebels form" line. You should change this to something like "was able to find like minded individuals who he would learn called themselves Rebels." Or something to that effect. You also mention that he's a "relatively short person" but still hits 6ft. That'd make him slightly above average if humans are similar in SW as they are on Earth.

Outside of that though I think it looks alright.

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Oh. I thought people were normally like 6 foot 2 or something similar lol. Made the edits! @Relent
 

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Oh. I thought people were normally like 6 foot 2 or something similar lol. Made the edits! @Relent
In what world? Average height is like 5'7 for humans. Same goes for SW humans. So your character is still average, short would be 5'2 or something like that.
 
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