Jaycob Flesio

[JDF]

Status: Alive
Name: Jaycob Flesio
Codename: Nomad
Faction: Mandalorian Dominion
Rank: Commando
House: Vizsla
Species: Human
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Force Sensitive: No

***Appearance***

6'1'', 245 lbs., medium skin tone, black spiky hair​

***Attributes***​

Jaycob is shy and usually keeps to himself unless his life is on the line. He is reasonably strong and can think on his feet. He has run into trouble along his career so he can take a few hits. When he has spare time, he uses it to maintain physical fitness and keep his trigger finger itched.

Strength: 6.5/10
Intellect: 5.5/10
Health: 6/10
Dexterity: 7/10
Stamina: 8/10
Marksmanship: 9.5/10
Teamwork: 3/10
Piloting: 5/10
Stealth: 7/10

***Personality***​

Jaycob is trying to find a job or hobby that will fill the empty hole in himself which pushes him towards using his skills for good. He is very goal-oriented person and likes the feeling of getting something done. However, he doesn't like to leave loose ends. If their ever is one, he always tries to figure out the problem and come up with a solution to fix it. He also likes the feeling of being part of something, like a team(even though he is usually alone).

-Proactive
-Hard-working
-Skillful
-Persistent
-Selfless
-Courageous
-Impatient
-Aggressive
-High tempered
-Over confident
-Forgetful

***Biography***​

Jaycob is a smuggler from the vacation planet Z'trop(Born and raised). He's had to live on his own for 8 years because his parents were taken away from him when he was 10. Throughout these 8 years, he'd started hanging around pirates and bounty hunters who took him in as some sort of apprentice. With their teaching, he joined the smuggling business at 15 years old. He was sent in smaller missions and uses the money he makes to give himself a life. He's learned how to deal with life on his own ever since.

Even though he lives on a vacation planet, he didn't do much of it. When his parents were still alive, his father pushed him to become the best person he could be. Jaycob's first goal was to become a Ship Technician like his father. However, Jaycob decided to pursue his own life and decided to become a smuggler and make his own choices.

After a couple of years of smuggling, he brought together a crew that helped with different missions. But, on a mission to smuggle contraband off of a planet, one his crewmates sold him out for more money. After this, he disbanded the group and decided to continue his journey by himself. His parents were killed by bounty hunters the next day. With everything in the world looking grim, Jaycob decided to join The Accord to help him cope with his loss of touch. However, his career with The Accord would come to an end after the Battle on Coruscant. Now, he is a freelance vigilante working in Coruscant to bring justice to the people that the Republic can not. Now, he's looking for a new Faction that will aid him in his struggle to bring peace to the right people...Luckily, he found The Mandalorian Dominion which specializes in all things "for the people" which is right up his alley.

During the ages of 18-24, he joined a faction named the Mandalorian Dominion in order to make use of his time. He was a Commando for House Vizsla. He also decided to take the codename of Nomad in order to keep his identity a secret. With the Dominion, he has gone on numerous mission which has caused his teamwork ability to increase. During this time, he has started to work better with a team.

***Inventory***​

Normal Clothes (various colored tunics, cloaks, pants, and shoes)
Harlaw Heavy Carbine
Mandalorian Tactical Battle Armor (Modified)(Blue-gray primary color and navy blue secondary color)
GB-357 "Gratia" Blaster
MP-FRAB Mk. 22 retrieved on Tatooine (look at Kill or be Killed)
Jump Boost Attachment for shoes from Nar Shaddaa
A180 Blaster Pistol
A140 Heavy Blaster Rifle with removable stock and 4x magnification scope
CZ-6100 Handheld Rocket Launcher
EMP Grenades
Jump Pack
JDF-1457 Prototype Double Barrel Repeating Blaster (the gun in above picture)
Knuckle Plate Vibro Blade
Type-15s Silenced Carbine

Ship: Whitecloak Fighter named "The Centurion"

***Skills***​

Jaycob is a trained marksman and talented smuggler. If it really hits the fan, he is also great at man-on-man firefights and mediocre at melee combat. He is the biggest threat from long range.Very agile and makes use of his rocket boots. He is a smart fighter so he will fall back if needed to.

***Missions***​

Kill or be Killed: Complete
Party Crashing: Complete
Mandalore Indomitus: Complete
Sand, Rancors, and Smugglers: Complete
Guarja Shipyards: Complete
Call the Banners: Complete
Diamond in the Mud: In progress
The Local Law: Complete

 

[Shalken]

Alright, so before I can approve this character for the Accord, you're going to need to expand on his backstory. Why isn't much known about his backstory? Though this would be an interesting to add as in character flavour, we as the readers would actually like to know about his backstory.

Also, though you list the section as both personality and backstory, you haven't touched on his actual personality. What is he like? What does he like and hate, what does he want? What is his motive? Why is he joining the Accord? Stuff like that. Take a look at other character sheets if you're having trouble.

 

[JDF]

Thanks for the great feedback! I've touched a little bit more on personality traits but I've come to a dead end with his backstory. I was picturing a dynamic character that would reveal more about himself as the story progresses. But, do you think the personality section is at least pretty ok?

 

[Shalken]

That's actually a good point, you at least cover the minimum word limit requirement for his backstory (and personality too for that matter) and a bunch of other people update their character's backstories as they RP. Definitely an interesting way to do it.

The personality is pretty good, it's not very in-depth but it works. I like the list of pros and cons that you added, it's good to get a feel for his personality at a quick glance. Everything looks good!

EDIT: another note, would you think he fits better into the Crucible or the Specter Cell? The Crucible has more of a focus on up front combat, whereas the Specter Cell is quite stealthy, basically the spy division.

 

[JDF]

That's actually a good point, you at least cover the minimum word limit requirement for his backstory (and personality too for that matter) and a bunch of other people update their character's backstories as they RP. Definitely an interesting way to do it.

The personality is pretty good, it's not very in-depth but it works. I like the list of pros and cons that you added, it's good to get a feel for his personality at a quick glance. Everything looks good!

EDIT: another note, would you think he fits better into the Crucible or the Specter Cell? The Crucible has more of a focus on up front combat, whereas the Specter Cell is quite stealthy, basically the spy division.

I think he would fit better in The Crucible
EDIT: What are the main objectives of each section?

 

[Shalken]

I think he would fit better in The Crucible
EDIT: What are the main objectives of each section?

If by "section" you mean each division, then they ultimately all have the same goals and work together to accomplish them. We have a series of mission packs that usually everyone can join, though we may release some that are designed for each division in the future.

 

[jamessour]

Just a small note: you may want to increase his weight. At 6 ft, 140 pounds would make Jay SUPER thin and have little muscle and Or strength.

 

[JDF]

True

 

[Kori Buor]

@Jacob Flores character looks good, I'm just curious why he is choosing to join the Dominion after the Accord? Perhaps if you could update his hip a little to explain that choice and what he's been up to?

 

[JDF]

Well, most of the missions in The Accord were based around fighting for the good of the people, so I thought this would be a good fit. Also, the Accord has been dead for a while

 

[Kori Buor]

So he wants to join the Dominion to protect people? Okay. Do you think you could add a short blurb into his bio about what he did after the Accord and why Jaycob decided to join the Mandalorian Dominion?

 

[JDF]

So he wants to join the Dominion to protect people? Okay. Do you think you could add a short blurb into his bio about what he did after the Accord and why Jaycob decided to join the Mandalorian Dominion?

Sure thing

 

[Kori Buor]

Sure thing

Alright let me know when you're ready for me to look over your additions!

 

[JDF]

Alright let me know when you're ready for me to look over your additions!

It doesn't have to be a super lengthy one right? I already put some thing to work off of.

 

[Kori Buor]

No, just a short blurb on why he chose to come to the Dominion.

 

[JDF]

Alright, ready.

 

[Kori Buor]

Alright, looks good.

 

[JDF]

Awesome