Bretharr Bargall

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NAME: Bretharr Bargall
FACTION: Republic
RANK: Lieutenant in the Republic Navy.
SPECIES: Human.
AGE: 24
GENDER: Male
FORCE SENSITIVE: Ye

APPEARANCE: Bretharr, compared to many soldiers in the Navy was quite short. A midget almost if one could call him that. His rather small legs and arms make him seem weak and strange compared to the rest of the army. And they would be sort of right. His black eyes were relatively small and his black hair cut short. He seemed to have embraced the fact that he was small, and his body was practically doing the same thing. He neither looked the prettiest in the galaxy, nor the ugliest. However, you should never judge a book by its cover, as whilst the relatively weak and small body portrays a weak man, and physically he might be, but he's still a very good soldier through other means.

ATTRIBUTES: Bretharr is a weak person due to his body shape, he couldn't lift any heavy weapons like large blaster cannons. He also couldn't go round sprinting everywhere for long periods of times, though Bretharr is trying to work on this in the gym. However, his main strength was this very same speed. He was lightning fast, and could outrun many things. Whilst he didn't like to retreat, he could easily do so with his speed. He was also very intelligent, able to see the logic in most things. Through this, he also had a decent awareness, able to notice things very small in importance for many, but not for him.

PERSONALITY: Bretharr could easily brush off on people as arrogant and a know it all, talking about things as if they were the simplest things in the world, and annoyed when people doesn't get things when they are (to him at least) very simple. He is also quite sarcastic and difficult to like for people new to him, especially women who mainly saw him as difficult and not worth the time. However, those who knew him well knew he was actually a kind man, jokey and quite funny. He had a few close friends, but not much else.


BIOGRAPHY: He was born to an irrelevant and unimportant family in a small colony in the Outer Rim. He worked as a farmer in the colony, and received very little education, with there being no real education in the colony. He lived a happy life on the farm, under good care from his parents, and gained a small group of tight friends. One day however, the Exiles came and burnt the colony to the ground, massacring the population. Bretharr watched this occur, however, he managed to escape on the only ship which the colony held, as well as the other children.

They escaped and travelled to Dantooine. There, he was adopted by a farmer and continued his life as a farm boy. The farmer was impressed by Bretharr's speed and agility and began to try and develop these skills. On the grassy plains of Dantooine, he found plenty of space to run and soon his speed was almost unprecedented on Dantooine. As he approached a former ruin when he was running one day, he felt a strange... Presence. He didn't know what it was and when he asked the farmer, he didn't know. He kept going back and exploring, finding more ruins and the strange presence continuing to grow. However he ignored it eventually and went back to his duties.

When he turned 23, and the farmer talked about the Sith growing in power, Bretharr remembered what happened to his colony. Then, he finally told the farmer the truth about his background, about the destruction of the colony and death of his parents. There, the farmer talked about the Republic and its military which had the opportunity to contest the Sith. There, he was set. He would be a soldier in the RJF, now GAR. He set off with a blaster pistol and a small number of credits. A commission to the rank of Lieutenant in the Navy was bought by Bretharr, and he began training. He quickly passed training with a squad in the army, and showed great tactical awareness in war simulations. Now he is awaiting assignment to a vessel in the Republic Navy...

SKILLS: Bretharr was a decent enough shot, not the greatest marksmen in the Navy. He can be strict but morale boosting, pushing his men on constantly and driving them to victory or death. He is also an excellent strategist, able to command forces, small and large with distinction, and a feared opponent in war simulations by other GAR officers. His skill with melee weapons was very poor however, and wouldn't stand very long against anyone in close combat.

GEAR: GAR Naval Uniform
4C Blaster Pistol = http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/4c-blaster-pistol.76702/
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Logan

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You should link one of the blasters from the tech boards in his gear instead of simply listening "standard issue blaster." the 4C is a pretty good one.

Pending this small update consider yourself..

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