Thanks for offering your help. I could definitely use it. I don't know if this would be ok, but when I finish creating my first character I can send you his info and you can critique it for me?
That could definitely work. The Asian theme goes well with the age of the temple; the Tython monastery would've been around since the Force Wars, and the little bit of canon information and imagery that's available for that time shows a very Japanese-like culture.
If you ask Adena, she may be able to add in a Jedi statue or two somewhere, just to Star Wars it up a bit more.