I should note that I made an edit on my post for the Battle of Telos; it doesn't really change anything, just gives better clarification for why Arno did what he did. Cheers! :P
I love the artwork in your DOTR thread!! The StarCraft zealot guys are bad ass! I'm in and out at posts at the moment. Are you making a faction based around those wrist saber wielding armoured protoss?
I must say, your write-ups, regardless of whether or not it's for a character or a faction, are always incredibly detailed and an interesting read. Same goes for your latest character, Slaed Taevarion, too. Big ups.