YTTA "Elysium" Explorer Buggy

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N/A, but can be.
Ownership: Evlyn.​
Intent: The Elysium is used for transporting cargo, scrap, small animals, rare plants and weapons. The Elysium is mainly used for exploration of terrain and caves.​
Model: YTTA "Elysium" Explorer Buggy​
Size: 9m in lenght, 3m in height, 4m in width​
Weight: About 3 metric tonnes, with passengers and cargo filled up it is up to 4,7 tonnes​
Armor Rating: It can shrug off light fire and take a couple hits from heavy weapons but after that, it goes down.​
Shield Rating: It has a weak shield that protects it against derby and small rocks​
Propulsion: Old-fashioned combustion engine and tank tracks​
Armament/Equipment: The Elysium's "legs" can fold up so that it is compact. The Elysium carries whatever the owner might require it to transport. It has one small laser turret at the top​
Description: The Elysium is made for exploration and scavenging of abandoned or lone planets. It can travel up to 60mph/96kmh.​
 

Darasuum

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The bold letters. Triggered.

Also, this isn't really special or unique in my opinion so it could be classified as "generic tech"
 

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Ah, sorry bout the bold thingy. It kind of glitched. And Outlander suggested I should make a write-up so that others can use it.
 

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Ah, sorry bout the bold thingy. It kind of glitched. And Outlander suggested I should make a write-up so that others can use it.
Generic tech can be used by other people too. It's only a tiny bit more promotion imo.
 

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Alright so should I just keep it here or delete it?
 

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You could wait awhile and just leave it here since you went through the trouble. I don't think you can delete it and it counts as one of the two tech submissions in a two month period. Just let the mods/authorities look at it, deem it worthy or if they see it as generic tech they'll move it to player workshop accordingly.
 

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I would flesh out the intent section a little more. Why is it needed, what role does it fill that's missing, etc.
 
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